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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: i_yatharthk
nice concept prachi
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tom jerry fights between swaron are nice
character of shanaya waiting for her role in their lives
and i have a suggestion for you
swayam ke dreamgirl wale sequece is new and would love to read about it further
do pm me about the next update

thanx dear im glad u liked it
n thanx for d suggestion

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: diyaswaronholic
haye meri ms unique!!!
kyaa likha hai aapne!!!
swaron fight toh chalti hi rahegi naaa!
oh idiot, mansu aur mere fights ka mast examplelikha!!! 🤣
ofcourse meri jaan, ur rey!!
hehehe beautiful writin
paagalpaan to the limit!!!!

!!!!updates ka time!!
swayam ne Sharon ko bhagayaaa 😲
oyeshes the srp!!!!!srp!!!!!
hehehe atleast they reach on time..
fir woh smirk hayeeehayeee
aur fir tom n Jerry firse shuruuu
ggang rey ko dekhti he!!
kyaa?! mujhe marna nahiii hehe
universeji bachaaaooo
fir shanaya ki entry!!
!!dekhte he hota he kyaa
loved loved the updatedate

ab jaldi updates kar!!kar!!
am waiting...

love u!
dramaqueen

im so glad u loved it
yup u both r my tom n jerry
poor m ...lol...
rey n m r u serious ...
love u too

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

hey guys i know u all wanted to know shanaya
is she negative or not ??
honestly i dont know its depend on my mood
how i will write abt her
m glad u all like d updates
im updating d nxt part
read it not proofed hope it will reach to u r expectations

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Part 3

" hi" said shayana to everyone
" hi" said swayam forwarding his hand to her n smile broadly " welcome to d gang "
" bt swayam how could she b a part of our team?" Asked sharon irritated
" sharon im d captain of this team n u already heard what princi sir said so plz stop this argument " said swayam
" bt swayam "
" shar" interrupt swayam
" i think she is right swayam" said shanaya
" i can give a audition then u all can think abt it "
" its ok shanaya its not needed" said swayam
" i think she is right swayam we can took her audition " said rey
" what say guys? "
N all were agreed on that
" ok now its team decision then ...r u ready for d audition shanaya " asked swayam lil concern
" yes im " said shanaya giving an assured smile to him
Shanaya dance on a classical no n give a mesmerizing kathak performance
Everyone were impressed by her dance
Swayam came to her n complement her by saying " u r amazing shanaya it was a superb performance " Everyone plieased her N she was happy
Sharon came forward with a straight face infront of her
" u were awesome welcome to d gang " said sharon extending her hand forward to shanaya n smiling Shanaya to handshake with her n smile to her Everyone was happy n then they were chatting with shanaya
Suddenly sharon's phone started ringing
Excuse m guys said sharon to everyone n picked d call
" hello" said sharon
" aunty how r u ??? Aapko meri yaad nhi aati na ?? Aaj mujhe call kaise kiya ha ??" Sharon said excitedly " hello sharon im fine baby Aise kaise teri yaad nhi aati mujhe to teri yaad roj aati hain " said her aunty
" ha ha pata hain kab aarahe ho bolo?? " asked sharon faking anger
" sharon swayam waha hain kya??"
" ha hain ..dekha usse baat krni hain usne phone nhi uthaya issiliye mujhe phone kiya na .. Aap bhi na aapke baite ki tarah ho "
" nhi baby aisi baat nhi hain main tuze hi phone kiya hain usse ab tak call nhi kiya woh hume aur ek week yaha rehna padega tuze pehle bata rhi hu tu jaanti hain na usse woh sad hojayega to tu usse sambhal lena "
" pr aunty usse aur bura lagega na aapne usse nhi bataya "
" are m usse call krungi thodi der bad n usse bata dungi tu sirf uske saath rahin ok "
" ha ok "
" jaldi aao woh bahut miss krraha hain aapko aur main bhi yaha koi meri side nhi leta mummy papa di sub uski side lete hain " said sharon complaing
" oh dont worry main jaldi aa jaungi phir dekhti hu main sabko okk now take care i have to go bye love u "
" bye love u too " n she hung d call
As she turn swayam was standing there
"Kya hua?? Kiskka phone tha??"
Bt sharon didnt give him any answer " shar what happened ?? Btw di ka phone aya tha ghar nhi jana hain chl jaldi aunty ne aaj mera fev dinner banaya hain "
Still she didnt give a answer to him n went everyone she picked her bag n bied everyone Swayam was hell confused y she is behaving like this
" now what i did?? Y she is not talking with m?" N he went behind her they reached at parking She seat on bike bt didnt utter a word Swayam was continuously try to talk to her bt she was not paying attention to him n highly ignoring him

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i_yatharthk

@i_yatharthk

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#45

res
unres
itna chota sa update...thoda toh aur bada hota...but chota hi sahi lekin achcha tha...sharon jealous not accepted but hai toh sahi...and angry bhi hai swayam ko achcha daudana sharon ke piche use mafi milne se pehle
iss update mein toh pm ki zarurat hi nahi padi par agle mein dena zarur

Edited by i_yatharthk - 10 years ago

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Shailja

@Kshailja

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Ittu sa update???
Bt koi nai thk h...Av isme hi happy hone ki koshish krte h...
Waise Nice update...
Sharon jealous...
Swayam kuch jyada hi smart ban rha h...
Sharon thk ki usse baat nai kr k...
Thora to usko v confuse kr de...Tb na maja aaega...
Update asap...
Thanx fr pm...

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sanchiswaron

@sanchiswaron

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Aww its a pretty sweet start ^_^ SwaRon as friends

And Sharon jealous seeing him comfy with new girl :p

Update soon 😊

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ujwal

@ujwal_v

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#48

nice update..loved it..

to sharon jealous feel kar rahi hai..nice..😛😉

update soon..

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#49

"Shar kya hua hain?? Tu mujhse baat kyun nhi kr rhi?? " swayam asked now irritedly from the time they leave college he was trying to talk to her bt this stubborn girl she is not budging to any of its effort now they r at her doorstep still this girl ...
Sharon just glared at him n then ring d doorbell
Soon d door got open they entered in d house bt they got surprised ...