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Posted: 14 years ago
and i don't believe that WHY are u so angry? 😡 . You do take me for granted!! .. remember u disappeared about a million times without telling me and in spite of my anger, u kept on repeating your mistakes, acting as if i speak french!! .. *hmph* .. but NOW fianlly i see SOME improvement in you!!

anyways yes humsafar is a complex story, and u broke my heart with telling me about Gunjan and Samrat, they had such a cute scene in the beginning 😭 but obviously u better know how to take the story forward 😳

and well epilogue..ummm..i think u all will like the way i would end the story!! 😳

P.S - now who is naughty? 😆
, fine i'll edit!! 😆

Edited by Fantasia. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Arrey that was earlier - you can't say it now - now see I am being a good girl ... and look at my number of posts - it's 686!!!😲

And well Gunjan and Samrat can't be together - she is her student and he is his secretary ... Well and no matter what - I demand an epilogue - it's a must!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
stop counting every single increase in number of your posts!! 😳 , it's still a long way! 🤣

pearl, i can't write the epilogue because i have completed typing the story and that is where i want to end, like the final incident where their magic completely blossomed..please be a good baby and understand 😳
Edited by Fantasia. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Oh God, do you actually thing that I will reach there🤣

And okay fine, don't give an epilogue - but in the next story I want an epilogue - it's like a perfect finishing to the story - okay :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
This is what i HATE about you!! don't u dare say such foul things again!! why won't u reach?, kiya problem hai??, u will reach inshAllah!

and well i love epilogues and i have wriiten a few of them, but i think they are tooo monotonus when i write, like ending with children and all..😕
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yes yes, okay okay - I'll surely reach there - hum honge kaamyaab ek din ...🤣

Try to think something different - I am sure you can add a lot of things to it apart from children, don't worry and I too love epilogues ... And you know as NRTY will finish in another 10 updates, I have already planned another love story and I am now searching for good names for the characters 😕
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Posted: 14 years ago
don't laugh when i am scolding!! 😳

anyways WHAT can i add except for children, i mean a long essay about the feelings?? .. 😕
and what names do u require? christain, muslim or hindu?
JaeeDevRathore thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Okay I won't laugh 😳

No you can write something about their relationship, about their life or maybe you can tell what happened in future like I did in Anjaane ... something of that sort or maybe you can write about the story - describe and analyse it - the way you saw it ... there are loads of things you can put in an epilogue ...

Names - nothing specific but contrasting names ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
hmmm..but sometimes i think it's better to leave things, like let it all happen in their own world, .. like my story was just till the point their magic competely blossomed, after that is understood that all is well!! 😆 but still lets see..😳

and well u can use "shama" and "jal", these are urdu words, shama is flame and jal is water..just a random suggestion 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
Well that's true - you cannot over-blossom the magic😉 Shama and Jal - no ... the characters are not like that 😆 Let see, how about Noor and Sharang?

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