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Posted: 15 years ago

#321

Phew ...............!!!! That has taken me almost three hours to write.

I admit its a bit on the heavier side......

Sammy do you agree .....?

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Posted: 15 years ago

#322

Originally posted by: skeptical
Phew ...............!!!! That has taken me almost three hours to write.

I admit its a bit on the heavier side......

Sammy do you agree .....?

subha answer doongi visthaar se aaj am overwhelmed by its lovely words ..actually i loved the poem..........and time to do work which i cant escape from is overpowering......and i want to answer dhyaan se aaraam se aur dher saare pyaar se..
3 ghante tum ne jo bitaye hain sakhi....likhe hain ehsaas mere liye tune o sakhi...raat ko sochungee main ke kaise jhaank baithee ho man mein tum mere...
but i never ever not want to come here ..its my home away from home....

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sia

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Posted: 15 years ago

#323

WOW THAT WAS EXCELLENT SKEPTY⭐️

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skeptical

@skeptical

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Posted: 15 years ago

#324

Thanks Sia.............I really appreciate your coming here regularly and showing yr appreciation............😆

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@sami01

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Posted: 15 years ago

#325

Who came knocking on your door?

What was it that made you sore?

Why does silence from your heart pour?

Why don't you want to come here anymore?

Tell me Sakhi why are you listless

The cheer has gone to leave you restless

Why does your heart pine and sigh?

Why do you smother a helpless cry?

kya likhu main..

yeh ek gana hai jo likh rahi hoon...

chaand hai wahi
sitare hain wahi.......wahi gagan

phir bhi kyun udaas hai udaas mera man..
udaas mera man..
chand hai wahi...

kaun tha mila mujhe..jo mil ke kho gaya
kaun mere paas aa ke door ho gaya

phool hai wahi ..phool hai wahi
bahar hai wahi..chaman.
phir bhi kyun udaas hai..udaas mera man..

chand hai wahi

aaj mere man ki bansuri bhi maun hai...

jis ko dhoondte mere nayan wo kaun hai..

raag hai wahi ..raag hai wahi

charag hai wahi

wahi chaman..

phir bhi kyun udaas hai..udaas mera man..
udaas mera man..

chand hai wahi...
sitare hain wahi...

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Posted: 15 years ago

#326

Originally posted by: skeptical
Phew ...............!!!! That has taken me almost three hours to write.

I admit its a bit on the heavier side......

Sammy do you agree .....?

i found the poem very deep,one of your best skepy.....it touches so many human emotions and ....also destiny ...bec its so powerful.....
see we could wish for many things in life,and when things happen ..that change course of ur life forever....we look back and realize.....those events happened in seconds,decisions were made in very short span of time...bec it was destiny who did it for us..our fate.....
see the drama we all r loving...even though its drama...i can see it happening...atleast the acusation part and fallout from it....it is destiny just destiny..

I moored my boat in the archway

Where the columns rose above the bay

I would be here for a while to stay

I had to meet my life so to say.

bec life meets u like that unexpected and fast.....and makes choices for u...
my favourite line....skepy..is this..

There is no turning back Fate disallows escape
yes i do wonder who made all those decisions for me

and i do find positivity of life will return...
bec....

These are mere phases like the cycle of the moon

That will fade away with time and joy will return soon

Life wends its way moving on to new territory

I shall meet my Fate and keep my tryst with Destiny
thank you skep from bottom of my heart.....🤗

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skeptical

@skeptical

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Posted: 15 years ago

#327

Thanks Sam for giving yr analysis................I really appreciated it.

What you went through happens to most of us. A strange feeling surrounds us and we wonder about life. Not that we are tired of life or unhappy at whats its given us but just sitting aside and taking an inventory of all that's happened. Sorrow, joy and quietude sit in the same Merry Go Round as us. Only we change seats and with them these three partners.

When the ride stops we get off. That is Death. This is how I passify myself when I think of the deaths of my family members.........

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skeptical

@skeptical

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Posted: 15 years ago

#328

The main question is ...................... have I been able to put my finger on the pulse of your emotions? Your thoughts ? Your introspection?

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@sami01

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Posted: 15 years ago

#329

Originally posted by: skeptical
The main question is ...................... have I been able to put my finger on the pulse of your emotions? Your thoughts ? Your introspection?

u certainly did ...............very very well actually u dont know how i long for silence sometimes........

skep on page 42 i posted series of photos with a some check the m out and do write a poem on them whenever u can no rush....

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@sami01

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Posted: 15 years ago

#330

Originally posted by: skeptical
Thanks Sam for giving yr analysis................I really appreciated it.

What you went through happens to most of us. A strange feeling surrounds us and we wonder about life. Not that we are tired of life or unhappy at whats its given us but just sitting aside and taking an inventory of all that's happened. Sorrow, joy and quietude sit in the same Merry Go Round as us. Only we change seats and with them these three partners.

When the ride stops we get off. That is Death. This is how I passify myself when I think of the deaths of my family members.........

i understand skepy...loosing a loved one is the most painful thing....with all the arguments in our minds still question of why.......comes up........😭. i

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