ASOR - Picnic to Lonavala

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey guys! I m gonna write a new ASOR which is about the Hawks' picnic to Lonavala!!!!!!! So plz tell me if u like it!!!! 😊 😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Mission Zodiac is over and all the hawks plan a picnic to Lonavala to Samrat's farmhouse! Samrat has come to know that his father was a traitor to his own people and turns good and is trying to repent and penance by taking the Hawks on a picnic to his splendid farmhouse in Lonavala. It is decided that they shall leave on Saturday morning and return by Monday morning!!!!
So what say, should I start????????
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Posted: 17 years ago
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So guys I m back with the ASOR!!!!!
As we saw the Hawks are going on a picnic to Lonavala to Samrat's farmhouse ( don't worry the guy has turned good out here) and our ASOR begins when all the Hawks have come to Sameera's house to pick her up.
Sapna- Sameera, tum tayar hui ki nahin? Hawks bas aate hi honge!
Sam- Haan mamma, tayar hi hoon. Bas baal bana rahi hoon! Aapne nashta pack kiya hain na?
Sapna- Haan, maine saara nashta bhi pack kar diya hain aur tum sab logo ke liye lassi bhi banayi hain.
Sam- Wow, mom! You are the best mom in the world!
Sapna- Haan, haan ab baatein banana bandh kar, tere dost abhi aate hi honge!
Just then, the honking of a horn is heard, and all the Hawks have arrived in Samrat's new car, Innova.
Sameera steps out of the house laden with her backpack and the picnic basket full of " ma ka khaana ". Abhi is just gaping at Sameera and scrutinising her from head to toe. The reason being that Sameera is looking stunning in a blue spagetti top with a semi-transperent jacket and black cargoes!!!!!
Seeing Sameera in this attire laden with her backpack and the basket Abhi rushes forward to help and seeing Abhi like this, the other Hawks start wolf-whistling and teasing them.Sameera starts blushing and Abhi too looks slightly embarrased.
Tanvi- Arre Sam, tu kab se dulhan ki tarah sharmane lagi?
Farhan- Samjo yaar, dono ki shaadi hone waali hain kuch hi samay mein to kyun na sharmaye Sameera?
Eesha- Waise Farhan, tum kaise jaante ho ki ladkiyan shaadi ke waqt sharmati hain? Tumhe experience hain kya?
Farhan- O hello! Zyaada mazak mat udao mera warna........!
Eesha- Warna kya?
Sam- Stop it guys, hume der ho rahi hain na?
Abhi- Haan, yaar, der ho jaayegi!
Tanvi- Oh ho! To tum dono lovebirds ko der ho rahi hain? Achcha to theek hain! Guys, Abhi aur Sam ko sabse pechche ki seat de dete hain. Dono aaram se haath mein haath dale romance karenge!
Sam- Bas, yaar Tanvi, ab yeh mazak bandh bhi karo!
Abhi and Sameera are given the backseat and they have good chance of romance out there ( pretty good since the others will be watching a movie.......!) and Farhan and Eesha are seated in the middle and Tanvi and Samrat in the front with Samrat driving.
So they all set off for their picnic and as we shall see ahead that there will be more masti and more romance so to enjoy the fun yourself do read on.......................! 😊
Edited by luv_kdr - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey guys! I m back with the ASOR!!!!
So as we saw last time Abhi and Sameera are given the backseat of the car to enjoy and have fun (and romance too...... šŸ˜† ). The Hawks start their journey towards Lonavala and are headed for some masti and mazak!!!!!
Samrat- Yaar, guys! Tum log hi bataao mein kaun si movie chalau! Main to bada confuse ho gaya hoon!!
Tanvi- Main batati hoon, tum Hum Aapke Hain Kaun chalau! Bada mazaa aayega!! (winks towards Abhi and Sameera šŸ˜‰ )
So all the Hawks agree and while everyone including Sameera is watching the movie, Abhi is up to his own tactics, which naturally involve Sameera. Abhi places his hand around Sameera's waist and pulls her close!
Sam- (whispers) Abhi, yeh tum kya kar rahe ho? Kisi ne dekh liya to?
Abhi- I don't care! Aur waise bhi agar dekh liya to kya hua, akhir tum meri hone waali biwi ho!
Sam- Haan, haan! Ab yeh filmi dailogue bandh karo aur chup-chap movie dekho!
Abhi- Main yahaan movie nahin tumhe dekhne aaya hoon, isiliye-
Eesha- Agar tum lovebirds ko itni hi baatein karni hain to hum movie bandh kare kya?
Sam- Arre nahin Eesha! Abhi to bas aise hi......!
Eesha- Haan, ab to aise hi baatein hone lagi hain na, kyu Tanvi, kya kehti ho?
Tanvi- Chhodo na Eesha, in dono ko shanti se baat karne do! Tum movie dekho aur yeh pretend karo ki yeh dono chup-chap, bina kuch kiye hi bethain hain, hala ki aisa hain nahi, hehe!!!! šŸ˜†
Sam- Stop it, guys!
Everyone goes back to watching the movie and Abhi resumes his tactics- holding Sameera by her waist, playing with her beautiful tresses and of course trying to kiss her but without any luck! 🤢


Suddenly the car stops, and they have reached the farmhouse! It is a beautiful place, secluded and yet so peaceful and quiet. It is on a small hill in front of a huge lake called Pawna Lake. The farmhouse is facing the lake and the hills around, having an amazing view! Samrat welcomes them inside, inside they see a beautiful chandelier hanging in the entrance hall and a much richer and grand chandelier in the living room. The entire living room has white walls with paintings that show the grandeur of the farmhouse. Everyone is shown their rooms- Tanvi and Eesha in the room on the first floor of the farmhouse, so also Farhan and Samrat on the same floor and, Abhi and Sameera are given the two adjoining rooms with balconies facing the lake on the same floor!


Tanvi- Arre yeh kya baat hui, Samrat? Hum sab ko rooms share karne hain aur Abhi Sam ko apne apne rooms, woh bhi adjoining!!!
Samrat- Kya karu? Yahaan sirf char rooms hain aur maine socha ki agar hum lovebirds ko adjoining rooms de dein to unhe bhi thodi privacy mil jayegi!
Farhan- Samjo yaar, Tanvi!
Tanvi- Ohhhh! Theek hain, no problem!
Abhi and Sameera go to their rooms, Sameera's face like red roses. After they enter the rooms and move into the balcony they realise that there is only one big common balcony amongst their rooms, facing the lake. Its a beautiful sight!!!

After all of them freshen up in their respective rooms and put on the picnic attire, they meet in the living room! the girls look really hot in their spagetti tops and sarons and they guys look like cool dudes in vests and shorts!! The guys are literally gaping at the girls, they have never seen these Airforce officers in such an attire, oooohh!!!! A lot of drooling, too!!!

And we leave them drooling with the promise to return back with some water sports and more romance...................! šŸ˜‰

Edited by luv_kdr - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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woww dats gr8 hun! do continue! 😳 šŸ‘ šŸ‘
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Posted: 17 years ago
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really a nice one thank u for update please continue soon


Ankhen to pyar me dilki zuban hoti hai,
sachi chahat to sada bezuban hoti hai,
pyar mai dard bhi mile to kya gabrana,
suna hai dard se chahat aur jawan hoti hai

Edited by kvn1983 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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its too gud continue quickly u have a rlly gud sense of imgination
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Posted: 17 years ago
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it is gr8
cont fast šŸ‘
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Sorry guys, I couldn't post for so long bcoz I had gone out and I just returned yesterday! I had gone to Panchgani where I saw the shooting of CHA when they were on the climax of Mission Zodiac, I also got Jhanvi and Vivan's autographs. I tried to get Iqbal's too but he had already left!!!!
Anyways, I am back with the ASOR and will post it tomorrow! Sorry I am posting it tomorrow but I promise its gonna be really VERY EXCITING!!!!!! So please keep reading and posting your views on the ASOR!!!! 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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plz continue soon i m really waiting t read da update. itz ossam n wonderful. šŸ‘

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