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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: iolahardy

Making rishi -ve wud b the yuckiest thing they ever do. nothing will destroy the very spirit of HD as rishi turning -ve!


Who is there in ur new dp??
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ashish.sachi


Who is there in ur new dp??



julia roberts 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
I posted this in the forum. As many of you are not visiting it, I thought I would repost it here to see if there any Sumitians who also find the new director lacking.

PS: Sorry for the long exposition

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When we all heard that a new director was coming, we were all happy, hoping that some choppiness of scenes will be addressed, proper focus will be paid on closing of scenes as well as honing on emotions of characters in key scenes.


Director
This director is taking the show backwards, not forwards. One pet peeve of mine is how the audience is shown that this is an important scene. What the director forgets is that audience is intelligent. Music and dialogues, emotions of characters are enough to get the meaning. In these situations less is more.

But the director seems to believe the opposite. His favorite technique is to zoom in and out of a charcater's face, then give some white space and then zoom in on another characater's face with some "dahma-kedar" music. This is so stupid😡 It ruins the scenes. He has done this many times. Even today, he used it when the family is getting impatient waiting for Rishi, as well as crucial scene where the family comes to know that Rishi is missing and Indira is going to wait for him.

These scenes were so key and the drama was all lost in the OTT editing as well as poor direction for actors. We get that the family is impatient for Rishi to show up. But we do not need the damakedar zoom in followed by blank screen and then zoom in on another character followed by white space etc.

Actors blank faces - no frantic anxiety
  • Of all the actors portraying SF, I only found Sandeep the best today. Even when his face was blank, by the expression in his eyes, one can tell what is cooking in his brain. But the rest were complete duds. Expressionless, no surprise, anxiety, shock, curiosity ... Where could Rishi have gone?

  • Most of all Kapil Soni has been a big disappointment. He was excellent when Vidith was ill and could not speak. But now, he can, his face is all blank and eyes are dead. this has been the case in all past scenes where he had a role to play.

  • Same with the actor who plays her father. He acted so well in the past, like when Rishi caught him with the necklace etc. Today, he just was dumb with that stock face where mouth is all open and face is blank.


Rati and Direction + Editing = Failure to show fast gambit of emotions cycling thru her repetitively, making her more frantic with each cycle
Rati did a good job, but disappointed me towards the end. One of Rati's great strength is the ability to use her excellent voice as an instrument to convey Indira's emotions. From a stunted little girl scared of love ...to... hitlergiri - her voice is her key instrument.

Today we needed to see disbelief, extreme anxiety, fear chasing frantically across her face as well as in her voice and her actions. We needed to see her heart in her throat. We needed to se her gulping her fear down

I was disappointed that we did not see that. We as audience know that Indira is experiencing all this. But we needed to see it too. Rati is capable of this. We saw a glimpse of this when Ishaan was missing.

I do not know whether it is the case of poor acting, or poor direction as well as editing.

Also jarring was when Munnabhai is taunting her saying that Rishi has left her. Normal Indira (i.e. Hitler) is such a focussed girl that in this situation, all her attention would have been focussed on looking in all directions, eyes frantically searching for Rishi. She would not even have heard his taunt and when pressed for attention would have swatted him away with barely a second's worth of attention.

But this Indira ( and I suspect it is the director's messy direction) had time and braincells to entertain their question, hear them patiently and then tell them to go. Hitler would not have wasted those precious seconds entertaining inane questions.

The editing of the scenes, especially closeups also did not convey that frantic feeling.

Rati nails most of Indira's scenes. But this is the first time I felt a disconnect between what was shown and what I should feel.


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Posted: 13 years ago
just saw the episode...pata nahi kya durbuddhi hoti hai muze aisa sab karti hoon

@ Jem:

i dont understand much of the technicalities which u have mentioned in ur post. so i will keep it simple to what i liked n wat i didnt:

Likes:
  • InShi moment...thats it! No other thing

Disliked:

  • Although i liked the InShi moment, i find their scenes getting repetitive & very cliched. The bangles, the pallu getting stuck in the sleeve are shown in almost every TV show. InShi moments were special because they were so natural...this scene had a 'practiced' look about it
  • The dialogues are plain boring & the constant use of 'shrimatiji', 'miyaji', 'patideviji' irritates me now
  • i really do not understand how long will they show Indiras family changing loyalties. Last nite kutumb had gotten all motherly & today she was back to being the insensitive jerk that she is.
  • Vidhit is just so blank wid all his expressions! Even Indira...the smiles, the tension, the feeling that something horrible is gonna happen...all looked forced, it wasn't natural, i cud make out she was acting
  • Towards the end the way the camera went round n round...it just made my head spin. i actually looked away from the screen. what had they meant to achieve by that?...a sense of doom which indu feels?
  • Cliches & Repetitions: The thanedarji who pretends to be bad but has a golden heart, indiras first impression of him as a corrupt guy, the shaadi dialogue by rishi, inshi moment, the moment wen their hands separated (i know i shud have cried but i kept waiting for the scene to change!), the search for rishi which should have been frantic & desperate...but wasnt!
  • Lack of emotions: Today was supposed to have been a very emotional episode, but i didnt feel anything. i waited for the scenes to change, i waited for the story to progress! it shud have given me heartache; but no, it just gave me a mighty headache! 😆This mite anger or hurt some...but since finish of the court case i have found all the emotions to be more of a NAUTANKI than anything true, sincere & heartfelt.

So i guess my complaints are in all departments...sad dialogues, absurd direction, weird camera angles, not so convincing acting & i wont even mention the story 😆


Edited by iolahardy - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hii to all i missed yesterdays episode but after updates mene repeat dekha 😆

and you dun believe me guys actually i was crying for inshi and its so difficult for me to hide my tears from my mom (me emotional fool 😆)

but me really very sad for them😭
the last inshi scene aah it was so simple yet so beautiful and heartbreaking

after long tym rishi call her "shrimati ji" that was so cute 😳
he buys bengals for her and the scene jaha indu ka dupatta and rk ka sleeve atak jata hai as if it says ki "dun go rishi please"

and did ya guys notice how sad she becomes jab wo dupatta apni sleeves se alag karta 😭

and then the sad BG music 😭

it so painful to watch 😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
jjkg - i dun know abt direction n all

but i love the last inshi scene 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
hello shalu ben 😆
wassup???
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: iolahardy

hello shalu ben 😆
wassup???



haayoo ben 😆 daya ben ki aatma ghus gayi kya 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -shalz-



haayoo ben 😆 daya ben ki aatma ghus gayi kya 🤣



😆 kya kar rahi hai
forum ki ke haal chaal...zinda hai ya marr gaya😆 ya ghayal hai rishi ki tarah😭( tears for rishi😆)


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: iolahardy



😆 kya kar rahi hai
forum ki ke haal chaal...zinda hai ya marr gaya😆 ya ghayal hai rishi ki tarah😭( tears for rishi😆)




lol ghayal hai ab rishi aayega then forum bhi jaag jayega 😆

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