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Hola ppl, this os came as a result of me horribly missing KriYaansh.

Hope u like it!!!


It was the farewell party for the students of class 12th .The party hall was filled with giggling sounds, silent sobs and cheers.Juniors & seniors were talking peacefully with each other and not fighting. Amidst all this, Kriya entered the hall, clad in Blue, black saari with golden border(Deepika wala look, from YJHD).Her eyes were searching for someone very special .Suddenly out of nowhere Sharon erupted and said "You searching for him, aren't u??"."yes, I am "said kriya still searching for him."He's there near the stage,"said Sharon ,trying to her best-friend." Today I'll definitely tell him about my feelings, this is my last chance to tell hi, what I exactly feel about him becoz we may never meet again after this" said kriya with a determined look on her face."All the best, now go to ur rey and express ur feelings "winked Sharon.Kriya and rey were classmates since class 1, they were not best of friends or something like that but they did help each other at times .In all these years kriya had developed a soft- corner for him but alas!! She didn't have the courage to tell him earlier. It was her little secret which only Sharon knew.

She forwarded towards the stage only to find Rey surrounded with number of girls.She can't express her feelings in front of those girls, so she waited for the girls to leave.

On the other hand ,Rey saw kriya he badly wanted to go her ,but those girls were sticked to him like glue.Suddenly there was an announcemet for inviting all the seniors on the dance floor.She saw this as a real chance to talk to rey, she went o rey. Rey saw kriya coming towards him, so he shooed off al the girls." Care for a dance" said Rey."Off-course" said kriya happily.The dance floor was all set for them.Rey forwarded his hand to kriya and she happily placed her hand and started dancing." I want to say u something" both said at the same time.They laughed at this."Please , me first"said Rey."Ok , say" said kriya." Ummm, I am in love and I want to profess it to her. But the thing is ki I am afraid"said rey looking in her eyes.Kriya's world came crashing down, tears threatened to fall from her eyes." Who's that girl??" asked kriya holding her tears back." Ummm SAARA. Now tell me what should I do??" said rey." Don't delay it rey, you may never get a chance to tell her about this again. This is a beautiful opportunity for u , go nd tell her " said kriya , looking down, she knew if she'd look in his eyes she'll not be able to hold her tears back. Mumbling a "excuse me" she went from there, tears trickling down her eyes.Dejected, disappointed is what she is now.She didn't even waited for the party to end nd went straight to her car.She tried to start her car but it didn't started "how worst it can be" whispered kriya.But little did she know someone or better to say Rey was following her."why you left the party" said rey from behind, surprising kriya.She quickly wiped her tears and said" Wasn't feeling good "." Lier" stated rey." I'm not lying" said kriya, anger clearly visible on her face." Achha ok ok, I was jst joking, Care for a walk" asked rey." Ahhh no rey, I've to go to home" said kriya rejecting his offer." See ur car is already not working nd ur home is only 15 min away .So please" requested rey." Rey please u go to party, don't u have to propose saara" said kriya diverting the topic." No. You have to come with me" said rey with puppy face.She can resist his puppy face " ok" she said." Umm kriya , is there something between YOU and SWAYAM."asked rey , still walking."What do u mean?? He is my brother, I mean cousin" said kriya totally angry on him." Oh!! Thank god" murmured Rey." Did u said anthing" asked kriya." Ohhh yaaa..i was asking u love maths na??"asked Rey." What kind of a question is this Rey?? I'm a PCM student , that means I love maths, even u r a PCM student , phir bhi u r asking me that.What has happened to You?/" shouted kriya, she was too irritated .Rey stopped walking and took out a card from his pocket and gave it to her."Open it" he said. She opened it, it was a beautiful card with

[K]+[R]=[TOGETHER]FOREVER

[I LOVE U]INFINITY

Written on it.

Kriya was in utter shock, she thought ey is playing some prank on her." Is this a joke??' asked kriya, tears again trickled down her eyes.When Rey didn't answer her, she looked up only to find him on his knees.He gently held her hand and said"It's not a joke Kriya and mind u I m very serious. I was attracted to u , when I first saw u but in these years I have realized that I am not attracted towards u but I have badly fallen for u.I know I am a big fool to not to tell you ealier but kya karu , the REYANSH SINGHAANIA was himself is afraid of rejection.So miss KRIYA GHAI, this idiot has fallen irrevocably, irreversibly in love with you.Will u be mine".For the first time in his life he was nervous in front of a girl.

Tears continuously flowed from her eyes, she was not believing her ears."But you told me you love saara??' asked kriya."Vo to maine aise hi keh diya tha, i can't directly ask u na ki how should I propose u" said rey , waiting for her to answer."Why you are doing this??" she again asked to confirm her all doubts."Kyunki fasa liya h tumne mujhe, apne pyaar me"saying this he got up and wiped kriya's tears and again said" shhh don't cry, I am still waiting for ur answer" .Listening to this kriya hugged him tightly and said " Yess, forever yours".

"this is definitely a walk to remember" saying this they again started walking but this time hand in hand

THE END

Don't beat me up or throw ur chhapals on me, after reading this.

Love

ANSHIKA

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Posted: 10 years ago
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short beautiful n cute os
loved it ❤️❤️
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Gud 1
unique os..
unique style of purposing ...
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Originally posted by: alisha_arsha

short beautiful n cute os

loved it❤️❤️


awww thank u😊
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A very very cute OS 😊
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Originally posted by: devilofevil_KR

Gud 1
unique os..
unique style of purposing ...

thank u😊
aakhir maths kabhi to kaam aan hi tha
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Originally posted by: KriyaanshManan

A very very cute OS 😊


thank u dear😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Res
unres

short n sweet one...
Honestly speaking Anshika bahot short tha... I thought abi bahot sara drama hoga... Nxt time bada likhna... 😛
Edited by --megs_arsha-- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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eee I must say a very cute os
I really loved ittt
starting from the start when kria came to the party and want to express her love as this is their last year and Sharon encouraging her awww
and whattt kria loved rey from 1st class do u mean 12 years :o
and she is feared to confess aww bechareee
and finally went to him par all girls chipakfoying him lolll jealous kria hehe
finally chance mila poor her and they are dancing
jab WO bolne wale the but rey said he loves Sara
I was like ughhh yaha pe bhi Sara can I just kill her lolll
kria totally heart broken I felt very bad fr her
and WO party se jaaying tab rey ne rokdeee jab he asked her ki he will walk with her hehe kria kitni gussa dekhaying d3 ki yaad aagaye :p
and rey kitna stupid sawal puch raha tha lolll
he asked who is swayam and do u like maths I was like lol lol
finally he confessed awww kria cried
such a cute ending
I really really loved it
do write more
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Posted: 10 years ago
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such a cute and sweet os...

u and ur math love😉...

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