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Farwa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: zonera1
Hi Every One!I am new here I jurt read the whole FF in 1 go and my hands are raised in salute for the brilliant story writing by Aquiline.
I am giddy with delight to have revisited most of the Arhi scenes with such a royal touch!

oh a new frnd great welcome hun welcome to the royal land of Arhasia and this warm cotage with lots of warm ppl with loving hearts

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Farwa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: A_Soul
Hey Hoopoe, Shass n Bablio... the quick one.. if i remember correctly... Lin has metioned that Lordy was leading towards East in forest.. at that time i had a thought that if they will face Gen. Jha there, but then i thought this is too early for face off so i didnt mention...
And Shass, did he encounter Gen Jha in both the form?? i could not separate it out, when this has been mentioned.. yes he recognize him so his face is in human form or similar to that only but i think his full body was trasformed, then only he could move/hide/fly so fast right...? i think i have to read it again...

@Bablio... everyone is talking about ur post... oh god i hv missed all this.. m eagar to read it now.. i have to find time now..!!

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Aquiline

@Aquiline

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: maverickmartin

It was nice wandering around on my own. 😆

Lady Em! * chuckle* I had a laughed imagining you wander about in the Inn and Cottage and posting the parchments on the doors, telling people a new Thread was opened!! You are really a unique Arhasian, I admit!!

Originally posted by: zonera1
Hi Every One!I am new here I jurt read the whole FF in 1 go and my hands are raised in salute for the brilliant story writing by Aquiline.
I am giddy with delight to have revisited most of the Arhi scenes with such a royal touch!

Now, I feel giddy reading your comments dearest Zonera!!! Honoured to have you amongst us, dear!!

Originally posted by: medharees
wow this is like the fellowship of the ring...i'm really loving it

Medha!!! The Poetess of Arhasia! Your very rare visit to the Thread with these words forced me to make this in honour of your comment: To all my dear Comrades, I give you:

How is it? I know its not good to edit something so classic but I couldn't help it! *chuckle* Will delete it off as soon as you guys have seen it!

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zonera1

@zonera1

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: -Farwa_Ibrahim-

oh a new frnd great welcome hun welcome to the royal land of Arhasia and this warm cotage with lots of warm ppl with loving hearts

Thank U Thank U!
I am so happy to be in the lovely land of Arhasia.And getting a warm welcum from all of U!

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bablio09

@bablio09

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Rabba Ve all, just sneaked 😉 in

and lo LInny is here 👏

@ KP and A_Soul - Hey KP mere pass bhi zyada dimag nahi hai. Please am not like A.S.H. to decode or analyse. Infact I eagerly wait to read their comments. About the Gen. it was just a guess. i dont much get into deeper meanings and symbolisms i dont understand.

@shass - read your comment buddy. TY

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Aquiline

@Aquiline

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Something I wanted to share with you all. One of our Comrades named DINGLE (you will find her name on the parchment, of course- she was the first one who brought me a pic of the supposed Raizada Castle on one of her expeditions to find the place)...

Yes, as i was saying, Dingle gave birth to a baby girl two weeks ago. She was often busy with her family life and matters and hence could not always comment or come to visit us as often as she could one. Anyhow, she shared this news with me only last day and I could not stop myself from sharing this with you all. I asked her if she could bring her child to the Inn or Cottage one day and she has permitted us to have a little peek to see the blessed Little One...

http://sphotos-d.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/403094_10152289566460582_1683759064_n.jpg

She has asked to not paste the picture here but to see the child and then on my return, to delete the link as well, in honour of safeguarding the child though she trusts the "Arhasians:"

Snatches of her own words:

"gave birth to a healthy but very noisy baby girl 2 weeks ago...been busy attending to guests, being pampered by loved ones and trying to get my head around the fact that ME... probably the least maternal woman who's never really grown up is now a mother and responsible for a little life. And yes you wont believe how much the family wanted Khushi as her name. until she became a day old... my sister suggested Misha which is Arabic for Pretty and Beautiful...And about the picture of the child, she captioned: This is Misha at a week old eating her hand cos clearly I don't feed her enough"

Anyhow, here's wishing her Congratulations on her Happy Occasion, until time permits us to meet her again on the Thread.

Edited by Aquiline - 12 years ago

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Aquiline

@Aquiline

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: bablio09
Rabba Ve all, just sneaked 😉 in

and lo LInny is here 👏

Rabba Ve!

Surprisingly! And lo Linny is about to go! *wink* Its a thick flood in my room. Scattered with books and papers and notes! I think I am the messiest during my exam weeks!! Hope you are doing well, Bablio!!

Originally posted by: hoopoe

Gen Jha... ... him doing his usual nocturnal expedition in the dark forest to cope up with his beastly transformation...

He was on his one usual nocturnal flight when his beastly instincts signalled him of her presence... he was not sure and hence he landed in the midst of the forest, entered the hut to check and confirm that his beastly senses were indeed right. In all his curiosity and excitement he ignored the presence of a second figure inside the hut. He was busy checking and admiring her face in the darkness and wondering about her unexpected presence in this odd jungle miles away from the castle and village...

Just then his alert senses informed him of human movement beside him...he was shocked and confused about letting a human to look at him in his transformed state... he swiftly moved out ready to fly away from that place... but when he found the person chasing him with a surprising speed... coping up with his beastly viguor... he panicked. Instead of flying out of the forest, he started running swiftly through the forest... which is not his forte, i guess. With his initial panic slowly changing to blind rage and fury, he started making flaws in his moves making it a quite repetitive pattern, which worked in advantage of the clever chaser to guess his next move easily... and catch him.

The Gen turned to look at his chaser, with all intention of scaring him to death by showing him his deadly beastly form... but when he recognised the face of the person... he was shocked... similar to his opponent. But he was very quick in recovering from the initial shock and took the momentary stupified state of his opponent to his advantage... and flew off the dark forest...

Lord Arnav... his questions were about "why?" ...and not "what?" of the creature's present beastly state.

Hence I guess he is already aware of the creature's existence but not of its recent beastly transformations...

Hoopoe! I bow to you! I really do. NO ONE, I say, NO ONE has pictured exactly what I intended as you have done here. All the Red are, let's say, outstandingly right. (Shucks! I am helping with the interpretations) But the Green ones are not. I will only give you questions in return for them:

Do you think a strong-scent-sensed beast like him, who could sense Kushi's presence in the forest from afar, could not "scent" the man into whose family he belongs? Then you must ask: If he knew Lord Arnav lay there, why didn't he stop himself from entering the hut? You have already given the answer for that.

Keeping the answer of the first question in mind, I am sure you will know that it was not with an intention to scare the man off that he stopped in the middle of the forest but because he was cornered and hence forced to confront.

Okay! *zip* No more helpings, you guys are brilliant and can figure all this out yourself. But I just had to tell you how wonderfully you pictured what I had intended...So ended up writing all this. * shakes head at self*

Edited by Aquiline - 12 years ago

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bablio09

@bablio09

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

She is sooo sweet,. such cutie pie, angel. May God Bless dear Misha.

Congratulations Dingle, Welcome to the gang of MOMs. God Bless.

Take care

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Aquiline

@Aquiline

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: hoopoe

I still cant figure out why Lin gave such a mysterious warning about the STORM... i mean this face off between the protagonist and antagonist of the story is quiet expected, though not this early... but it has to happen to move the story further. I was expecting something unusual to hit as a storm to readers... but it turned to be a storm in Lord Arnav's life. If not for the disclaimer i would have enjoyed the chapter much better.

Hm. This has certainly cleared my mind a bit. My frequent disclaimers were not, I suppose for the willing-to-take-anything-you-give readers of mine but for those who...well, you know. Next time, NO DISCLAIMERS. The disclaimer I had given was not about the storm that was to hit the Arhaisa in the Tale but the Arhasia where the Inn was. It was about the psychological storm of doubts, fear and mistrust on seeing what the chapter ended with. Ah well, my bad. Sorry for the unwanted scare. It hurts to know you could not enjoy the chapter better, dear Hoopoe. Darn! Me and my Disclaimers!! Not selling anymore of those from now. I know you guys will take it as it comes. So I'll keep mum from now on, and you drown yourself in the chapters the way you love to!!! Oh and yes, with regard to if there is a storm in the Tale, I think we need to remember what Shas keeps saying. She was the only one who remained utterly calm after reading the disclaimer and read it for what it proposed...And Shas. Will comment on your wonderful, breath-taking comments on my chapters when I find time. They deserve to be given time and thought to be replied to!!!

Originally posted by: shass
. but i think..dis was not storm.. da ''storm'' will form now! dis was just a preview..

Edited by Aquiline - 12 years ago

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A_Soul

@A_Soul

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: Aquiline
Something I wanted to share with you all. One of our Comrades named DINGLE (you will find her name on the parchment, of course- she was the first one who brought me a pic of the supposed Raizada Castle on one of her expeditions to find the place)...
Yes, as i was saying, Dingle gave birth to a baby girl two weeks ago. She was often busy with her family life and matters and hence could not always comment or come to visit us as often as she could one. Anyhow, she shared this news with me only last day and I could not stop myself from sharing this with you all. I asked her if she could bring her child to the Inn or Cottage one day and she has permitted us to have a little peek to see the blessed Little One...

She has asked to not paste the picture here but to see the child and then on my return, to delete the link as well, in honour of safeguarding the child though she trusts the "Arhasians:"

Snatches of her own words:

"gave birth to a healthy but very noisy baby girl 2 weeks ago...been busy attending to guests, being pampered by loved ones and trying to get my head around the fact that ME... probably the least maternal woman who's never really grown up is now a mother and responsible for a little life. And yes you wont believe how much the family wanted Khushi as her name. until she became a day old... my sister suggested Misha which is Arabic for Pretty and Beautiful...And about the picture of the child, she captioned: This is Misha at a week old eating her hand cos clearly I don't feed her enough"

Anyhow, here's wishing her Congratulations on her Happy Occasion, until time permits us to meet her again on the Thread.