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pallavi.14

@pallavi.14

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#871

Mmm...kya main yahan par SL ka rough draft post karun..maine abhi takk proof read nahi kiya hai...

tum padke batao kaisa hai tabhi usko fair karungi or agar changes chahiye toh woh karungi...

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pallavi.14

@pallavi.14

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#872

check page 144 my last post fr update...

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Purplevalley

@Ocean.eyes

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#873

As per story is going beautiful part
evrything was covered perfectly in this update
actually i loved it
light hearted
that suspicious thing...rey with bat was hilarious..lol
and then the celebration
wowww...that was a unique piece i tel u

specialz the "DAD" thing and that LINE
deja vu lol
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Talking of mistakes...there are many
Jaise kahi kahi dialogues ko bold nai kia
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Spell errors
aur bohot jagao par kuch words missing hai...like in midle of sentences

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Misha

@Born2Dance

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#874

me full sad !

change my mood NOW !

or me will do roi roi !

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Purplevalley

@Ocean.eyes

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#875

Originally posted by: Born2Dance
me full sad !
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change my mood NOW !

or me will do roi roi !

kya hua
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Nd me kya karu bolo

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Misha

@Born2Dance

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#876

aashiqui 2 dekhi

yeh hua

n kaise kalogey menu ni pata

bus kalo dats it !

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Purplevalley

@Ocean.eyes

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#877

Originally posted by: Born2Dance
aashiqui 2 dekhi
</div><div>
yeh hua

n kaise kalogey menu ni pata

bus kalo dats it !

KISNE KAHA THA DEKHNe ko...
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Hey bhagwan...
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Pg144 last post padha

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Misha

@Born2Dance

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#878

emku dekhni thi

i went wid my frnds

nly dey no hw i survived it !

n nahi pada !

will read in nite mast !

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Purplevalley

@Ocean.eyes

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#879

Originally posted by: Born2Dance
aashiqui 2 dekhi
</div><div>
yeh hua

n kaise kalogey menu ni pata

bus kalo dats it !

KISNE KAHA THA DEKHNe ko...
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Hey bhagwan...
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Pg144 last post padha
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Brb

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Purplevalley

@Ocean.eyes

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#880

Originally posted by: Born2Dance
emku dekhni thi
</div><div>
i went wid my frnds

nly dey no hw i survived it !

n nahi pada !

will read in nite mast !

hey bhagwan..
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Ok padhle
mast hai