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visrom

@visrom

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Posted: 14 years ago

#71

See Target CID means our CID team has to be in some kind of danger...such episodes are too frequent of late. You can show it in a better way.

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Bhavanab

@Bhavanab

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Posted: 14 years ago

#72

no I meant that it can simply be the CID team in danger right ?? needn't be the way they had shown it ... our interpretation of the word 'target' can be taken right ?? the plot will be the same CID in danger !!

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visrom

@visrom

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Posted: 14 years ago

#73

Yeah, but you need to show something as a reference episode here. This contest has some unique rules which can't be changed.😈 You can pick out one episode which is close to what you are writing.

I would honeslty give max marks to someone who can take an Aadamkhor Aadmi or Bhutiya Ladki and make it a fantastic thriller.

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Ravi

@Jurassic_Shark

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Posted: 14 years ago

#74

I had been going through the complete episode list in search of my pick last night and it's remarkable how the quality of the stories has gone from bad to worse since 2008. 😛 I think the very basic plot of certain episodes like Galli Cricket is so absurd that a proper remake cannot be done without making it 99.9% different from the original.

Finally closed in upon 2 episodes, will choose and start writing today. This will require a bit of research on my part, but there's the fun.

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visrom

@visrom

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Posted: 14 years ago

#75

Just do justice to the title, that will be enough, I guess.

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Nandini

@NandiniRaizadaa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: visrom
See Target CID means our CID team has to be in some kind of danger...such episodes are too frequent of late. You can show it in a better way.

Target CID had a good plot it can really be improved

What about CID under fire ? Is it improvable?

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visrom

@visrom

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Posted: 14 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: NandiniPS
Target CID had a good plot it can really be improved

What about CID under fire ? Is it improvable?

Yes...Target CID can be improved. One Asha era episode which was not 100% upto mark.

CID under fire can be improved and has already be done by Sunny. You can try it again.

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Nandini

@NandiniRaizadaa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#78

You know another Asha era episode which I dont like at all is that Bomb episode. A man makes bombs and asks his wife to blast them to kill pick pockets,

If I start rewriting CID under fire I will end up changing the story completely
Only the title will remain.

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visrom

@visrom

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Posted: 14 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: NandiniPS

You know another Asha era episode which I dont like at all is that Bomb episode. A man makes bombs and asks his wife to blast them to kill pick pockets,

If I start rewriting CID under fire I will end up changing the story completely
Only the title will remain.

Sure...there has to be a fire and CID team has to be stuck in it. That's what they showed in the promo, didn't they?