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Mahak

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Posted: 15 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: zoya_me
well mayank is cute and nupur is sweet....they r opposites attract....he is a cool nerd whereas she is a total filmy chatterbox....

hey ek baat bata ki tu ek naya os kab likhegi???????
aur kya main kal apni os gallery khol loon???
i am bit nervous and apprehensive abt it........
pata nahi logon ko "woh" waala one shot kaisa lage!!!!!
lekin maine uski ending kaafi change kar di hai..........

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#32

a preveiw:

"Mom, I don't want to see the boy!", I begged my mom--- no literally I was at her feet, but my mom showed no remorse what so ever, why is that girls have to sit like a statue, and wait for the guy to rate them?, I thought.

"Nupur, I don't care you are going to see him and that is my final decision!" I starred as she rushed upstairs leaving me alone, "I did not want to get, marrige that was the last thing on my mind!" stomping through the living room, I picked up a vase a smashed it on the floor angrily." ii'.wo wonn wont ma marry any anyone", and I collapsed on the floor crying.

okay it goona take some time to change the names of the characters!

so what do you think?

Edited by EhSaasS - 15 years ago

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Mahak

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Posted: 15 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: gr8_mms
hi aa gai main yaha

hi di
kaisi ho????
missed u..........

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Posted: 15 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: zoya_me
well mayank is cute and nupur is sweet....they r opposites attract....he is a cool nerd whereas she is a total filmy chatterbox....

oh wow seems interesting!😛

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zoya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

hey ek baat bata ki tu ek naya os kab likhegi???????
aur kya main kal apni os gallery khol loon???
i am bit nervous and apprehensive abt it........
pata nahi logon ko "woh" waala one shot kaisa lage!!!!!
lekin maine uski ending kaafi change kar di hai..........

yaar mere xams nxt week hian ......aur tu apni os gallery khol le......people will like it....dnt worry...i worried while writing bitter-sweet and sanam worried while writing the three musketeers.....u'll do gud...u have enuf fans to like it....😃

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

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Posted: 15 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: EhSaasS

a preveiw:
"Mom, I don't want to see the boy!", I begged my mom--- no literally I was at her feet, but my mom showed no remorse what so ever, why is that girls have to sit like a statue, and wait for the guy to rate them?, I thought.

"Nupur, I don't care you are going to see him and that is my final decision!" I starred as she rushed upstairs leaving me alone, "I did not want to get, married that was the last thing on my mind!" stomping through the living room, I picked up a vase a smashed it on the floor angrily." ii….wo wonn wont ma marry any anyone", and I collapsed on the floor crying.
okay it goona take some time to change the names of the characters!
so what do you think?

i wanna read it........
if it takes time then plzz send me the pm without changing the names.......
i just wanna read this story.......
it looks fantastic

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zoya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: EhSaasS

a preveiw:

"Mom, I don't want to see the boy!", I begged my mom--- no literally I was at her feet, but my mom showed no remorse what so ever, why is that girls have to sit like a statue, and wait for the guy to rate them?, I thought.

"Nupur, I don't care you are going to see him and that is my final decision!" I starred as she rushed upstairs leaving me alone, "I did not want to get, marrige that was the last thing on my mind!" stomping through the living room, I picked up a vase a smashed it on the floor angrily." ii'.wo wonn wont ma marry any anyone", and I collapsed on the floor crying.

okay it goona take some time to change the names of the characters!

so what do you think?

loved it to say the least.....u write amazingly....😃

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

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Posted: 15 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: zoya_me

yaar mere xams nxt week hian ......aur tu apni os gallery khol le......people will like it....dnt worry...i worried while writing bitter-sweet and sanam worried while writing the three musketeers.....u'll do gud...u have enuf fans to like it....😃

thanks 😳 i hope mere sweet readers ko yeh story bhi pasand aaye
aur woh mujhe hamesha ki tarah bahut pyar den............

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Posted: 15 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: zoya_me

yaar mere xams nxt week hian ......aur tu apni os gallery khol le......people will like it....dnt worry...i worried while writing bitter-sweet and sanam worried while writing the three musketeers.....u'll do gud...u have enuf fans to like it....😃

@ bold: wait wait did she write the story on this forum,?