NewFF 'LOVE BIRDS ' Pt11 Pg18 07.02.2011 - Page 6

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Posted: 15 years ago
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I loved this update! loved the Radev scenes! Can't wait for the next part!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I just loved it joemahika update soon can't wait 4 the next part
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Thank you friends thanks for ur comments
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Whats going on CB Land friends totally disgusting
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Posted: 15 years ago
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loved it
please update it soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hai friends Sorry for the late updat

Part 7


Scene Shifts to hall Where all family members are very busy in fixing engagement Date then enters both Radhika and Dev walking hand in hand
Vishaka suddenly comes to Radhika and hugs are and Says Iam very happy Radhika really very very happy Aisa lagta hai iam flying in the sky,
Radhika: mein bhi tere liye bahut khush hu Vishaka lekin ek baat pata ye sab kab kaise hua itni achanak se kaise ?
Dev: ye tho hume Arjun se poochenge chalo chalte hai Dev grabs Radhika Hand starts towards arjun Dev senses some thing and turns back Radhika watching him Seriously
Dev asks Kya hua Radhika chalo chalte Vishaka Chalte hai Dev mere behan ki haath tho chodo tab chalenge Dev slowly leaves Rads hand and says Kya vishaka tu bhi ab hum sab relatives haina ab Radhika meri saali lagti haina i can flirt her also What u say radhika Radhika teasingly says there is lot of time Dev wait to flirt with me Chalo Chalte hai Vishaka
Both Vishaka and Radhika says " Bye Dev" Dev seeing them shockingly he opened his Mouth Radhika comes back and shuts his mouth by lifting his lower jaw with her hand and Says Moo band rakhiyega kuch dino ke liye" and leaves the Place Dev puts his hand on his hair and says " Radhika ab dekho mein kya karne jaa rahu lets start the game Radhika" he follows them
Vishaka,Arjun,Radhika are in the lawn Following Radhika Dev also Comes there and tries to sit side of Radhika but Radhika gets up and goes to Settle beside Vishaka Dev settles beside Arjun and says" Come On bro lets start"
Arjun: Kya start karna Dev ?
Dev: Wahi ki aap dono kaise mile aur Pyar vyar ye sab kaise hua kab hua so lets start the love story of Arjun & Vishaka
Vishaka wants to runs away but Arjun holds her hand and says sit her down they are facing each other Radhika moves little near to Arjun and asks him
Radhika: Come On vishaka tell me how you met Vishaka starts saying all those moments
Mean while Dev slowly Pinches on Radhika Waist Radhika Jerk at once Arjun & Vishaka asks her what happended
Radhika: er.. Woh. Kuch nahin acha to tum Arjun se chat me mila aur kya and she looks at Dev Pleadingly tostop
Dev: Wah arjun tum to bada chupa rustum nikla yaar and with his corner of eyes he looks at Radhika with a boyish smile
Again Vishaka and arjun starts their Story again Dev starts his hand cutely rubbing her Waist Radhika heart thumping she closes her eyes
Vishaka notices that and asks
Vishaka: Kya hua Radhika Radhika jerks but cant say anything she shylys looks at Dev both are lost in each other eyes
Vishaka loudly calls her Radhika kya hua kaha ho sun rahi haina Radhika nods her head Saying yes
Vishaka and arjun are going on explaining their story But Radhika and Dev are lost in their own world seeing in to each other Eyes
After sometime Mrinalini standing behind them She announces that
Mrinalini: Are aap logo yahan hai aur mein aap logon ke liye kahan kahan doond rahi hu
Vishaka & arjun : Kya hua bhabhi
Mrinalini: Congratulations both of you Radhika & Dev still are in same position Mrinalini abserves that and gives a little hit on Radhika Shoulder Both Radhika and Dev come to their Sense
Radhika: Kya bhabhi Kya hua
Mrinalini: Jo hona hai wahi hua aur jo hona chahiye wo ho rahi hai mujhe lagta hain abi ek aur shaadi ki tayyari karna chahiye
Arjun: Kya Bhabhi ek aur shaadi
Mrinalini: Leave it Arjun sab log tum dono ko bula rahi hai woh shaadi ki dates kehne liye chal lets move
But radhika & Dev are alone and their Eyelock and reminding in their mind whatever mrinalini told to them
Dhriti Comes there and gives a soound like she trying to set her throst Radhika jerks once and sees that Dhriti and She blushes
Dhriti: What this Radhika Tumhe Dev kya milgaya Mujhe to Bhool gaya Kya mein kab se tumhareliye Doond rahi hu waise thodi sabar kar aur aap bhi Dev
Dev smiles and puts his hand on back of her head and looks at Radhika who is blushing
Dhriti: ab ander chale and she moves from there
Dev stretches his hand towards Radhika asking her to give her hand Radhika Seeing in to Dev eyes she slowly stretches her hand Towards Dev and both hold their hands and starts walking towards the House they are near the Door Where Radhika & Dev stops themselves and Slowly leaves each other hands and Dev starts
Dev: Radhika mein tumhari haat saare samaj ke saamne,samaan se parivaar valon ki sehmath se haq se mangoonga aur usi haq se tumhe iss ghar mein gruhapravesh karvaunga tab tak keliye mujhe intejar karna padega and he shruggs his shoulders putting his hands in to his jean Pocket and Radhika shyly goes in to the house and Stops seeing all the Family members in the hall she turns back and Looks at Dev Dev watching her lovingly with proud,Love feeling inhis eyes Radhika joins the Family
Mr.Purohit: Dev beta andar aana kya hua Dev nods his head and joins the family
Both Dev and Radhika are standing Opposite to Each other Radhika talking with Dhriti Suddenly she catches the Dev who is watching her lovingly Again Eyelock Suddenly all the hall Becomes dark and only one light on Radhika and another on Dev,Dev slowly moves towards Radhika Radhika Looks at Dev eyes Dev slowly takes Radhika Palm and pulls her very close to him still both are looking each other Dev places his one hand On Radhika waist and One hand by holding Radhika Palm they both hug tightly and Slowly Comes back and Dev Blows air on Radhika Eyes Radhika enjoys it Closing her eyes and Dev places a beautiful kiss on her each eyes and notices that Radhika Lips are shivering Radhika feeling very new feeling in her body Dev slowly moves towards Radhika Lips still Radhika closed her eyes There lips are almost Close their Nose touching each other Just then a Hand waved between their faces thats Dhriti who Disturbs Radhika by giving a small hit and Dev Comes to his senses and observes his surroundings and he places his hand in his hair and smiles himself and sees Radhika she is serious in Discussion with Family but she disturbed with Dev looks She looks at him and sighs him asking what happened Dev replies noding his head which means Nothing
Mr.Purohit: sab suno ki shaadi ki tareek pakki hogayi ab sab kaam mey reh jao maa sabko Function ki dates aur kaun kya kaam karna yeh sab maa decide karegi Kyun maa teek haina
Dadima: Jee beta Bilkul
Vaishali: acha maaji pehle Dates batayi
Dadima: teek hai acha Sab logo suno
16th April yaani kal Engagement
17th April Haldi
18th April Mehendi
19th April Sangeet
20th April Shaadi aur rahi baat kaam ki saare Functions hamari ghar me yani VNDN ki Purohit bhavan mein hi hoga Kyun Shastriji manjoor
Shashtriji: Maaji jaise aap ki icha
Vivek : Dadima jaldi jaldi bataiye hume kya kya kaam karna hain
Dadima: batati hu,Catering guest list Vivek,Dresses aur Makeup ye sab Dhriti,Saari function ki tayyariyon mein humsab bade dekhlenge aur Poora Mehendi, sangeet aur shaadi mein jashna karna hai Dev aur Radhika ko Kyun manjoor hai ha ya na
All together says ha But Dev Interrupts Dadi and asks
Dev: Dadima its not fare sirf hum dono
Dadima: Kyun Dev apne Bhayya aur honewali bhabhi keliye itna nahi karsakthe tumlog
Dev: Dadima yesa nahi hain lekin
Arjun: Kya dev itne bahane bana raha ho kya tumhe intreset nahi hai kya shaadi mein ya phir tumhare saath dene keliye US se tumhare Dance Partner aana hai Kya uske bina nahi nachoge tum
Dev suddenly Looks at him agrily Radhika hearing this feels very uncomfertable and fear about Dev's Dance Partner Dev observes this he wants to explain her But Walks away from there
Dev: Dadima Done mein aur Radhika dono sab sambahloongi and its a promise and turns towards Arjun Kya aap bhi na and Walks searching Radhika
Dadima: Dev suno tho kaha jaa raha hai
Dev: mein abhi aayi Dadima But Dadima says loudly " Dev yaa rakhna kal subah aap sablog Shopping jaana hai Engagement ke liye"
Dev: Teek hai Dadima
Dadima: Chalo ab kaafi der ho gayi hai aur waise bahut sara kaam baaki hai kal engagement bhi haina chalo sab chalte hai
Shastriji: teek hai maaji ab agya Dijiye hume
Dadima: Acha shastriji kal subah Radhika aur Vishaka ko saath mein bej dena Saare Bache log Shopping karke shaam tak laut ayega
Shastriji: Jee maaji ab hum chalte Radhe Radhe and starts to leave and stops and asks them Ji maaji Radhika aur vishaka nahi ayi abi tak
Dhriti: Chachaji aap bahar jaayiye mein lekar aatha hu
shastriji: teek hai beta jaldi aana
Radhika in the Garden she almost Started Crying then Dev Comes and stands behind her and he wants to say something but just then Dhriti comes and Takes away Radhika with her self saying to Dev
Dhriti: Ok then Dev bye Good Knight and Sweet Dreams sorry sorry Sweet Radhika Love Dreams Bye take care we will meet tomorrow
Radhika Walks away from there seeing him with very painful Eyes and lots of questions in her eyes Dev understands her feeling and he also looking her
Purohit family give send off to Shastriji Family all are settled in Dhriti Car and Dhriti turning her car Dev waiting for Radhika and he himself asking her " Please Radhika Once Please for Once put the Glass down and see me Once please" But Car goes away from there Dev falls on his Knees and looks very disappointed


Sorry if any mistakes

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Posted: 15 years ago
#57
Really nice part joemahika 👏
Awnn poor dev ...😭
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Posted: 15 years ago
#58
Joemahika awsome once again just over ohhhh don't say that rads won't speak to deb u hope he pacify her and makes her understand that he loves only her plz post the next part soon can't wait
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Posted: 15 years ago
#59
aw so good~!~ Poor dev!
maybe tommrow for shopping everything will be cleared
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Posted: 15 years ago
#60
This was lovely dear, i cant wait for the next part. Please update soon...Well done!👏👏👏
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