The Case of a disguised killer....

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CID BUREAU'

Everyone in the bureau was sitting together and discussing about some important matter. Then ACP tells that the city is under high risk. It sounds like at any time attack by terrorists is possible . He says that the Mumbai police is seeking their help in vigilance so acp alerts everyone and says to be careful and be alert. He assigns everyone different tasks and asks them to do their duty under the name of operation vigilance .later all will disperse.

Suddenly they gets a call from mudisland area that a man was found dead body in a very suspicious manner. So our team rushes to the spot except daya. They were going in the qualis on the way the traffic was heavy and they were to slow down . Vivek was drving the car and acp freddy tashaa and acp at back seat. Somehow vivek manages the traffic and they starts on the way abhijeeth sees a person driving karizma wearing a black coat and helmet but doesn't pay much attention. finally reaches the spot. They found the dead body in a very bad condition fully bruised.

Acp: tasha , freddy search karo kuch na kuch milega is admi ke bare mein.

Freddy: sir yeh to major girish hein (finds out his identity by id card)

Taasha: Sir inke jeb mein se goa ka tickets miley ..

Abhijeeth : shayad goa jaa rahe hain. Par koi ek major ko kyon marega?😲

Acp: wahi hame dekhana padega ..vivek tum body ko forensic bhejo..

Vivek: yes sir.

Acp : yeh daya ka phone kyon nahi ho rah hein?theeke ham bureau jaate hain aur frnsic report keliye wait karenge.

In bureau:

Abhi; sir, is major kya kasoor hoga ise mar dal diya gaya?

Acp: lagtha hai koi is se badla lene chatha hain.

In mean while phone rings and it was salunkhe calling for report.

Acp,tasha, vivek , freddy abhi starts to fnsic and meanwhile daya joins.

In forensic

Salunkhe : lagtha hai kise ne ise pehle ghayal kiya aur mar dala..

freddy: dr taarika aap ka kya kyal hein aap kya kahengi..

abhi: dr taarika aap hame peeche mud kar kyun khadi hein ? aur aap kuch bata sakthi hei iseke bare mein?😊😃

Daya: dr taarika aap chup kyun hai ? kuch toh bath kariye..😲

Dr salunkhe: yeh who hothi toh bath karegi.. yeh toh..😳

Before dr completes his sentence she turns around and says

Dr.niyati.:Yeh toh dr. niyati hein taarika nahi' and smiles..😉😊

Daya:????

Niyati: haan taarika 15 days leave mein hai aura cp sahib ne is case keliye salunkhe ko ek aur se madath lene ko kaha aur mujhe bulaya gaya' by the way is ke maut ghayal se wajah se nahi balki cureent shock ki wajh se hue hain..

Acp: current schok?😲

Niyati: Haan ise current shock peeth mein di gayi hain aur uska nishan hain..

Abhi: waah apne toh kaamal kar diya .. aap batha sakthe hain ki iska mauth kab hua?

Dr n: may around 2 hrs ago.

Abhi; toh murderer kuch aur suraag chooda salunkhe?

Dr s: nahi abhi is eke alawaa koi sabut nahi hain hamarey paas ..

Daaya: lagtha hain khooni bahut challak hain..

Abhi: koi bath nahi ham use se bhi chaalak hai..

Acp: chalo investigation major ke ghar mein se shuru karte hein..

They reaches majors house and founds that their family was weeping but their duty was to investigate.. asks that whether they knew anyone who was aginst him. The family replies that major dnt has any enemies.. but major is the one who protects the country may be get some information he might have been killed.. the team cant ask more ques due to situation and leaves..

Acp asks freddy vivek to go to majors office and get information of him.. they goes their and comes to the bureau

Fredddy: sir yeh major ke paas important information tha ..kuch papers is liye inhe maar diya gaya..

Vivek: par sir goa jaana inka kaam nahi tha sirr'

Acp: lagtha hain kuch holidays keliye gaye honge..

Taasha: sir mein ne goa ke saare hotels ko major photo ko fax kiya par kise hotel mien bhi who nahi stay ki..

Abi: shyad wahan unke rishtey daar honge..

In meanwhile taash phone rings and she gets information that a man was suicided in the andheri area.

Daya, abhi ,tasha, freddy leaves for andheri..

They found their a dead body hanged.. they rolls it down and starts investigation

Daya: yeh toh navy ka officer lagtha hain iske id card ..

Abhi: navy officer??

Fredy : laghtha hai khud khushi kar liya

Abhi: nahi agar yeh suicide karna chatha hain toh yahan tak aane ki jarurath nahi..

Daya: boss kuch toh gad bad hain.. postmortem ke liye le chalet hain

Dr S: arey ek laash ka hi mystery nahi solve hua aur doosara aagaya ??

Abhi: kya kare ?? kabhi kaabhi assa hotho hainn

Freddy: yeh toh suicide hain

Dr.n. nahi yeh murder hain..

Daya???

Dr.n; yes it is a murder ' kyon ki ise bhi pehle ghayal kiya aur hang kiya..

Abhi: kya?par nishaan kaha bhi nahi hai..

DR.n : haan ' par iske bones galath nahi bathathey .. iske uuper kuch blanket daalkey kuch lakdi se khoob pithayi kii aur baad mein hang kiya..

The team leaves fnsic and starts investigation from navy office ..

In the bureau taasha abhi and daya were there.

Taasa: abhi sir.. yeh officer bhi kuch secret kaam mein hain '. Aur inke family us mein gaye hein 3 months pehle..

Abhi: good job taasha..

Daya: boss mamla gad bad lag raha hein..

Acp: haaan daya sab gad bad hein'(suddenly enters)

Taasha: sir kya hua??

Acp: mujhe mssg aaya hein us khooni se ..

Daya: kya?

Acp: yeh mssg hai padlo khud pad lo daya..it was written that " U cant stop my work .. u cant catch me till I finish my work and dnt worry too much there are still 3 murders are yet to be done .. stay cool '. If u work so much u will soon get tired' no worry ' I will just kill only 3 persons ..so stay tuned.. dnt worry I wil give information time to time.. UDAY KRANTHI'"

Abhi: sir iski yeh himaath hame challenge kar raha hey?

Daya: ek baar milne do use ..

Taasha: sir hame uski maksath jaana hain tab hum usse pakad sakthe hein.

Vivek: sir, yeh mssg ek cell phone se aaya hain aur who number use mien nahi hain ' lagtha haein yeh who sim bhi kuch fake naam se hain..

Daya: haan bhulgaya sir.. kal subah meri mobile khaarb ho gayi aur mera nayi number hain 9848032919. plz note kijiye..

Acp: theeke par kaise kaharab ho gaya?? Mein raastey se jaa rah tha aur mobile pe bath kar raha tha suddenly ek ladka ka accident honi walithi bein use bachaya aur beech mein meri mobile gir gayai.. aur tooth gayi..

Koi bath nahi..

nxt minute phone rings and informs that there was a huge fire in the city godown and a body was found there burnt.. this was the call from Mumbai police to help investigation

vivek, daya, taasha, freddy , goes to the spot and finds the body in a bad condition..

daya: ise koi jaanthe hain asks to the people..

but no one can recognize him..

taasha: body boori tarah se jal gayi hain..

freddy: yeh accident toh nahi lagtha..

daya: Ise pm ke liye lay chalo kuch suraag mil jayega..

vivek searches there and founds a half burnt paper card in which it was written pradeep.

.and body sent to pm

Daya gets a call from abhi saying that to come to andheri east to some house where acp was also there..daya and rest team arrives there.. a girl welcomes them warmly and asks them to come inside..

Acp introduces the girl as srilekha and tells that she is his close friend's daughter and she is working in airforce as an officer rank is flight lieutenant ..

Srilekha: acp uncle aapke officers toh bemisaal hai ' kasie bhi case ko bhi acchi tarah se investigate kar sakhte hain..

Daya: yeh toh hamari kaam hain '

Abhi; waise hi aap akele rehthey hain?

Sri: nahi mein aur mera bahi rehthey hain'. Par bhai toh kabhi kabhi ghar aatha hai unhe kaam jyada hotha hain.. who ek major hain na..

Abhi: oh yeh toh achhii bath hain..

Taasha: laghta hai aapko award miley hain na iaf mien?

Sri; haan par apko kaise patha?

Taasha: mein paper mein padhi thi..

Sri: theeke sab aaye mein khana parosthi huein..

She serves dinner for everyone and later they were talking.. daya tells acp about the fresh case of burnt man . acp feels very bad and thinks of the words of the killer..and starts talking about that ' sri says that the killer seems to be very sharp .. but she says agin that cid is sharper than killer..acp agrees to it..

She was just getting up and suddenly feels dizziness and she sits on the sofa to prevent falling.. then

Abhi: sri kya hua is everything ok..

Sri. Haan sir mien theek hu..

Acp: achanak kya hua beta tumhe ?

Sri: kuch nahi uncle kal raath thoda late soi ise liye..

Daya: toh thoda rest lena ham jaathe han agar koi jagurart padi toh call karna..

Sri: theeke sir..

All leaves her house..

In the forensic

Everyone was waiting for result then

Dr.S : yeh bathana bahut muskil hai ki iska face reconstruct nahi ho sakhtha ..

Dr.N : ise toh bahut boori tarah se jalaya gaya..

And asks daya wat abt the evidence they got half burnt..

Daya: mein toh bhool hi gaya'

And shows the half burnt paper.

Everyone sees carefully but can't retrive anything except the name pradeep.

Taasha looks it with magnifying glasses and finds out that it was a symbol half burnt..

Vivek also looks at it and he rushes and brings a mirror and puts it near half burnt symbol and says yeh kya?

Acp: kya hua vivek?

Viv: sir yeh toh Mumbai police ki hai..

Freddy: sir yeh kahi Mumbai police ki inspector pradeep toh nahi hain naa.?

Abhi: haan sir Mumbai plice inspctr pradeep hain aur ham use kal hi mil chuke hai .. hamari operation ke baarey mein bath huei thi..

Daya: my god..

Suddenly taasha gets a mmsg.. saying that.." hey cid .. dnt think too much.. this was also my plot.. I killed him' yes he is inpctr pradeep who discussed with u ystrday.. dnt worry .. yet there are stll 2 more murders to happen ' try hard.. uday kranti.."

Acp: oh my god'. Yeh kya ho gaya'

Abhi: sir ham ise chodenge nahi..

Vivek: sir yeh sim mein track kiya ki yeh mssg sim fake name se hai aur . yeh sim hamri area mein hi hain.. lagtha hai kissi dstbin mei..

acp: mujhe nahi laghthe use sim dhoonne kuch sabuth milega.. daya abhi tum jayo aur us pradeep ke family se bath karo..

abhi and daya finds that pradeep's wife divourced him few months ago and she was living somewhere in London..and he was living alone..

acp: arey yeh kya? Us navy officer ki wife us mein hain aur iske divorced wife London mien hame is case mein help koaun karega?

Abhi: sir koi bath nahi hame dhoondege ..

Daya gets a call from area near Mumbai high commission..

All cid members goes ther'and finds crowd fully surrounding a car..with the car horn making hunk ther..

Acp: use car mein kuch hai..

Abhi.. makes the crowd disperse.. and finds a lady inside a car..and he makes the lady head away from steering and finds her dead..

He comes to know from her id card that she was a secondary secretary commission

Abhi.. informs the same to acp.. again with less attention he sees a karizma black bike wearing black jacket going on the highway wearing a helmet.. but he doesn't may much attention..

All were searching for some clues there..and srilekha comes to the spot in a car after seeing crowd she was worried and approaches and overwhelms after finding cid team there..

She tells acp that she came out for a shopping and seeing the crowd she came there..

Acp asks her whether she came along with her brother she says no.. and after sometime she leaves..

Acp and others take the body to bureau.. and asks salunkhe to do something..

Acp: salunkhe mujhe is baar achi result yaani kuch surag milni chahiye..

Dr.S: arey yeh kya aap log oth lash hi laash lekar aa rahey hain.. akhir mein thak gaya hoon..

Acp; itne mein thak gaye? Agar tum is laash se suraag nahi nikali toh ek aur laash yaha aa jayegi bahut jaldi..

Dr.N: sir yeh aap kya keh rahe hai?

Abhi; sir theek keh rahey hain hame dhmaki aaye hai ek aur khoon hone waale hai aur hame use rokhan hoga ..

Dr n; dnt worry sir ham kuch nikalenge..

She says that the lady was killed bcz of poison..aur use jabardasti se pilaya gaya hai..

She finds a small piece of paper from her dress and she gives to acp .. acp after checking says that it seems to be office paper ..

Abhi closely examines and says : sir yeh paper koi normal paper nahi hai sir mujhe lagtha hai yeh ek confidential paper hai jise ham bahut secret mission ya operation ke bare me likhthey hain wahi paper hain sir .. iske paper color aur quality se assa laghtha hai..

Freddy : par yeh paper .. I mean tukda yaha kya kar raha hein?

Abhi: mujhe samajme aa raha hein' sir oh my goddd''

Acp : kya hua?

Abhi: sir yeh kuch badla ka case nahi hai sir yeh toh bahut serous hai..

Taasha: par bath kya hai sir?

Abhi: sir yeh ek terrorist hai aur yeh patha laga raha hein ki kaun kaun ke paas secrets hain .. aur yeh jaa raha hain us officers ke paas aur unse hey secrtes churane .. churane ke baad bas bath khatam..

Viv: oh' yeh toh bahut boori bath hei..

Suddenely acp gets a msssg.. from daya mobile and after looikg it he was shocked..

Abhi asks him wat happened acp gives the mobile to read it and falls down..thinking of daya..

Even abhi shocks after reading it..

Taahs: sir kya hua ? daya sir theek hain na?

Abhi: patha nahi par who "kranthi" ki mssg dya ka mobile se aayi hai..

Vivek: kya likha hain usme?

Abhi" ; it is written that " hey cid u r really great '. Dr niyahti is right .. I killed the lady with poison and still ther is one more left for reaching my destiny.. dnt think too much and waste ur time jst wait for one more laash later u can catch me.. uday kranthi.."

Acp: lagtha hain yeh daya ko kidnap kiya hai aur use ki mobile se mssg bheja hai..

Taasha: sir par mein ne satellite search kiya yeh mobile ki sim toh aas paas hi hai may is building ke aas paas.. hei kareeb 2 min se styable hain aur just 2 min b4 it came to this place..

Abhi: good job taasha..

Acp: sab chak kal dhoond they hai kuch na kuch toh miljayega..

Freddy: sir daya sir ko kuch nahi hoga'.

They were about to leave the bureau suddenly a tall hefty man comes in and all were shocked and surprised.. it was daya..

Abhi: daya tum theek tho hona? Par tera mobile se who mssg?

Daya: maein theek hu aur mera mobile bhi mere paas hai..ek minute who mobile number dokhao jise se mssg aya?

Oh my god.. yeh toh meri purani mobile hain .. haan toh mera old karab mobile ki sim se yeh kaam kiya.. bahut chalaak hai..

Freddy: par yeh sim toh yahi kahi aas paas hai hame dhoona hai..

Acp: ur right freddy chalo dekhtey hain.. they finds a sim card very near to building but no one was there.. they sees a watch man and asks him whter there was any person at this palce a few min ago.. then the watch man replies that yes there is a person who was wearing a helmet and black jacket stod there for sometime and went away somewhere in balck karizma..

Suddenly abhi remembers the balck karizma he say two times very mear to murder spot and tells about it to acp..

Then acp says yahan is Mumbai main toh kahi karizma bikes hai par kaise patha kare?

Sir mujhe laghta hai hame kise aur angle se case solve karna padega time is less..jaise ki khooni ke maksat..

Acp: haan.. ek tarika (idea) hain.. ham eek list banwana hain jisme Mumbai mein rehne wale sare iaf, army,navy,aur police department mein jo koi bhi secrets .. I mean desh ki secrets rakh the hain uski records cahyiye..

Tassha,vivek,freddy, busy in finding..and makes a list..

Mean while abhi gets an intresting mssg from his informer stating that the lady who died recently was planning to go goa within few days with her bf '.

Meanwhile niyati and salunkhe comes to bureau.. and acp says agar apne bureau tak aaya hai toh kuch achi kahbar sunayiye..

Niyati: sir achi khabar sir .. us khooni ne us burnt inpsectr ke paas ek sabut choda..

Abhi:? Kya sabut hai jaldi batho..

Niy" ; sir pehle khooni us admmi ko knife se attck kiya..aur wahi thoda galthi ki..

Dr s: who jab use maar raha tha t oh us fighting mein khooni ko shyad right palm mein cut hue aur use chupane keliye usne pradeep ko jalaya..

drN..; sir uske palm mein knife cut ke wajah se uske glove cut gayi aur khoon behne laga and thoda sa hath ka impression aur right glove ka tokda shirt mein laga..

abhi: toh hame todha clue mila hai ..

daya: was remembering something regarding the cut..

taasha and freddy gives the list of 10 offivers to acp in which 7 of them were in leave to difeernt issues and left with three..

acp after seeing the list shocks and says hame ise bachan hoga .. kyun ki is list mien srilekha aur uski bhai bhi hai.. and one more officer..sir par srilekha ka infromation main thoda error dekha raha hai..

freddy: sir ho kaun ? jo hame itna satha raha hey?

Daya: sir raha hai ya rahi hai?

Acp: daya yeh kaise..

Daya: sir yeh mujrim hame baar baar English mien hi mssg deey raha hainn..

Abhi : dya ho saktha hain ..

Taasha: par yeh goa ka chakkar kya hai?

Acp: hame yahi patha lagana padega ..par use pehle hame un officers ko protect karna hai..

freddy was asked to give protection to one fofficer who is presently in Mumbai and leave him in bureau..

acp,abhi,daya.taasha left to srilekha's house..

srilekha opens door and surprised to see cid.. then taasha explains her everything..and tells her to call her bhai..

srilekha says that he is not there in house and went somewhere she dsn't know..

daya: tere bhai kahan jatha hai yeh bhi maaluum nahi kar sskthi ??

srilekha: sir who toh mujhe kuch bole bine chala jatha hai aur kabhi phone bhi nahi kartha ..

daya: tum kya kar rahi ho?

Srilekha: mein toh bus gaan sun rahi hoon ..

Daya: suno suno khoob suno .. ..kyun ki bureau main suneko nahi milega.. waha tumhe sunana hai..

Abhi: dya tum kayak eh rahe ho?

Dya: mian theekl keh raha hoon.. chayi toh uske haath dekho band aid hai who bhi right palm mein aur yeh us din murder spot ko bhi ayyi hai..

Abhi. Daya tum kya keh rahe ho yeh ladki toh ek responsible iaf officer hian use medals bhi miley hai..

Daya: kyun sri teri haath kasie kati bolo.. (loudly)

Sri: sir meri haath toh apple mein haath mein leke kaaat rahi thi tab kat gaye( in a confident manner)

Daya: tum jhooth bool rahi ho .. sach sach batao varna..tune hi yeh sare khoon kiye hai..

Sri: mein sach bool rahi hoon.. apple kaatne se ghayal hue aur maine koi khoon nahi ki..

Acp: tum loog kya keh rahey ho srilekha kabhi aise nahi kar sakhthi ..

Abhi: mujhe bhi shakh aa raha hein.. sach batao..approaches her

Sri: shouting laudly says main ne khoon nahi kiya ..nahi kiya nahi. Kiya.. and suddenly she gets a chakkar and abhi prevents her from falling..

Acp tum logon ne kya kiya .. bechari dekho lagtha hai darr gayi..

Abhi: my god.. nahi sir ise toh bahut tez bukhar hai laghta hai 104 hoga ise hospitalize karna hoga..

Acp: my god.. jaldi ise le chalo..

Acp; taahsa tum sri ke paas hi rehna aur uski raksha karna .. agar use hosh aayi toh mujhe batana..daya,ferddy, abhi, vivek hame plan banana hai aur uske bhai ko protection dena hai..chalo..hame uske mobile ki number sey patha chala ki rajesh(sri's brother) is in loonawaala area and it is stationary and not switched off..but it is a very weak signal..

Acp: gets a mssg: "hey cid last hunt on the way.. in loonawaala "

Acp calls taasha after a long time she lifts the call and answers acp asks wat happened she says that someone made her faint using choloform.. acp asks whether to check sri was there.. she goes to her bed and was not found.. acp feels bad and says sri was the last target of the murderer ..

Abhi: sir hame sri ko bachana hoga..

Dya: acp sir I am sory mujhe sri se aise behave nahi karna chaiye tha.. par mein sri ko marne nahi dhoonga..

Taasha was about to leave she gets a mssg stating tht" go and help cid team.. they r in trouble go to loonawaala "

Then starts to loona and she meets the team there..s he tells them about her mssg.. they suddenly listens a type of sound in the jungle area..(left to imagine) abhi climbs up a near by tree with binoculars and finds 10 people with guns in that area near a small temporary house..

Abhi: sir laghtha hai hame andar cahlna cahyie hoshiyaar se..lagtha hai 10 terrorists hai.. mobile silent kar ke chup ke jayenge..

Acp: theek bath hai..

After silenting the mobile phone acp phone vibrates and niyati calls him ssaying that the khooni is victim of the disease of aplastic anemia.. agar choti se bhi choot lagi toh bahut khoon bahega.. it cannot be stopped so easily'

Acp replies that they r in jungle area and there r on the mission..

The whole team starts moving.. silently without making noise..

Abhi mobile vibrates and gets a call from unknown number.. " abhi sir aap plz cahle jayiie main theek hoon mujhe kuch nahi hoga par idhar toh 25 terrorists hain.. abhi asks whispering whose mobile is this.. she answers that it is the kranti's mobile she stole the person's mobile and hardly she is in a safe distance from house and she begs him to leave and go..abhi restricts and says that they r not going to leave any stone unturned.. she than guides them the safest way to the house and asks them to come fully armed.. abhi follows'

In meanwhile there happens to be a sudden firing before cid enters the hideout ' then acp says that sri somehow found a gun and replying the terrorists ..meanwhile dya gets a mssg of kranthi " my last mission on nearly going to be successful and after my mission I will approach u.." daya tells acp about ths cid team also joins and starts firing..

All the 25 terrorists were dead and the cid team thinks of entering the hideout house carefully 'and near by vivek finds the karizma bike.. acp now thinks that the last target is also finished..but suddenly whole cid team hears a voice form inside saying that dnt kill me..dnt kill me..

Acp : sab log hoshiyaar se cahaloo ander.. while they were getting inside they see a room and a few mtrs away with the door half closed.. they slowly approaches and finds none other than rajesh was saying the words..

Rajesh; mujhe math maaro.. maeine kya kiya?

The cid team is very close and they saw a person wearing black jacket and wearing mask..points a pistol to rajesh

Abhi: sir main ander jaounga..

Acp: tehro abhi hame pehle surround karenge aur tum ander jaana..

Rajesh: meera kaasoor kya hai tum kaun hoo?

This time abhi was ready to shoot at the mask person' hand then

The mask person: tumhe kya lagtha hain tum kise ko bhi dhoka de saktey ho..

Acp and others shocks hearing the voice. And acp prevents abhi from firing ..

Rajesh: main toh kuch nahi kiya.. par tum hoon kaun?

Voice: teri mauth ' tune kuch nahi' kiya.. yeh khthey hua tumhey sharam nehi aathi..

Rajesh: mein toh bas asey hi business kiya.. par tum kaun?

Abhi was near door and waiting for opening the door and shoot ..but he stops..

Voice: kisse business kiye hein? And unmasks face..and says tu toh desh ke saath businees kar rahey ho.

Rajesh: tum .. yeh kya rahi ho..

Lady: mein job hi kar rahi hoon achi kar rahi..hoon.. ..

Rajesh : agar tune mujhe maara toh tum bhi jald mar jaogi..meri bath suno chod do mujghe tumhe jeene ke liye help karunga..

Lady: main marneke liye tayyar hoon par tum se help nahi loongi..

By this time abhi enters inside and was shocked to see the lady..

Acp:sri beta yeh tum.. before he completes his sentence rajesh was running and sri also starts chasing him she catches him and before she could kill him he takes out a knife and cut her in her wrist..

Sri was bleeding but firm and shot rajesh dead with pistol..

Acp: sri beta yeh sab kuch kya hai?

Abhi: toh tum hi ho woh "UDYA KRANTHI" kyon kiya yeh sab..tune 5 khoon ki hai patha hai tumhe saja kya hein?

Sri: bleeding heavily .. but accepts that she was the one who killed all the 5 officers..

Acp: par too toh ek iaf officer ho aur tune aise kyun kiya?

Sri: sir mein ek officer hoon iseliye mein mere farz nibhaya?

Daya: toh khoon karna tere farz hain?

Sri: nahi sir khoon nahi.. duty.. hain.. punishment dena..mera farz hai..

Freddy: saaf saaf bolo..

Sri: acp sir who pehla major girish who Goa jaa raha tha ' hamari desh ki secretes ko bejhe ne keleiye..aur who navy officer wahi hai jiski wajah se terrorists india mein aasani se ghoose rahey hai..

Srilekha: who aurath hey raaksas who toh hamaari secrets katta karke goa jaa rahi thi uski BF se jo ek terrorist hai par woh hamari encounter mein maara gaya....

Freddy: who jala houa admi pradeep?

Sri: who toh aap hi ko maarna jaa raha tha .. who aap se pehle din hi secrets liye aur jaa raha tha secrets bhejne..uski biwi sheela toh uke bare mein janthi thi aur divorce lee .. mein sheela ko janthi hoon..aur yeh rajesh toh .. use bhayya kehte murei khoon daud rahi hey mujhe uske uuper tab shak aaya jab who mera laptop open karne ki koshsi kar raha tha.. jisme mera iaf ki secrets hai.tab.. se main ne uske peecha ki aur en sab ke bare mein patha chalayi.. yeh bhi aaj jaane waal tha Goa aaj ..secrets bhejne....par aapke bare mein use patha chala gaya ki aap unhe protect karne waale hain .. iseliya usne terrorists ko he yahan bulaya .. aur itne mein yeh sab hua..

Acp: tumhe iske bare mein hame pehle hi batana tha..

Sri: sir agar mein aapke paas aate toh use shak hota .. aur wasie bhi who pradeep mere uuper nigha rakha tha is liye amin yeh sab black mask pehenke bike ko chalana pada..

Dya: who to tum hi thi jisne meri mobile churayi..

Sri: sorry sir par mujhe apko gumraah karne keliye sims ki jarurath padi isleye..

Acp: sri beta tum bahut samjdaar ladki ho desh ki raksha ki..aur main tumhe saja nahi bhukne doonga..

Abhi: sri yeh batao tera bhai tumhe kyon keh raha hai who tujhe help karega?

Sri: ( bleeding heavily) acp sir mein aapke saja keliye tayyar hoon par .. use bhogne keliye mera paas wakth nahi.. hai..and she faints'

Acp: oh my god.. amin toh bhool hi gaya dr niyathi batha rahi thi ki killer ko aplstic anemia hai ' amtlab sri ko anemia hai aur yeh..oh my god..hospital chalo..

Tasha: shyad ise liye uske bhai use help ki bare mein kuch keh raha tha..

Vivek: haan sir jahan tak mujhe patah hai is disese ki illaj toh sirf bone marrow implantation se hi hotha hai..par iska bhai ab nahi raha .. shyad operation nahi ho saktha..

Abhi: hame ise bachana hai..

In the hospital after sri gets sense she gets up and feels very weak..

She tries to speak to acp.

Sri: uncle.. mujhe maaf karo ' aap sab ko mein ne meri mssg se takleef di..

Acp: koi bath nahi beta..

Sri: daya , abhi ,appko sorry aur tasha sorry tujhe choloform den eke liye..

All says no problem with tears filling their eyes..

Sri: acp uncle ab us uday kranti ka kaam bhi ho gaya aur sri ki kaam nhi ho gay meri jaane ka wakth aa gaya aur mein mein ne 2 din pehle hi resign kiya hain isliya aapke list mein error aaya hain....

Acp: nahi beta jab tak assey corrupted offiers hota hain tab tak uday ko jinda rahena padega.. ..

Sri: gives a beautiful smile and says aap ki cid team hothe hue koi bhi corruptions nahi karega.....'(and nxt depends upon ur imagination)😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
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This is my first story so plz give me response.. 😃😊
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hey this is my frist story ..there may be grammatical mistakes dnt mind.. but plz give response 😭😭😭whther it is good or bad.. 😭😭😭 no one is responding.. prabha di u plz tell me whether there are any corrections to be made?😭
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I will. I have aready started reading. I am a little busy with work too. I will definately let you know.
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nice and different story,the concept was quite good and innovative and luckily none of our CID officers were injured or admitted to hospital so keep up the good work !!
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The ending is too good...'khoon for a noble cause'
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very good story. keep up the good work and yes story was quite fast really liked it. 👍🏼
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Good attempt, different story. I have a couple of suggestions, I will let you know via PM.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: prabha.

Good attempt, different story. I have a couple of suggestions, I will let you know via PM.



Thank u prabha di.. plz let me know my mistakes in story by either pm or comment ... i wil rectify it.. and regarding the story contest i think i may take some time for writting bcz i am preparing for exams.. di wat is the last date of submission? and thank u for ur support..
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Originally posted by: sunnyp1414

very good story. keep up the good work and yes story was quite fast really liked it. 👍🏼



thank u sunny😊.. and i took mearly 3 hrs for thinking and typing and it took 12 ms -word pages to complete.. 😆

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