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Dew..

@Dew..

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Posted: 10 years ago

The aura in this os is something else, someting beyond magic ...its love <3
the writting.. great job girl great job B|
ps - i miss the poetric Swayam :(

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athi_vrushan

@athi_vrushan

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Posted: 10 years ago

nishi

this was really a gud os

swayams monologue

his initial reaction wen sharon turned back

and lukd at him

how swayam explained his attraction a girl..wow

a small but impactful,splendid work of yours

you realy write soo superb

words fall short

keep writing

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Fatima

@HSFA

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Posted: 10 years ago

It all really began like this, Nishi 😆

I loved Swayam's emotions. His reaction to see Sharon for the first time and he surely loved her like no other. Love at first sight for him. All those flutter of emotions and unable to decipher his state was very well depicted.

Enjoyed it a lot 😃

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@--lavanya--

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Posted: 10 years ago

Nishi temme y are u so awesome ??

You're an amazing writer man ! 👏

This was a brilliant piece ! 😃

Now more excited I am ..to read the continuation of this os !

Running...😆 ...

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kirti

@Kunta_tanha

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Posted: 10 years ago

Beautifully written 👏
like it

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