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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sindu555


kahay ka happy keya has given me aheart attack ... now sana only sad sad 😭

cill baby . . . spam her thread . . . may b she will change her mind . . .😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: 7thHeaven

welcome to the gang sana . . . i just finished reading My dark lover and i guess i do not need to tell u why i was crying and now u gonna cry . . . just for u i'll update the bride tomorrow and pakka promise u will defo laugh . . .

eva . . . k . . . i'll start reading heart beats once m done with esoteric love . . .


@muski dark lover ki to baat mat ker .. mujhay pata hai how I survived it ... abhee to keya madam full mood mein theen us ka end rewrite kernay mein .. and make it more sad and make maan move ahead with Sam .... dont even go there babe .. "jitters"

i love u for BSLS 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey who ever wants to know how gr8 of an writer keya is read dis
😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉
part 5


Geet walked outside flowed by maan...
Maan: "what do you think of your self? How dare you talk to me like that?"
Geet: "ahhhhhhaaahhaha... Are you a prince from the haven that I can't talk to you like that!"
Maan: shut up!
Geet: you shut up
Maan: how dare you? Do you have any clue who I am?
Geet: I don't care... For me you are shallow... A rude, un respectful person... And people who gives you respect I think they are the more idiot then you are... Except dadi of course.
Maan: "keep dadima out of this" he shouted louder.
Geet: I am.... That's why I have said dadi of course... Listen then talk.
Maan: how dare you!

Dadi comes out both no where near stopping...
Dadi: maan enough!
Maan: dadi tell this girl to disappear!
Geet: "why should I? You disappear... Anyway this beautiful night don't want to see your ugly face... Go and hide somewhere in your ugly file..."
Maan: geet!
Dadi laughed...
Maan: dadi! That's it!
He walked off in extremely angry mood... While geet in her house.

Adi: dadi this is the first time I seen maan getting so involved with female!... I mean it's a arguments but still... U know.
Dadi: yes you r right... But I think she is perfect for dev! What do you think...
Adi: ummmm

Weeks have passed it was near time for dadi and maan to leve... Geets and maans arguments were no where near stopping....

Saturday maan was in his room on the laptop... Designing some blue print... It was unexpectedly quit... maan thought... That's not right!... Usually that geets bak bak doesn't let him do anything... He peeped through the window... Hmm he thought... Only heer Arman and pinky...
Pinky still didn't realize it's her MSK... She only seen him three time and every time geet and him starts arguments.
Dadi gave up on there relationship and working on dev and geets.
Maan: "phew at last silents..."
There wasn't a single day that they didn't argu... "backwage laki! Hamesha meri demag katih hi..."

Near Day of there departure...

Dadi: beta... Can we take geet with us? She have 2weeks holiday...
Dad: per...
Mum: let her go... She will enjoy...
Dad: tik hi...

Maan was un ware of geet coming with them... He can't even stand her... And two weeks in his house not going to help him at all.
He completely forgot about the land...

Day of departure:

Dadi and geet left early...
Geet: dadi why this plane is empty?
Dadi: it's actually...
Adi and maan walks in... He nearly trips seeing geet there...
Maan: tum!
Geet gave dadi a look...
Dadi: ha... She is staying with us for two weeks holiday!
Maan: "NO dadi that's it... I had enough of her this past moth... I can't bare her anymore.
Geet: that's it dadi I am not coming...
Dadi: geet chup... Sit down... Maan shh... She is are guest now...
Maan gave geet a glare and sat somewhere where he can't see her face.
Adi sat opposite of her...
Adi: kasi ho geet?
Geet: tik hu
Adi: exited
Geet: ha buhat... My first time... She said excitedly.
Adi: first time!
Geet: yes every few years mum and dad went but we never.... Me my brothers and sister never had the chance!
Adi: aww... I am sure you will love it.
Dadi: of course she will.... there is vicky and dev to show her round.
Geet smiled: who are they dadima?
Dadima: my other two grandson...
Geet: OH... Are they like him!
Dadima laughs: no beta much much nicer...

Maan: Dadima I am still here...

Geet: who told you u r not?

Flight was 7hours long.... Geet dadima and adi didn't stop talking... Laughing screaming... Making the most of it.... For the first time maan felt extremely annoyed... Was.... Changed his mind... "I rather work then Talk to the stupid geet" he thought... "always drives me insane!"

Geet dadima and adi were playing catch the spoon with cards... Geet won nonstop three time in a row.... She became bored after a while... Dadi let's play something els...
Dadi: not now beta I am tirade!..
Geet: I am sorry dadi... I think you should rest... Actually we all should... I mean we are not all robot... Unlike someone.
All giggled...
Maan at the back... "getting really p off..."

All fell sleep... Geet unwillingly woke... She looked round... Adi looked really upset... Maan and dadi were in deep sleep...

Geet: adi sir are you alright?
Adi: no I am just... U know... Bored...
She smiled looked round to do something... Found a black marker pen.... Took some paper out... Let's play nots and crosse... Someway to kill time.... She smiled.

After while they became bored geet got up from the set walked round for a while.... Watched maan in his sleep...

Geet: adi sir giv me the pen...
Adi: why?
Geet: just do....

In geets amusement she draw all over maans face.... Geet giggled... As she draws a dark musts.... In old king days style... With a twist at the end... Maan kept hitting her hand in his sleep while she giggled way... A pirates black eye...
Adi became suspicious after while.... : what are you doing geet?
Geet: shhhh....
After while she finished.... Adi came round.... His mouth fell open in sock...
Adi: tum to gi!
Geet: ku?
Adi: he won't spare you?
Geet: he needs to get involve in jokes.. His life is black and White at the moment!
Geet dragged adi to the sit... Told him to keep quit...

After hour... Both dadi and maan woke up....
He felt a bit weird on his face.... Could see something black from corner of his eyes... But he ignored... He stood up looked at dadi and geet... As he blinked a pirate blind eyes appeared... Dadi was shocked and burst out in laugh!
Maan was confused... "umm!"
Dadi looked at geet... Who was killing her self laughing... Adi on the other side didn't have the gut to look at maan... He just imagined and cried him self of laughing....

It's MSK after all who could do such thing like this to him!
When he moves... Peoples forces them to look down... He is the great MSK... And geet... Who didn't even care... Unaware about his true identity!...

Maan..: "why are you all laughing at me..."
Geet just laughed more at his word.... Maan guessed is something to do with geet...
Maan: chup adi...
He couldn't shout at dadi or geet as she will start a argument so decided to take on adi!
Dadi: look at
Ur face maan...
Maan gave dadi a look... And walked to the wash room.... He screamed : geeetttttttttttt

Geet straight way stood up and walked towards him.... "what's wrong?" she said while laughing....
Maan: "do you find this funny?"
Geet: "what? Your face... Yes"
She laughed louder...
The ink... More like a powder ink... Wasn't dry properly...
Geet were standing on the entrance blocking his exit....
Maan: "that's it!...."

Geet was wearing a skinny jense and a top... Which didn't cover her belly properly... Maans cold hand grabbed her by waist... He could feel the warmth of her skin... He based her against the wall... Geet was a bit shocked with this attatude... And started to rub all the ink with his face to her face....
He was holding her tight.... His whole body pushing her against the wall... His one hand holding her both hand and another her hair... So she can't move...
He rubes his cheek against her... His eyes on her... He forehead... Geet protested every touch... Trying her best to free her self.... She tried to jerk her face but no use... Her body was glued to his... No exit...
Geet closed her eyes in horror.... Could feel his rough breath on his.... He aggressively didn't stop in tell he was fully satisfy that both of there face was covers in black ink...
As his grip started become loose geet pushed him against the opposite wall...

Maan spoke up atlas: never mess with me!
Geet stood there as he observed maan washing his face...

Geet just stood there in sock... He shoved maan off from in front of the mirror and cheked her face....
Geet: awwww! How dare you?
Maan just looked at her in amuse...
He shoved her off and started to wash his face again not before geet diatribes him again.
After while geet started to spree water on him... "GO WAY!"
Maan just loved his victory... She was extremely snood with him... But he didn't stop... This time he holds her tight round her waist and shoves her to the side... But not freeing her... So she can't shove him again.... He was very strong... One hand was enough to control geet.... After few minutes of struggle she gave up... And started to call dadi... Dadi! Dadi!...
Maan quickly
Made her sat near the sink..."why you calling dadi ha! Chicken... You started so you finish it!"
Geet: I am not the one who is abusing my psychical strength on a... lachar becara larki!... If you have the gut why don't you fight with the mouth.

Maan was still holding geets hand tight at the back... While her back relaxing on the side... Her both leg either side of maan... While maan right between her leg... If dadi and adi didn't knew those to well... Anyone would have thought something mischief taking place between them... An that's exactly what the air hostage thought...

Maan: "it's a natural advantage! Which perfectly not normal for you... As you are abnormal..."

Geet: "how dare you... Calling me abnormal... Have you ever looked at your self"

She freed her self and smacked maan... Maan became really surprised and this time shoved both of her hand against the wall... Glued...
Geet tried to push him with her leg but maan position him self in a perfect position... Where only option was twist her leg round him...

Before maan could say anything els... Two air hostage... Stood there half mouth open... Looking at maan and geet...
There body position looked extremely wrong... Maans body was against geets... While geets leg... Trying to push maan way but instead twisted round him... His hand pushed geets against the wall and there face mere incise way... And top of it whole washroom door was open...

AH1: "I am sorry sir we will lock the door!"
Both geet and maan: "what?" bit surprised... Why the hell she will lock the door.
AH2: "don't worry we won't tell anything to dadi!"
Geet and maan: "tell what to dadi?"
Maan looked at geet: "stop copying me geet."
Geet: "stop copying me!"
Maan: "no you have.."
He pushed her hard against the wall with all his body force.... It squeezed geet...
Geet: "move... You are not exactly the lightest person in the world... I am suffocating..."
AH1: owo... Sir is soooo aggressive... I want someone like him...

Geet and maan: what? Both shouted at the sane time....

AH2: sorry sir we should give you some privacy...

They quickly locked the door.....


NEXT: HUM tum ek wash room me band ho..... aur koi bhar na ja piy

Edited by maanujaanu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
kahay ka happy keya has given me aheart attack ... now sana only sad sad 😭
pls dont be
still we have other
FF fire that yu can
& let us with happy ending
yu know every story doesnt
have to have happy ending
my dear
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sindu555


@muski dark lover ki to baat mat ker .. mujhay pata hai how I survived it ... abhee to keya madam full mood mein theen us ka end rewrite kernay mein .. and make it more sad and make maan move ahead with Sam .... dont even go there babe .. "jitters"

i love u for BSLS 🤗

really she was going to rewrite the end . . . thank god she didnt i mean i already cried too much i couldnt have handled him moving on with sam😭
keya . . . thanks for not making him move on with sam😊
well i m a sucker for happy endings😃
Edited by 7thHeaven - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
me off bc any minute need to finish typing paradox okay my dear see yu later
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey sana n muski to lighten up yr mood i have posted a copy of Keya's work read it
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: simi91

kahay ka happy keya has given me aheart attack ... now sana only sad sad 😭
pls dont be
still we have other
FF fire that yu can
& let us with happy ending
yu know every story doesnt
have to have happy ending
my dear

yes everything cant be all happy happy but does knowing reality help . . . in my case it doesnt . . . even though u may be aware everything cant be all rosy but that doesnt help accepting it . . . Cry
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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful my dear thanks for posting
guys dont forget
when it turn 150 there is another new thread
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Posted: 14 years ago
yes everything cant be all happy happy but does knowing reality help . . . in my case it doesnt . . . even though u may be aware everything cant be all rosy but that doesnt help accepting it . . . 😭

i know cutie pie but what can we say what do yu want to make yu both happy do want happy poem cant see yu guys like this luv yu both

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