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Posted: 15 years ago
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Barkhaaggsugarandspice ChinadollTwo, i loved all ur pieces!!! great job! it was so beautiful that i cud actually see what was going on in my head!

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Scene 3

Okay, this is part of another radev story that I am writing. It's called the:

PRINCE AND PRINCESS OF OLYMPUS

Character sketch:

Radhika: daughter of Athena, Goddess of wisdom and warfare. Radhika was and still is the greatest, strongest and most beautiful warrior of camp half-blood (a camp where demi-gods go to). She is single and the smartest warrior. She runs away from love because of her reasons, this is one of the many reasons why she is single.

Dev: son of Poseidon, God of the sea. With knowledge that he's a demi-god, he insists that he attends a normal high school. At his school, he is the most handsome, popular and smartest student. He's also single. Under certain circumstances, he will have to move to camp half blood.

What will happen when one of the world's greatest warriors and one of the world's best students meet? The answer lies within the book.

Vasha presents a story of two strangers, who would go to the end of the earth for each other.

Vasha presents:

THE PRINCE AND PRINCESS OF OLYMPIOUS

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please say if you all like this.... summary.

if you do, i'll post a radev scene from it.i know its a weird story, but i love learning about greek mythology, so.. the prince and princess was born. so please comment and critcise. also evryone who wrote other scenes, they were amazing. very nice to read. please post more when you can.
...please comment and critcise......Vasha
Edited by sugarandspice - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53
Wow sugarandspice charachter sketch of scene 3 was awsome to gd plz do continur it coz its really a gd idea I would luv 2 read it
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54
I will try to write one also!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Okay heres my part..I Have to read all of teh other parts after too...Okay so here it goes..Remember how Radhika Doesn't want to say his name Dev...So teh Scene goes with that...
Dev and Radhika were at home alone, Dev was sitting Down watchign T.V as he came back form the office and Radhika had left a note saying that she went shopping with Vishaka. Dev hears the front door open he looks that way he saw Radhika with Vishaka. Vishaka was with her Husband Arjun. They all lived in the same house.
Radhika: Chal Vishaka tu apne saare Kapde try karke dekh. Chal..
Vishaka: Radhika sorry lekin Arjun ke saath mere koi plans the I'm sorry...
Radhika = : Koi baat nahi..tum log khoob mazaa lo huh she added mischeviously.
Arjun: Vishaka chalein
Vishaka: Chalo Arjun....And they both walked off leaving the two love birds home alone.
Dev noticed that Vishaka called Arjun by his name "Arjun" he thought that Radhika should also call him by his name..Not aap.
Radhika went to her room after smiling to Dev, and asked him if he ate. He replied yes..Then she left to theri room. Dev followed.
TO be continued...I didn;t have time to write the rest but will write it soon. tommorow!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: sugarandspice

Scene 3

Okay, this is part of another radev story that I am writing. It's called the:

PRINCE AND PRINCESS OF OLYMPUS

Character sketch:

Radhika: daughter of Athena, Goddess of wisdom and warfare. Radhika was and still is the greatest, strongest and most beautiful warrior of camp half-blood (a camp where demi-gods go to). She is single and the smartest warrior. She runs away from love because of her reasons, this is one of the many reasons why she is single.

Dev: son of Poseidon, God of the sea. With knowledge that he's a demi-god, he insists that he attends a normal high school. At his school, he is the most handsome, popular and smartest student. He's also single. Under certain circumstances, he will have to move to camp half blood.

What will happen when one of the world's greatest warriors and one of the world's best students meet? The answer lies within the book.

Vasha presents a story of two strangers, who would go to the end of the earth for each other.

Vasha presents:

THE PRINCE AND PRINCESS OF OLYMPIOUS

________________________________

please say if you all like this.... summary.

if you do, i'll post a radev scene from it.i know its a weird story, but i love learning about greek mythology, so.. the prince and princess was born. so please comment and critcise. also evryone who wrote other scenes, they were amazing. very nice to read. please post more when you can.
...please comment and critcise......Vasha



Me too i like mythologies, even my name signifies Woman of War in Roman, Hihihi!!!

Lovely, plz update it Vasha, will look forward to it!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Dev woke up late this morning and was rushing to go to work, without having breakfast! Radhika as usual was waiting to serve Dev.... He tells her he can't stop for breakfast cos he's running late, but Radhika made him sit down and insisted he had something! While she was serving him, she gets lightheaded and faints! Dev panics and starts calling Dadima & Birju!
Birju comes running, while Dev carries Radhika and sits on the sofa, looking pale! Birju calls the Doctor and he tells Dev to lay her on the sofa.. He refuses and continues to hold her and pleads with her to open her eyes!

Birju sprinkles water on her face.. She opens her eyes looking dazed! The Doctor arrived, checks her out.... He notices Dev's condition, teases him saying..." how are you going to handle, being a father?". Both say what? Doctor congratulates them and gives Dev strict orders to take good care of Radhika!

Dev carries Radhika to their room ... she tells him to put her down cos she has to prepare lunch and he has to go to work as he is very late! Dev tells her "from today onwards, till the baby is born, you are not allowed to enter the kitchen, nor do anything anymore... Complete bedrest!" Radhika laughs and tells him that she is fine and that she would go crazy laying in bed, doing nothing! Dev teases her "don't worry, you won't be in bed alone, I will keep you busy!" 😉. Radhika pushes him out of the room and locks the door!

Dev goes looking for Dadima and his mom... Birju informs him that they were out! He then calls the office and informs Vivek about Radhika's condition and tells him that he would be working from home! Vivek congratulates him and tells him not to worry about work but to take care of Radhika!

He returns to their room... Radhija wasn't in the room, he goes looking for her in the kitchen... Sure enough, Radhika was busy
cooking! He frowns at her, instructs the maids to take over, winks at them, threatens to fire them, if they allow Radhika in the kitchen again! He then embarasses her, by carrying her out of the kitchen!

While Radhika is in the shower, he makes a "DO NOT DISTURB" sign and hangs it outside their door! When she comes out of the shower, she is surprised to see him waiting for her, with towel in hand, ready to dry her hair! While drying her hair he kisses her neck, nibbles on her ears and whispers "I Love you so much, you complete me, and now you are giving me the greatest gift, a BABY we made together......... our LOVE Child! Radhika blushes and hides her face on his chest! He kisses her
sindoor, her forehead, her lips and then there was a loud knock on their door and Vaishali & Dadima calling out to them! Dev tells Radhika to be quiet, they would leave thinking they were sleeping, but no such luck... They kept knocking! Radhika whispers to Dev to let her go, he refuses, but gives in reluctantly... She covers herself from head to toe, pretending to sleep, while Dev opens the, pretending to rub his eyes. He steps outside and shuts the door, asking why they were disturbing them? Dadima grabs his ears and says "why didn't you phone your mom to give us the good news?" Vaishali grabs his other ear grinning, he says "ouch! couldn't you both wait to ask us the good news in the morning, instead of disturbing us? Radhika is sleeping and the doctor ordered complete rest! Please make sure she doesn't cook or do any chores at all!"

Next morning they all fuss over Radhika.... She suffers from morning sickness and runs to the washroom. Dev is worried and rushes after her. He wipes her face with a wet washcloth, tells her he he is sorry and that he can't bear to see her being sick! He said " this will be our First and Last kid!" Radhika smiles and hugs him! She teases him saying..."I guess you and I can't sleep on the same bed, nor hug or kiss each other, in case I get pregnant again?" Hearing this, Dev's mouth opens up in surprise! Radhika laughs and tells him, "don't worry, I am not in pain, and, I'm not the first or only woman in this condition!"

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: ChinadollTwo

Dev woke up late this morning and was rushing to go to work, without having breakfast! Radhika as usual was waiting to serve Dev.... He tells her he can't stop for breakfast cos he's running late, but Radhika made him sit down and insisted he had something! While she was serving him, she gets lightheaded and faints! Dev panics and starts calling Dadima & Birju!
Birju comes running, while Dev carries Radhika and sits on the sofa, looking pale! Birju calls the Doctor and he tells Dev to lay her on the sofa.. He refuses and continues to hold her and pleads with her to open her eyes!

Birju sprinkles water on her face.. She opens her eyes looking dazed! The Doctor arrived, checks her out.... He notices Dev's condition, teases him saying..." how are you going to handle, being a father?". Both say what? Doctor congratulates them and gives Dev strict orders to take good care of Radhika!

Dev carries Radhika to their room ... she tells him to put her down cos she has to prepare lunch and he has to go to work as he is very late! Dev tells her "from today onwards, till the baby is born, you are not allowed to enter the kitchen, nor do anything anymore... Complete bedrest!" Radhika laughs and tells him that she is fine and that she would go crazy laying in bed, doing nothing! Dev teases her "don't worry, you won't be in bed alone, I will keep you busy!" 😉. Radhika pushes him out of the room and locks the door!

Dev goes looking for Dadima and his mom... Birju informs him that they were out! He then calls the office and informs Vivek about Radhika's condition and tells him that he would be working from home! Vivek congratulates him and tells him not to worry about work but to take care of Radhika!

He returns to their room... Radhija wasn't in the room, he goes looking for her in the kitchen... Sure enough, Radhika was busy
cooking! He frowns at her, instructs the maids to take over, winks at them, threatens to fire them, if they allow Radhika in the kitchen again! He then embarasses her, by carrying her out of the kitchen!

While Radhika is in the shower, he makes a "DO NOT DISTURB" sign and hangs it outside their door! When she comes out of the shower, she is surprised to see him waiting for her, with towel in hand, ready to dry her hair! While drying her hair he kisses her neck, nibbles on her ears and whispers "I Love you so much, you complete me, and now you are giving me the greatest gift, a BABY we made together......... our LOVE Child! Radhika blushes and hides her face on his chest! He kisses her
sindoor, her forehead, her lips and then there was a loud knock on their door and Vaishali & Dadima calling out to them! Dev tells Radhika to be quiet, they would leave thinking they were sleeping, but no such luck... They kept knocking! Radhika whispers to Dev to let her go, he refuses, but gives in reluctantly... She covers herself from head to toe, pretending to sleep, while Dev opens the, pretending to rub his eyes. He steps outside and shuts the door, asking why they were disturbing them? Dadima grabs his ears and says "why didn't you phone your mom to give us the good news?" Vaishali grabs his other ear grinning, he says "ouch! couldn't you both wait to ask us the good news in the morning, instead of disturbing us? Radhika is sleeping and the doctor ordered complete rest! Please make sure she doesn't cook or do any chores at all!"

Next morning they all fuss over Radhika.... She suffers from morning sickness and runs to the washroom. Dev is worried and rushes after her. He wipes her face with a wet washcloth, tells her he he is sorry and that he can't bear to see her being sick! He said " this will be our First and Last kid!" Radhika smiles and hugs him! She teases him saying..."I guess you and I can't sleep on the same bed, nor hug or kiss each other, in case I get pregnant again?" Hearing this, Dev's mouth opens up in surprise! Radhika laughs and tells him, "don't worry, I am not in pain, and, I'm not the first or only woman in this condition!"



CDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD....................................🤗....That is Dev!




Edited by misti73 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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ChinadollTwo very very good story of RaDev.I like it!👏 Sugarandspice ,i love mytological story you create for our Radev,congrats!😃
Edited by Danadany - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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BOTH PARTS ARE REALLY NICE ........ KEEP IT UP.

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