2nd uninterrupted SR -- Eva's version

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Well Today in US they just just deleted the most important scenes well so I am here with the 2nd SR
The DJ's did show us the beautiful SR with natural elements and starry blue back night
But when I heard Dev telling Radh about his side of the wedding day... I wanted Radh also to tell her side of the story.. but today in US they deleted that scene too... Oh what a pity that was I thought was very significant..
And so once agian I thought I will add some more of my version and redo the second SR... hope you will like it..

Ok ladies? the 2nd uninterrupted SR --- my version

The DJs gave us beautiful meaningful SR but you know I thought I will add some more of the scene of the 1st wedding on Radh's side and just spices up little bit more.. Ready..

Dadima hears her grand son begging his wife to come with him.. she tenderly smiles at the love her grand son has for his wife.. She says loudly.. CB if your husband is begging you than I think you should oblige him.. Just close the door behind you... Dev taking his wife's hand pulls her out of her room and while closing the door he softly says dadima I love you... Dadima just laughs at him says get out here before I change my mind.. Dev laughing softly closes the door. He almost pulls his wife with him... Radh looks at the urgency in him says wait I need to go and distribute the glass of milk to all.. Standing in the middle of the inner court yard.. Radh says yes that's one I have not done yet.. Dev looks at her and smiles innocently.. than changes his expression and sternly says.. do you know what time it is?? Radh looks at him asking innocently what?? Dev comes near her and holding her delicate face in his big palms looking deep in to her eyes He softly murmurs in her ears.. Mrs. Radhika Dev Raj Purohit.... my wrist watch tells me that my exclusive time has started a while back.. now you are no more CB but just my wife.... So now is the time only for your patni dharma.... he softly kissing her cheek says understand?? Radhika looks down and innocently nodes her head.. Than suddenly looking up she has this hint of mischievous smile on her face.. She looks up and says dadima? Dev hands fall back from her face and he turns to look up to see dadima.. Meanwhile turning Radh already starts running across the inner court. Looking at her shoulder if her husband is following her.. of course Dev would not miss this chance to chase his wife.. He smiles at her playfulness and says oh really?? And starts taking big strides after her laughing softly.. Hearing him laugh Radh smiles to herself and keeps running.. Suddenly her payal comes undone and slides off her feet. She stops and turns to look at he payal.. But before she goes to pick it up.. Dev was there on the spot.. He looks down and than at her face.. He slowly sits on the floor and picks up the payal. Watching him caressing his payal once again Radh starts running and climbing the stairs.. she runs to their bedroom and waits for Dev.. Dev follows her catches her before she enters the bedroom.. he holds her from the back and says not here.. She was almost breathless from that running.. Turning in his arms she rests her head on his chest and listens to his rapid heartbeat.. She looks up at him asking where? Dev looks deep in to her eyes and trails his index finger on her delicate jaw line saying you will see.. He than suddenly bends a little & picks her up in his arms. Radh entwines her hands around his neck and hides her face in his neck she says but where are you taking me? Dev says Radhika close your eyes I want to show you something.. Radh blissfully closes her eyes and hugs him tightly.. Dev carries her up the few steps to the terrace.. He slowly puts her down at the entrance.. Her back was to the door. Holding her shoulder he so tenderly kisses her forehead and slowly turns her toward the terrace.. The magnificently decorated terrace and the bed with canopy takes her breath away.. Her mouth hangs open with the sheer magnitude of this majestic grandeur before her. She turns to look at her husband who was watching each emotions displaying on her expressive eyes and face.. She turns and throws herself in his arms hugging him tightly. Dev looks down at her and says like it??? Radh had no words in her mouth just her enchanted delightful expressions were the witness of how much she loved it. Once again Dev carries her across the thresh hold to the decorated bed. He slowly puts her down and let's her sit on the bed. Sitting down with her he holds her hands and says Radhika you are the love of my life and I want to love you so much each moment and each day and shower you with all I can. Radh is so overwhelmed with the tenderness and love in his voice her eyes are started filling up with tears. Dev looks at her tenderly and shakes his head and says no.. tonight no more tears.. Radh holds his hands and brings them to her lips and kisses them.. she than lifts teary eyes to his face saying how can you love me so much.. she says I never cease to wonder at the depth of your love for me. Dev hugs her tightly and says Radhika so do I....so do I..

more coming up....

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Posted: 15 years ago
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He hugs her for a moment more than taking her in his arms he lays on the bed. Her head was now resting on his extended arms. She was snuggled on his side and her hand was resting on his chest. He looks up the at the dark blue sky decorated with twinkling starts and says softly Radhika you know every time I think about that day and about our 1st wedding, It makes me happier each time that you were my bride on that day too... Radh lifts her head a little to look at his profile. He was smiling gently..

Dev continues.. He says you know my heart and my mind knew it was you beside me. When babuji gave me your hand for the Kanyadan I knew in my heart that I was holding your hand.. and than he remembers the tear and says you know when I saw your tears I was really upset and wanted to know the reason of your tears. So I took you aside to ask if you loved me.. I knew at that time when I heard you voice declaring Yes.. Your sweet "YES" still rings in my ears.. I was so sure that I am talking with my dream girl.. Radh softly says .. You were talking with your Dream Girl.. She softly moves her hand on his chest and says when you told me about you falling in love with me at the rasleela and our talk in the nidhi van and than when put the color on me on the holi... I was so happy that you have always loved me and that you only wanted to marry me.. In my heart I thanked My Kanha that it is really me you are in love with and that is why Kanha made it possible for me to be a your bride. And when you asked me if I loved you... I so much wanted to say yes but you did not know who actually I was.. I was praying in my heart asking Kanha to show me the way.. and as if I felt that you are waiting for my answer for so long and my heart just gave you the yes.. because that's what I have always wanted to tell you... At that time I so much wanted to tell you my real name ... I so much wanted to tell you that I love you with all my heart as radhika and that you are my sunshine but it was getting late and we had to hurry back and when you said we needed to go back the moment of confession was gone and I came back with you and we sat there near the wedding alter. I was overjoyed knowing that you loved me and after knowing that fact all went out of my head except that I am sitting with you near the wedding alter and my Kanha's blessings are with me and than you were holding me for the havan.. Your touch made me forget everything except you. When I took each pheras with you my mind was filled with you and your presence.. I had no other thought than I am marrying my beloved.. Dev says yes when I hold you in my arms for the havan.. I knew I was holding you. And when my hand touched your cheek while I was putting on the mangalsutra I could feel your delightful shudder and could feel that you loved that touch. And when I put the sindoor in you mang.. I felt that you were so happy I could feel the joy radiating from you... than suddenly he gets up with radhika still in his arms....

His voice was so regretful.... he said but Radhika how could I forget that.. Why I did not trust my instinct that it was you all the time. I knew that my heart would never lie to me.. Why I did not believe my heart that it was only you and no one else.. I know your touch.. My heart can always tell me when you are near me... I could always feel your presence.. Radh was hugging and sobbing in his arms.... He wipes her tears and says Radhika when I heard your mother telling yesterday how they snatched those ornaments from you and asked you to take 100 baths.. and made you a suhgan without sindoor... I do not know how I felt... I was so devastated and angry at the same time .. His eyes were feeling with the tears too... He says I was thinking about the pain I went through but comparing to yours I had nothing.. They both sit there holding each other and washing their pain away in their love.. Radh lifts her teary eyes to his face and sees the trail of tears on his cheek... she delicately wipes it off. She holds both his hands in hers and bringing them to her mouth she kiss them and says softly. I am also so happy that I did 14 pheras with you.. Now we are together not for 7 lifetimes but for 14 life time. She lifts her head to look at him and says softly let's forget about our pain and our separation. When by God's blessings we are now here and together why should we go in the painful past.. Dev looks at her and smiles lovingly at her. He slides her hair from her face and kisses her tears away.. and caressing her face lovingly he says you are right Radhika.. we are made for each other and God has brought us together.. I have waited so long for you and have so much longed for you. Now I will not let a single moment go away from us...

Part three coming up...
Edited by evasumi - 15 years ago
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Radh looks up at him... The change in his voice catches her attention.. He was looking at her with that intense stare. Radh lowers her gaze seeing the intensity in his eyes. Looking at his blushing wife a slow seductive smile comes on his face he delicately holds her face in his palms and brings it closer touches her lips with a fleeting touch… Radh blushes delicately with the sudden touch of his warm lips on hers.. She lifts her eyes to look at him and finds his gaze on her she turns her face a little and hides her face in his palms.. Dev says na Radhika the days of your hiding are over.. now you will never hide from me.. Tonight belongs to us and only to us… Saying he gets up from the bed taking her with him.. Radh stands and hides her face in her palms. He slowly removes her hand from her face and let it fall softly by her side. Standing behind her he brings both of his hands arond both side of her as if enveloping her completely. He slowly brings his both arms toward her shoulder trailing them across the full length of her arms.. His slow and seductive movements makes Radh shudder.. behind her he could feel her every movement.. Bending down he kisses her exposed shoulder and nuzzles her neck.. blowing softly on her cheek. He could feel her heavy breathing.. He loves every little response from his wife. His face breaks in to slow smile seeing how his touch affects her. He than gives his attention to her other shoulder. He sees a small black mole on her neck and kisses the spot tenderly.. murmuring in her ears I love that little mole on your neck. Radh delicately smiles at that. Keeping her back to him he slowly trails his index finger toward the knot of her blouse. He slowly unties the knot and exposes her shoulder. She could feel her warm breathe on her back as he blows softly on her back suddenly she shivers finding his lips on her back. She hugs herself and folds her hand on her stomach.. Dev brings his hand slowly on her shoulder and sliding her sleeve a little exposing her shoulder little bit more kisses it.. looking sideways at her tender smile and closed eyes.. he brings his arm on her folded arms and gently brings her backward closer to his body. Radh as if have not any strength left in her legs to stand she turns and hugs him circling at his waist & hides her face in his chest. Resting his head on her head he hugs her tightly to him smiling a little listens to her accelerated heartbeat. Radh also could feel his accelerated heartbeat under her palm. They both stand there in loving embrace feeling each others heart beats as if there is no other sound there except their heart beats..

He softly brings his palm up and lifts her head gently and tenderly blowing soft air in her ears. Radh slowly lifts her gaze to his… He slowly brings his hand down to lift one of her hands. He delicately removes her bracelet. Radh smiles and curls up her finger. Dev looks at that and slowly uncurls her fingers and turning her hand slowly bends down and kisses the back of her hand. He takes the other hand and repeats the process. Bringing both her hand in front he turns her palms up and rubs his face in her palm kissing each one tenderly.. Radh could feel his warm lips and hot breathe at same time in her palms the new sensation makes her shudder.

Slowly Dev leads her to bed and makes her sit. Sitting opposite her he tenderly holds her face and softly kisses her forehead.. than his lips travel downwards leaving butterfly kisses on her face.. Radh dare not open her eyes… with the closed eyes she could feel each warm breath blowing softly on her face. Finally Dev reaches her lips. He feels her suck in her breath. He teases her some more trailing line on the side of her face with his index finger. His one palm was holding her face… He brings his index finger right above her lips saying you know Radhika when you smile you get a little dimple right here and bending down he kisses the spot saying and I love those cute dimples.. Once again he holds her face between his palms and lovingly kisses that endearing little dimple on her chin. Saying softly and I absolutely love that little dimple in your chin. Than turning his face side ways shadowing her face he finally claims her lips.. With Close eyes Radh just sits enjoying her husband's soft and seductive voice and showers of kisses. Dev slides gently on the bed taking his wife with him. In a little while.. Resting on his elbow Dev lifts his head to rest on his palms. He has removed his kurta and is looking down at his wife.. Radh smiles at him shyly.. turning toward lamps she blows the lamp softly.. Dev was waiting for the moment he brings his hand around her head and lifts his head toward his wife….claiming her as his one and only wife.. Radh completely surrenders to him being free of all her burden.. all her lies.. There was nothing between them except their love for each other… Under the starry blue night.. they submitted to each other completely being one in mind soul spirit and body…

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Posted: 15 years ago
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My dear.. thanks.. i have my towel with me.. to wipe my tears too..
It was so tender, lovely, and magical...
Thanks for this 2 nd Indian version( that we all waited) of , most awaited uninterurpted SR.. No words to describe your version, you are at the top.....
Love you dear.. appreciate your time.
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Devika😛
Edited by DEVIKA8 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thank Eva for your beautiful version.

Doies anyone know why the ZeeTV USA is editing out some of the best portions of the show. (Are they doing that with other shows as well or just CB)? It is so pathetic that they deleted the best part and are combining two episodes into one. We will be at the same episode as in India.


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Posted: 15 years ago
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Devika: Thank you.... I had a feeling you would like it...
Radhika5:
Thank you.. I am not sure why they are deleting the scenes.. and it is so redicuouls that they are deleting the best important part.
They deleted the main garden talk of Radhdev and today the talk in the bedroom about the radh's parenst and also the 1st wedding talk on the bed..
I thought those were more significant than showing amma with that tantrik... but well thank God that we have internet to watch those beautiful parts...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Eva i am speechless, u r an amazing!! Thanks very much for the beautiful update. Tonight i am very depressed two significant scenes was edited, i am tired of this chopping of scenes. The talk radev had about their first marriage was edited that was a very significant scene, also i love the talk radev had in their room when rads worshipped her kanha and her parents the way she said they give her a name and home...but they edited this scene also. Now i think CB is just one episode behind india, will they keep editing the scenes when will this end? I am so disappointed, i enjoy watching CB much more on TV than on my laptop.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Sun you know you can down load the episode from ZShare.. and burn them as a DVD that way you can watch them on TV..
I am going to do that.. as these are not available anywhere except on line.
I think now may be they will stop deleting,, as they are only a day behind.. Usha di told me they did with all other serials too..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: evasumi

Sun you know you can down load the episode from ZShare.. and burn them as a DVD that way you can watch them on TV..

I am going to do that.. as these are not available anywhere except on line.
I think now may be they will stop deleting,, as they are only a day behind.. Usha di told me they did with all other serials too..



Eva Di, this is exactly what i will do. I heard the other shows are being edited too but as i look only at CB i cant help but feel upset when i see edited episodes. I think alot of ppl are unaware the episodes are being edited as not everyone look at the online episodes but when u know each and every scene and look forward to see it on TV only to see some significant scenes missing its all the more frustrating.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Sun I was able to burn almost a week of episodes on DVD.. Though they were not as good as dvd's but well I have no complaints... At least I have saved up copy and I can watch them on big screen anytime I want.. Only few gets little bit blured other wise it comes pretty good...
You can go to deshi tashan or apnicommunity and click the link of zshare episodes they give you the download link.. some of them are pretty good but some are not that but that's ok right??
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