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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: CrzyPulviophile

ShivIka FF of The Fortnight
Pride and Prejudice by missready7
Plot
The story is different from the original IB storyline. This story is about Annika, who was neglected by her flamboyant parents, who later abandoned her because she was an unplanned baby. She was brought up by her grandparents who later died. She stayed with Oberois, a distant family friend of hers for some time. In the times of her stay at Oberoi household, she bonded well with OmRuPri but Shivaay. ShivIka shared an formal bond between a family member or like acquaintances.She was very distant from others. She had always maintained an invisible barrier between her and the world. After staying there, she went to Cambridge to complete her higher studies.
Years later she returned back to India after completing the graduation. The Oberoi household took her to stay there. In her time of stay, she and Shivaay started to became friends and which in turn s into love.
Review:-
The striking part of this FF is the bond between the family members is well depicted and explained. Siblings Love and Bonding are the main attraction which made me fall in love with this FF.
The mind blowing part is the chemistry between ShivIka and their journey from being friends which gradually grows into something more than that of just friends' tag. The ShivIka moments are worth reading.
The most unique parts in this FF is Indian essence. It was one of the most unique concept used in any FF that I've read till now. The scenario of playing indoor games that is commonly played in Indian Households like Ludo and Snake & Ladders is something I never saw being used in an FF. The indoor games played in the household created a serene atmosphere of joviality and happiness for the characters as well as the readers.
Words in my dictionary are not enough to praise it.
SS- New York Trip by vaishnavi31
Plot- ShivIka on a vacation trip to New York. How they realizes their love?

Review-Words are less for me to praise this amazing piece of work. The writer has perfectly described the surroundings of New York, emotions and interactions of the characters are well written.
When I read it, I felt like I was on a trip to NYC myself. This story is like an adventure. The story is really worth of reading for the IBians. I say give it a shot.
Oneshot/Twoshots of the Fortnight

The Rise And Fall of the Beast by Annikaa(TS)

Review:
Give it a try. It's worth of reading. The scenes and emotions are perfectly described and well written. The writing is really heart touching and the anger flaring from Annika was mind blowing.
Confrontation between ShivIka was something I can't describe in words. I'll tell all the readers to read this OS. It's really really worth of reading.

Shivika VM
The editing was aweome. Really loved it and scenes were perfectly depicted.
Shivika VM hawayein by naadanmasakali


Un resed
Need to go back to write my stories😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: annikaa



That's y I love 7.
😆

Try the phone?


Me too 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
RuVya OS of the week:

~FlAsHbAcK's Of OuR LiFe~ RuVya OS feat ShivOm



Review:
It's a fun take on the dynamics that Rudra and Bhavya share. Rudra's childish antics and his spontaneous one-liners have always made us laugh and so will this OS. Give it a try guys, you are going to laugh your heart out 😆

P.S. Sorry for the delay krishi my net hasn't been working lately 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
Shivika dialogue of the week

~Happily Ever After~


Two heartbroken souls wearing masks of ego and happiness to pretend that they don't care anymore yet their eyes, their breath, their emotions, their bodies fail to comply. Since the time of separation, CVs were blocking POV of Shivaay; we could see Anika breaking in front of Chanda, opening her heart in front of OmRu but Shivaay was only breaking stuff around him and blocking any lane that could lead to his heart. These 2 weeks marked return of the lovable, vulnerable Shivaay. Exit of Pari, splintering of concrete wall of Naam Khoon Khaandaan, slight realization of forced separation played all together to mark return of Cryptic Shivaay Singh Oberoi who can fight for his love and will.

While travelling through routes of "Tumhay ni pata tha", "Tumhay kya farq perta hai", "Main nay haath chora ni Tum nay hath churwaya tha", "Main tumhay hurt ni kerna chat tha" , "Ye nishaan to chalay jayein gy, lekin kuch nishaan ni miten gy", "Tumhay mujh per bharosa ni tha Anika" he finally worded what he felt in last 3 months, how he lived through those heart piercing days...He finally mouthed questions that were pricking his heart all the time..

"Sab to sahi tha na..Hum dono to khoosh thay.. Tum say shaadi kernay wala tha main, Mandap b bnaya tha, tum nay dekha tha na.. wo Sufaid Mandap, surprise dena chah raha tha main tumhay.. Phir kaisi majboori?? sab kuch sahi tha.. Ous k baad, hum "Happily ever after" honay walay thay.. Tumhaari hindi picturon may dikhatay hain na..Sab bigad gya..Sab per raita pheil gya.. Tum to khidki tor Anika thi na.. Ghar-tod Anika kab ban gyi.. Kyun.. Kyun kia ye Anika tum nay..Kyun Kyun..."

He finally put the happy picture of Them' in front of her, that how he was planning to live with her for all his life after redemption of the forced marriage.. How the happy figure of Them' dusted into particles. His all hopes, longings and pains were aptly summarized in just those 3 words 'Happily Ever After'


Edited by -AppleOfMaEye- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
OBRO scene of the week

[not to be added in letter: was confused between many scenes.. and there was NO PROPER OBRO moment unfortunately.. most scenes were about OmRu pushing Shivaay towards Ani... ps these weeks were more about love lives of brothers.. and most scenes were covered in other categories.. so going this one]



Words like love, care, compassion define the bond called 'Obros'. Obros is all about holding each other when falling and standing up with each other for each other. And like they say, 'One for All and All for One'. After many moments with 'One for All' we are having 'All for One' moments. Om and Ru are trying to detangle the complicated love life of their elder brother.

In last 2 weeks, Obro scenes were majorly concentrated on Om and Ru pushing Shivaay to workout things with Anika. The pool scene soon after exit of Pari takes the cake this time due to its significance in the track.



Amid all discussions of how a little angel in small basket became center of their little world in a matter of days, they diverted his attention to off-set of his most dominant trait since the start of show i.e. Naam Khoon Khaandan. He slowly transited from the Shivaay Singh Oberoi preferring lineage of blood over color of blood to a Shivaay Singh Oberoi who was ready to adapt Pari without any question on her Naam Khoon Khaandan. He changed but he was unaware of the transitions playing inside him and there comes the role of his both arms i.e. Om and Ru who made him realize how he has shattered heads of those big icons in his mind i.e. Naam Khoon and Khaandan. The only feeling which matters to him by now is Love. They gave him a lot of stuff to mentally churn on. They made him realize the changes in him which he was unaware about. They all stand together for each other and will keep on doing that till their lives last.

Edited by -AppleOfMaEye- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
UPDATED..


on my behalf just siggy remaining...😆
will do that soonish...😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -AppleOfMaEye-

UPDATED..



on my behalf just siggy remaining...😆
will do that soonish...😆


Do we need to make siggy for FF,SS, VM and OS of the fortnight too?😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: CrzyPulviophile


Do we need to make siggy for FF,SS, VM and OS of the fortnight too?😊

You are talking about gift siggys??
Am not sure...
Cox usually in newsletters creative team makes tags ps gift siggys..
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -AppleOfMaEye-

You are talking about gift siggys??

Am not sure...
Cox usually in newsletters creative team makes tags ps gift siggys..


Yup gift siggies. I saw Adi made gift siggies too for Rikara.
Did anyone caught RuvYa OS, SS and FF in the forum?

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: CrzyPulviophile


Yup gift siggies. I saw Adi made gift siggies too for Rikara.
Did anyone caught RuvYa OS, SS and FF in the forum?

Gift siggys are usually made by creatives of NL team..and same pattern is used for all gift siggys..
Krishi might be in better position to reply to this query..

edited: and yeah just got.. may be you were confused via RED text.. i had to select best Siggy for Shivika in CG..😆
Edited by -AppleOfMaEye- - 8 years ago

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