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Posted: 13 years ago

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Par story kahan hai ?

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sherdilali

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Posted: 13 years ago

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good work and plz complete it soon

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Posted: 13 years ago

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I have posted some scenes now u all can continue with that

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Good job. continue soon 👏

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ramarathore

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Posted: 13 years ago

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continued:

scene7 IN BEUREU it's morning time every body is busy in thier work and even waiting for and ACP. same time ACP enters in to beureu he is looking very furious and a little impatient also.AS if waiting for someone.

EVERYBODY(accept daya and anhijeet)-good morning...sir...

ACP-abhijeet nahi aaya abhi tak.

FREDy-nahi sir. unka phone aaya tha ...wo aur daya sir bus aate hi honge.(a bit hesitate to ask) sir...wo

ACP-kya hai FREDY

(Abhijeet AND Daya enters in beureu and greets ACP sir.)

ACP-ABHIJeet daya tum dono itni der se kyun aaye ho.haan pehle se hi case ki itni tension hai aur ab tum dono...(he is looking furious)

ABHIJEET(tries to console hum)-sir hum...wo ak informer se hi milne gaye the.is case ke sinsile mai.

ACP-acha...to kya bataya tumhare informer ne...

DAYA-kuch khass nahi sir bas wahi purane khabaren...

ACP- daya tum sachin aur kajal un sab per najar rakho jo iss case se jude hai.FREDDY tum aur vivek jaa ker in sub ki kundli nikalwao.

everybody-yes sir...and leaves for their work

ABHiJEET-sir mujhe aap se kuch baat karni hai...

ACP-isse pehle mujhe tum se ek jaruri baat karni hai...

Abhijeet tum to jante hi ho ke do din baad wo high authority meeting hone walli hai..ABHIJEEET NODES...(acp in a angry and suspicious tone)Abhijeet kahin tum to wo officer nahi ho jissne cid ke sath gaddari ki hai...

ABHIJEET(shocked)-sir...sir aap ye kya kah rahe hain main main bhala...

ACP(angry voice)-to phir abhijeet wo 😡kidnapper ab tak pakda kyun nahi gaya haan...abhijeet kahi tumne opposition se paise nahi liye...hain na(abhijeet standing still with a shoced expression)

ABHIJEET-sir...😭

ACP(now bursting all his anger)-abhijeet...ye kya si ...sir laga rakha hai haan Abhijeet mujhe wo minister kisi bhi haal me kal tak apne saamne chahiye...samjhe...

ABHIJEEt was standing still with his face down...

then ACP AGAIN bursted and

ACP-abhijeet...

he slapped abhijeet hard abhijeet was still on acp's this kind of reaction suddenly...

freddy and vivek also saw this and were also stunned...

Abhijeet without any word left the beureu...

Acp goes inside his cabin...

SCENE8 abhijeet in his car driving in full speed...

ABHIJEET9to himself)-acp shab aesa kaise kar sakte hain...mere saath wo humare sir hain magar...abhijeet take's out a letter from his pocket and put's it in his car dashboard...)

scene9 in beureu

DAYA and others arrive in beureu they saw fredy and vivek in shocked expression and daya asked...

DAYA-kya baat hai freddy vivek aise shakale kyun bana rakhi hain...??????

FREDY-sir...sir...wo

DAYA-kya hua fredy...

VIVEK-...sir...wo...jub hum sabke bare mein pata karke beureu lote to hume dekha ki...

since then ACP's phone ring he picks it up and becomes very happy after talking to the person he immediately leaves the beureu

without noticing or looking at anyone.

SACHIN-sir ye acp shab ko kya hogaya bina kuch kahe bina kuch bataye hi nakal gaye ...

DAYA-haan sachinwo to hai...khair vivek tum bataoo ki fir kya hua...

vivek tells him about the whole scenario what they have seen...

DAYA nd all are stunned...

KAJAL(in a shocked state of mind)-sir AcP sir aisa...kaise...

DAYA-najane abhijeet par kya biti hogi...mai abhi use phone lagata hun...

daya tries to call ABHiJEET but abhijeet didn't pick daya's phone ...daya gets more nd more worried...about ABHIJEET nd acps behaviour...

he orders everyone to go to their homes and he himself moves to his home...

the day ends...

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Hey Its Amaging:-) superb Job rama:-):-)JUS LOVED IT:-):-) Now I cant wait 4 next part of the story so PLEASE continue soon ok:-):-) ITS VERY INTERESTING :-):-)

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sherdilali

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Posted: 13 years ago

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great job rama story is too good 👏buht suspense hey cant wait plz complete it as soon as possible

Edited by sherdilali - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

great story👍🏼

bt do updation in ur ist post

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GIRL_SHERLOCK

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Nice Story!!
Complete it fast.

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ramarathore

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Posted: 13 years ago

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scene 10 in beureu again- everybody is present in beureu accept ABHIJEET and ACP.ALL are looking worried and a little impatient also.DAYA is continously trying to call some1.AND is very worried too. FREDY-ACP sir aur abhijeet sir dono hi nahi aaye abhi tak aur DAYA sir bhi pareshaan lag rahe hain.

SACHIN-haan FREDY.DAYA sir lagatar kiso ko phone mila rahe hain.

KAJAL-sir hosakta hai ki DAYA sir ABHIJEET sir ko hi phone mila rahe ho.

SACHIN-haan ho sakta hai kal jo kuch hua galat hua ACP sir ko unke sath aisa nahi karna chahiye tha.

VIVEK-sir DAYA sir se jake puche ABHIJEEt sir ke bare me...

FREDY-haan!puchte hain

(everybody moves 2 DAYA)

FREDY-sir...

DAYA(irritated tone)-kya hai FREDY...

FREDY-sir...sir vo ABHIJEET SIR

(DAYA bangs his table in irritation and says...)

DAYA-ye abhijeet ek to kal se apna phone nahi utha raha hai.nahi khud call kar raha hai.ACP sir bhi najane achanak se itna ghussa kyun ho gaye..

(since then ACP enters the beureu and says...

ACP-kya hua daya maine kispe ghussa kiya hai haan..????

DAYA-sir...vo ABHIJEET...

ACP-kya hua DAYA kya kiya maine ABHIJEET ke saath...

Everydody is stunned on ACP's this answer they never thought that ACP would take it so camly...

ACP(confused)-hua kya hai tum sab log mujhe aise kyun dekh rahe ho...jaise maine koi gunah ker diya ho...aur ye ABHIJEET kAHAN hai...

DAYA(daya is angry with acp's calm and no worring reaction and in anger he says)-sir kal aap hi ne to use...

(DAYA ACP ko batane wala hota hai ki kal VIVEK AUR FREDY un sab ko kya bataya ki tabhi MR.ANIL KUMAR BUREU ka under aate hain.sub unhe dekh kar chauk jate hain aur...)

ACP-sir aap ...aap ko to un logo ne kidnap kar liya tha na...

ANIL-HAAN ACP!lekin aaj subah jab meri aakhe khuli to mai jungle me tha mai wahan se sidha yahan tmhare paas aa gaya.

DAYA-sir aap thik to hain na...(anil kumar nodes in yes)...sir waise inlogo ne aapko chod kyun diya..

FREDY-sir hosakta hai ki jo wo karna chahte ho woh ho gaya ho..

ACP-lekin FREDY yahi to sochne ki baat hai ki wo log karna kya chahte the...(ythinking)...akhir unka maksad hai kya...khair filhaal ye achi baat hai ki ANIL KUMAR ji aap gilkul thik hai...(to team)FREDY VIVEK SACHIN tum log anil ji ko lekar unke sath jayo aur 24 ghante unke sath hi rehne samajhe mujhe kal us meeting se pehle aur koi natak nahi chahiye hai...now leave.

they all leave saying yes sir...

(now to DAYA)-DAYA Tum kya kahe rahe the ...aur ABHIJEET kyun nahi aaya abhi tak...

DAYA was going to tell ACP everything but then the beureu phone rings...

KAJAL-picks up yhe phone and...

KAJAL-ye kya bol rahe ho...tum...kahanpe...acha hum aate hai tum wahi rehene...

ACP-kya hua KAJAL...(kajal as silent)...KAJAL main tum se puch raha huin kya hua kiska phone tha...

KAJAL(shocked)-sir pune ke pass ek sunsaan raste per ek accident hua hai ...aur...wo gadi...

DAYA-wo gadi kya kajal...

KAJAL-sir wo gadi ...ABHIJEET sir ki hai...

ACP and DAYA-shocked-kya!!!!!!!!!!

KAJAL-haan sir usme ABHIJEET sir ka badge ,aur ID card mila hai sir...

ACP-OMG!!!!

DAYA-kajal ABHIJEET theek to hai na...

KAJAL-sir abhijeet sir gadi me nahi the

ACP and DAYA-kya...

they all leave 2 that place whre ABHIJEET's car was found...

DAYA and KAJAL searching the area and the car while ACP interrogating the man who called them...

ACP-tum yahan kya kar rahe the...

MAn-sir wo main yahan pass me rehte hun ye shaant jagah hai koi yahan aata jata nahin hai issliye mai aksar yahan khumne aajayta...hun par jub aaj me mai yahan aaya to maine dekha ki ye gaadi yahan thi isme koi bhi nahi yha isliye muche shak huya aur main ne aap ko bula liya.

ACP-acha to tum ne kisi ko aate jate ya yahan ass pass kisi aadmi ko nahi dekha...

MAN-nahi sir.

ACP-acha thik hai tum jayo...

MAN-jee sir...

DAYA called ACP and showed him...

DAYA-sir ye dekhiye sir is steering wheel par bahot saara khoon hai sir...aur yahan darwaza per bhi sir...

ACP-haan DAYA!ek kaam karo ye sara khoon utha lo aur fornsic lab me bhej do...(thinking)...najane ye abhijeet kahan hain...

since then KAJAL found something in the cars dashboard.

KAJAL-sir..

ACP-haan KAJAL...

KAJAL-sir ye dekhiye sir yahanpe ek envelope hai sir aap ke naam per...

ACP(shoched)-mere naam per dikhao jara...

ACP -shayad ye ABHIJEET ne mere liye choda ho...

ACP-gaadi ko cid garage bhej do...

or hum log beureu chalte hain...

everybody leaves for beureu

HERE ACP got a call from DCP that now MR.ANIL is found so there should be no mistake in security in tommorows meeting...

NOw it's hard time here ABHIJEET is missing and they have 2 prepare a security plan also.

ACP decides that they will search for ABHIJEET AFTER this meeting.DAYA was very much angry with ACP's decision and even more abhijeet missing and ACP's act 1 day before was making him uncomfortable.but he cannoy leave ACP also.

THE meting was held and was successfuly completed also.

NOW whole CID team accept ABHIJEET was present in the beureu...salunkhe was also present with the dna reports

ACP-salunkhe DNA report ka kya hua...kya wo khoon...

SALUN-BOSS...wo(a little hesitate to tell)

DAYA-sir pls sir bataye na...

SLUN-DAYA wo ...wo khoon ABHIJEET ka hi hai...steering wheel se jo mila wo bhi aur jo darwaza mila wo bhi...

EVERYBODY-KYA!!!!!!!😭

sorry...😭

to stop it now but continue it later...

again a BIG sorry...

salunkhe-haan aur us envelope per ABHIJEET ke hi finger prints hai...aur ABHIJEET ki gadi si aur koi finger prints nahi mile hain sub CID officers ke hi hain...

DAYA(coming back from shock state)-dr.saab kya ABHIJEET ki gadi se koi ched chaad ki gayi thi...jisse gadi itne zor se pad se ja kar takrayi...

SALUN-nahi DAYA AbHIJEET ki gadi se koi ched chaad nahi ki gayi thi...yahan tak ki breaks bhi bilkul sahi salaamat the...aur gadi kA A.C bhi theek tha...koi behoshi ki dawa nahi milayi gayi thi...(salunkhe answers DAYA's question before he asks.)

ACP-to phir ABHIJEET ka accident huya kaise...jahan tak hum sub use jante hai wo gadi jyada speed par to kabhi nahi chalata..aur uski driving bhi controlled hai...(suspicious).to phir ye accident huya kaise...???????

DAYA-DR.saab kya aap wo letter laye hain jo ABHIJEET ne ACP sir ke liye choda tha..(salunkhe nods in yes)

ACP-SALUNKHE wo letter do...n

(SALUNKHE gives that letter 2 ACP.ACP Tells DAYA 2 read the letter but dAYA DOESN't TAKE IT telling that this letter is for you.)

ACP in anger reads that letter himself and he was in shock after reading the letter.everyone glances at each other.DAYA aske ACP about what is written in that letter.ACP gives that letter to DAYA and again asks him 2 read.daya bit hesitate to read but finally he starts reading the letter loudly so tthat everyone can hear it)

THE LETTER...

in letter it was written that...

TO...

ACP SIR...

sir aapko ye letter mil raha hai to shayad iska matlab hai ki mai is waqt aap subke saath nahi huin aur nahi main aapko wo baat bata paya.SIR jis din aapne mujhe phone karke kaha ki aap kal MUMBAI lot rahe hai usi din raat ko mujhe kidnapper ka phone aaya the sir usne ANIL KUMAR ji chodne ke liya mere saamne shirt rakhi ki agar mai apne ko uske hawale kar doon to wo unhe chod dega.sir usne mujhe yeh baat kisi ko bhi batane se mana kiya tha .isiliya maine ye baat DAYA ko bhi nahi bataye lekin maine faisla kiya ki main aap ko ye baat bata doonga,...

sir shayad kisi wajah se mai aapko ye baat nahi bata paya...isliye ye leter likha tha aap log meri chinta na kare...sir maine shayad jab letter ye aap padenge to apne aap ko unke hawale kar diya hoga...

sir shayad abhi tak to un logo ne mujhe maar bhi diya ho...sir aap un logo ko jarror dhundh li jiyega...

AUR haan sir DAYA aur baaki sub se kahiyega ki wo log roye na aap apna khyal rakhyiga sir ...aur haan sir pls DAYA ko sambhal lijiyega aap jaante hai use uska koi bharosa nahi hai.kuch bhi kar sakta hai wo..chaliye sir maine aap ke liye ek aur naya mission chod diya hai...ALL THE BEST SIR...SIR ek baat ka khyaal rakhna ki jo agla officer aaye use meri tarah short term memory loss ki bamari na ho warna wo bhi aap ko utna hi pare shaan karega sir jitna maine kiya...sir DAYA ka khyal rakhyega sir...good bye sir...

ABHIJEET...

(letter me likhi baato ko sunkar sub ki aakho me pani aa jata hai sub log apne aap ko sambhal nahi pate.ACP sir bhi apne cabin me chale jate hain.)

Edited by ramarathore - 13 years ago