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mem1

@mem1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#481

I don't want to be from Khushi's side either... I just want to be Khushi ...

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Maria Ahmed

@Maria151994

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Posted: 11 years ago

#482

Originally posted by: mem1
I don't want to be from Khushi's side either... I just want to be Khushi ...

Welcome to my cub..wasa ab shadi ho gai hai😆

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Jignasha

@Chokri_ASR

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Posted: 11 years ago

#483

Damn meetings this morning, prevented me to post my latest guess but am here now. All right ready for my guess...the bedroom surprise/shock...

Could it be Arnav was in shower when Anjali called, as he stepped out he hears them on the stairs so quickly walks into Khushi's room only with a wrapped towel. BHAM...what do you think about that?

Seriously I am going crazy...don't think any story has done this me...my brain is on overload and distracting me from working on my presentation. Thank Juhi for this wonderful story!!!!

Edited by Hetnjig - 11 years ago

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Jignasha

@Chokri_ASR

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#484

Originally posted by: EXPELLIARMUS

Yeh petition sunne ke liye blog mein koi DT nahi hai 😆

And about the update, I have stopped writing it in 2 parts now. I only did that because I had problems with posting anything over 5000 words at one go in IF, but now that there are no such restrictions on the blog, it's going to be one long. massive update.😉

Hopefully, no one falls asleep in between!

Best news I have seen today "it's going to be one long. massive update" a couple of things:

WOOHOO...YEAH 🥳

My mind is in the gutter...long, massive...hummm... 😳

About us falling asleep in between...NEVER...EVER especially when its LONG and MASSIVE 🤣

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Maya

@What_the

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#485

And all my dreams are of kisses in the moonlight, with a man who desires me as I have wanted to be desired all my life.

I just loved this sentence...one can really see the girl who spent all her life making sacrifices, finally realising that she has missed out on some things...and who better than Arnav to..ahem!!! show her the ropes...?

Waiting for Chapter 4 eagerly...

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awroneema

@awroneema

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#486

if i were ur Arnav, then ryt now I would have been taming a horse if not khushi...☺️

but hence i m a mare Baaarati,,,,neither can afford to tame a horse nor O
I want to dream 🤢 to tame khushi so while waiting for the update m taming my ❤️birds...Arnav and khushi...😆

my Arnav- khushi have done there deed already & SUCCESSFULLY 😉 moreover my...khushi has laid 2 eggs in past 2 days...but Wat is ur khushi's report card saying Juhi...any progress or not!! is ur arnav's performance satisfactory or not?? pappu n his pappi pass hoga k nahi!!

bandhuu mera hua ab tera kab hoga...

PS: photo credit Google jee

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yoga123

@yoga123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#487

waiting for next update......

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awroneema

@awroneema

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Posted: 11 years ago

#488

Originally posted by: Hetnjig

Damn meetings this morning, prevented me to post my latest guess but am here now. All right ready for my guess...the bedroom surprise/shock...

Could it be Arnav was in shower when Anjali called, as he stepped out he hears them on the stairs so quickly walks into Khushi's room only with a wrapped towel. BHAM...what do you think about that?

Seriously I am going crazy...don't think any story has done this me...my brain is on overload and distracting me from working on my presentation. Thank Juhi for this wonderful story!!!!

khushi toh khushi...

but maine kya bigada...

aise pic dikhakar meri halat kiu kharab karr diya...hayeee☺️

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esamoe

@esamoe

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Posted: 11 years ago

#489

Finally got a chance to catch up with shaadi ...👏

Firstly thanks for making the chat club its my first time :) glad you have made a blog at least now u are not restricted and can be more creative 😉 I really adore the respect and concern you have for your readers its ver heart warming

Chapter 1:

Wow we have Arnav Khushi married an attraction known to both living alone in another country and no nafrat can this get any better...they chemistry and this situation makes me think of all the possibilities "sigh" left day dreaming...

The contract marriage is here I like how your story has the essence of the show but set in an alternative universe.

Payal is such a brat here... I love this Khushi she still has that caring,innocent, selfless nature here but at the same time she's educated, strong and practical I can't wait to see how her character shapes up..

Uff and Arnav I'm loving him! His every girls dream...

His so blunt, honest ,straightforward and shamelessly flirty not forgetting a billionaire can he get any better. It won't be long before Khushi falls for his charms.

Btw I love the length of your chapters but even though the long I'm always left wanting more!

Chapter 2:

Love how you entwine all the character in your story Mami the housekeeper,NK th assistant,Aman Khushi's boss and Lavanya the bodyguard hilarious not forgetting Sheetal lurking around in the background I hope she doesn't cause trouble to our newlywed... Why is Khushi uncomfortable with La I expected them to be friends maybe in the future...and why does she speak of Arnav with such familiarity?

Loved your description of the penthouse and menlo park maybe you can post picture when you have time :) loved the conversation about "the thing"

Why did Arnav blast of because of the medicine??does it have something to do with his past?

Chapter 3:

Aman is one selfish man how dare he blame Khushi I did have my initial doubts thinking maybe Arnav was involved but he clarified that and we all know how honest Arnav is :) hope Aman is outa the pic for good or a while atleast.

Khushi's predicament on undressing her sexy husband was hilarious and sexy it had that sexual ambience and had me blushing...thank god for zippers "blush". The morning after teasing was cute loving Arnav's flirty nature

Poor Khushi she is justified in feeling down because of her mother and Payal"s behavior I can still understand Payal but not her mother's behavior after all she is a mother and should consider both her daughers not forget her elder 1 just because she's married.

Adore the bond they already have that Arnav picked up something was bothering Khushi glad she found solace in him. It was good to see Arnav trying to occupy her so she didn't have to think about them adoring how they contract relationship is turning into a beautiful one.

Wow Arnav apologized for his behavior and had a pretty good reason also..Khushi read him well about him not liking people fusing over him and he definitely cares about her and knows she's a genuine caring person.. They understanding and knowledge about each other is a starting point in they relationship. Arnav's mother overdosing was really sad to read.

I found Nk's staring and curiosity abit weird and creepy I don't know why maybe once I read more about him my views will change his too sweet to be a grey character.

Coming to the best part of the chapter the KISS!

It was just perfect...glad she's initiating things and for once doing something that makes her feel good.

The way you described the kiss was amazing "sigh"

Her inexperience peck that left her wanting more and him showing her the art of kissing it was romantic and intense and then his flirty dismissal perfect!!

Thank you for writing such an amazing story it has got me captivated!