AANSOO pukaary...!!!(NEW VM at PG 148)!! - Page 14

Originally posted by: devangi123

so tell ur bro to shave the mostache and smile a little,over all he has a AWESOME SMILE!!!

Originally posted by: devangi123

hey GD, i was reading story number 2 of story contest 3-the case of stolen gold,sumhow i realised dat it was urs,and the last scene of dat story was same as first scene of ur story 'Adopted brother',am i right,vo story aapki hi thi na?

Originally posted by: gadhadada

DEBA... dis time mujahy laga kay kafi READERS isay pasand nahi karein gay... cz it XTRA EMMOTIONAL... magar najany kyun aik bhi JUMLA main EDIT nahi ker paya... halankay main chahta tha kay kuch EDIT ker dun... MAGAR!!!😉
😉khair ye tou mut kaho kay BRO ajnabi hain... he will be back soon😃... dekhna...👍🏼

Originally posted by: devangi123

oh...frget it,i know it was urs...btw can i know ur real name,only if u want,if u dnt its fine,ainvayi pooch rai hu.

Originally posted by: devangi123

how u get ideas for ur stor?i mean,how can u write dem so emotional dat d reader's eyer r filled wd tears?itna dard kaha se aata hai?

Originally posted by: debasree04

I know that he will come back very soon...I'm dying to see this...

Originally posted by: gadhadada

yaar... darasal main bauht BEEMAAR banda hun na... tou DARD aa jata hay😆... array bus kuch STORIES thori EMMOTIONAL hain... warna i m so HARSH person... i gave my SHADE in GAME OVER... zara bacha kay rehna mujha say😉