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not.here

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Posted: 9 years ago

#251

Originally posted by: laughingpearls
ARYA ji please make it fast. just saw it I'm running out of time. please pleas

I'll get it done asap

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not.here

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Posted: 9 years ago

#252

Basically...I have no excuses and I just had to post this 🤣

Vidyut!!!!!!! ☺️ hayye! ❤️

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T7JQHM5Leao[/YOUTUBE]

my favourite part is around 3.00 to 3.13 - he dances! he actually dances pretty well lol 😆

addon matakdi ae sohni tu lagdi
Aasmaani moon wali light wangu jagdi ae

but...and a BIG massive but ...who asked him to rap yo yo honey singh's parts and why!!!! 😡
that bit was ...facepalm! he needs more practise on that part and the dancing.

overall like dillagi it has its good parts and its bad parts but me is happy 😳

urvashi is very pretty and a good dancer though and neha kakkar's voice is great as always
meet bros need to get out of the videos and some of those costumes were not as good as they could be

so yeah, i was bored and then remembered this was being launched and now i am happy and soon shall be making an entire gif collection because vidyut jamwal is my muse. 🤣🤣

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not.here

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Posted: 9 years ago

#253

I want to scream until it gets through

Wrap you in my pain till you feel it too

Shred your self into little jagged pieces

With every word I speak when we meet

So that you'll never fit again like before

Then perhaps you will come to realise

This is the love you have given out to me

Bitter is its lasting pain, harsh is its betrayal

Such when these eyes close and sleep comes

May they not be be disturbed and open again

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not.here

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Posted: 9 years ago

#254

I count my blessings upon this hand

But with the other I hold my sins tight

The balance is not within my favour

My heart is too heavy on the scales

I cry out to the intecessors to intervene

I call for a guide to show me how to repent

I plead the judge to spare me the horrors awaiting

But perhaps it's too late and the verdict signed by fate

I committed the biggest sin with the most noble of intentions

To love another more than one's self

For when the time of judgement comes

It's undoubtedly every man for himself

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not.here

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Posted: 9 years ago

#255

Never will I understand man

Whose intellect lifted him to the Moon

But whose emotions keep him bound

In endless conflicts raging upon Earth

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pillowtalk

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Posted: 9 years ago

#256

Got two doubts Arya ji.

Firstly,when he asked her, her name. In this sentence I'm getting her word twice. is it ok.

Secondly, when he saw her holding her head painfully. Even here I'm getting her twice.

please check it. :-!

Edited by laughingpearls - 9 years ago

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not.here

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Posted: 9 years ago

#257

Originally posted by: laughingpearls
Got two doubts Arya ji.

Firstly,when he asked her, her name. In this sentence I'm getting her word twice. is it ok.

Secondly, when he saw her holding her head painfully. Even here I'm getting her twice.

please check it. :-!

Where is this from again? 😕

Sounds like the word was typed twice somehow

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pillowtalk

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Posted: 9 years ago

#258

its from one of my fiction chapter. its narrater dialogue

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not.here

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Posted: 9 years ago

#259

Originally posted by: laughingpearls
its from one of my fiction chapter. its narrater dialogue

Which story and chapter though?

I think the repeated word just needs deleting

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not.here

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Posted: 9 years ago

#260

Originally posted by: laughingpearls
lol please edit the sentence

I will but tell me which story and which chapter it is.
It'll help me to find the sentence so I can fix it.
Also, I'm going to do the note publishing right now
Is that okay?

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