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sunny

@sunnyp1414

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#11

Remake CID under FIRE with new story and full caste. No corrections can be made in that episode.

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prabha.

@prabha.

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#12

Yep. CID UNDER FIRE could have been such an interesting story if it was remotely colse to what they tried to hype. This was a total crap, should have been rejected at the story level. However I still like that fire scene. Imagine if they added more drama to it, it would have been awesome. The art director and cameraman did such a fine job.

Edited by prabha. - 15 years ago

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#13

Ok, here goes -

Cannot comment on any episodes which lacked a back bone. Read - most of the recent episodes.

I'll take one episode - say, Abhijeet in Coma:

The episode started off with an encounter without any reason. The Qualis stopped at the building, CID team came up and just started firing.

Correction : They should have shown a solid reason for the firing. Say, there is a guy in the hospital, whom the criminals want to kill. The CID team gets information that someone is trying to kill this guy and try to catch them all. In the encounter Abhijeet gets shot.

Next : The doctor operates Abhijeet etc and in the operation theatre Abhijeet wakes up and says that he'll pretend to be in Coma.

Correction : While the operation is in progress, the criminals kidnap the doctor's family - because the CID team's attention is on Abhijeet. The CID team minus ACP go to doctor's house to see what has happened.

(In the meantime Abhijeet regains consciousness, ACP meets him alone and makes the plan of letting Abhijeet remain in coma. This part not revealed for sometime)

Daya and the rest of them come back to hospital and the story continues as was shown...doctor says Abhijeet is in coma etc etc.

Rest of it - as shown. yeah - remove that dialogue 'Abhijeet ne jaan boojhkar goli khaayi hai'.

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#14

Next one - Sr Insp Abhijeet.

1. Change the actress. Show a slightly mature lady.

2. Remove that one dialogue by Daya 'yeh memory loss, yeh sab ek naatak toh nahin'.

3. Abhijeet vanishes for sometime. No explanation. Correction : Abhijeet wants to get to the bottom of this mystery and tries digging up Siddharth's murder files. Paresh calls Abhijeet because he knows that Abhijeet is not the murderer and had kept quiet because he is scared of his step-father, so wants to ask Abhijeet to meet him somewhere but gets killed before he could meet Abhijeet.

4. How Abhijeet landed in that hotel 15 years back is unknown. Correction : Explain properly...ACP sees Abhijeet's photo on that file and gets details of where was Abhijeet 15 years back. He contacts Abhijeet's boss and finds out that Abhijeet was on an undercover mission when all this happened. The case was dropped when Abhijeet's boss explained to the authorities and the matter was hushed up as the undercover mission was a very serious one and had to be concealed from public view.

5.Remove that scene where Ms P goes and hugs Daya in front of everyone.

I don't remember more minute details as I've not seen this episode in the last 2 months. If I see it again, my memory will be refreshed.

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#15

CID under fire - ab main kya bataaon....it lacks a basic back bone.

It should've been something like - a few people are kidnapped and the CID team gets clues of the glass factory from the one laash that they got - because the demands of the kidnappers were not met, so they were killing the captives one by one.

The CID team enters the glass factory and find that the kidnappers and captives are all gone. Suddenly one guy sets fire to the factory and runs off. The CID team escape due to the presence of mind of one of them - say Vivek's heroic efforts or something.

((do read prev pages too)

Edited by visrom - 15 years ago

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auntyno1

@auntyno1

Navigator

Posted: 15 years ago

#16

After the Freddy in jewellery shop scene, I was expecting Freddy to pull himself up and forget his fears (He was not afraid to die in Khatra Chemical Bomb last scene) and for once save the entire team from fire by risking his life. Of course he should come to no major or permanent harm.

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zerry123

@zerry123

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: visrom
5.Remove that scene where Ms P goes and hugs Daya in front of everyone.

That one really hurt all of us, right Visrom? 😉 But seriously, it looked ridiculous...

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prabha.

@prabha.

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#18

Yeah it did. I was really angry and it looked horrible to say the least.

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SAGNIKA

@Shagnika

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: prabha.
Yeah it did. I was really angry and it looked horrible to say the least.

Looked at daya sir?? He was just so uncomfortable n embarressed!!!! Ufff....

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Tanzila Ahmed

@Tanza

Navigator

Posted: 15 years ago

#20

why is nobody talking bout the episode...I don't correctly remember the name....'The Don's Revenge' or something like that!.....did u like the episode? It was the most disgusting one in my eyes.
Firstly, they started with the Don's people throwing rings on CID guy's dummys. What's the reason of showing such a scene? why would they throw rings!
Secondly, they showed the Don can mimic all the CID guys....how? He was never caught before. May be he has heard ACP Sir's voice....but also Abhijeet! That's a little weird.
Thirdly, when ACP suddenly gets the gun and points that on his face, ACP tells him to sing on girl's voice! Why on the earth will he do that! That's ridiculous and not his type!
Fourthly, Abhijeet and Daya suddenly appears like 'hindi movie heros' with breaking a window....and they stars fighting with horrible sounds! why would they fight so long when they have guns? why waste energy?
well, about correcting the story, I would never have chosen such a bad story....But if I had, then 1. I would have chosen any other guy with perfect personality for the Don character.
2. On the first scene, thay would have been practising shooting, instead of throwing rings on the dummies.
3. The Don didn't have mimicked Abhijeet's voice...cuz its pretty weird that he heard Abhijeet and remembered his voice!
4. ACP would not have told him to sing! Rather he'd force him to confess
5. Daya would not have come flying with the bike.....and they woooould not have fought with horrible sounds behind....and I'd put the fight a little shorter.
6. I'd have changed Divyana's wardrobe too!

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