The Three of Us...Kriya OS (CORRECTED)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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HI FRNDS I AM WRITING A KRIYA OS FOR THE FIRST TIME. DONT KNOW IF U GUYS WOULD LIKE IT. MAY B ITS NOT THAT GOOD. PLEASE FEEL FREE TO PRAISE OR CRITICISE..BOTH WILL BE WELCOME.

THE THREE OF US

"REYYY...SWAYAMMM...SHARONNN" she shouted. Kriya woke up with a jolt. She felt a deep pain in her belly. She sat up and clutched her stomach. Her pillow was wet with her tears. She also noticed that but she tried to remember whether it was becoz of the pain or has she been crying? She sat like that for a few minutes till the pain subsided. She looked around the gloomy room that have once been "their heaven". Her eyes fell on the picture of the four no sorry five of them at the college reunion...it was just the last year...they had enjoyed so much and then have walked all the way home..all five of them...laughing...dancing and pulling each others leg like there was no tomorrow.


The chain of her thoughts were broken by his wailing. She got up and went to the cot at the other side of the bed. His face was like an angel spreading his tiny hands on seeing Kriya..asking her to pick him up. "Is he feeling lonely too...is he missing them all too...is he trying to give me company knowing that I am sad and lonely?" Kriya thought while picking him up. He smiled at Kriya as if trying to cheer her up. His smile also brought a smile on Kriya's tear-stained face. "I am so selfish na...its dinner time already and mom failed to notice...pls forgive me my angel". Kriya took him to the kitchen, placed him on the high-chair and she began to make the formula.

"Rey u idiot leave me...I am not talking to u"

"Kriya this is the last time I promise u...pls iss baar mujhe maaf kardo baatcutter"

"No way tum fires apna promise bhul jaoge aur fires sorry bologe...I know it"

"No Kriyu" Rey placed his hand on her stomach and said "meri princess ki kasam this is the last time...agar fires mene apna promise toda toh mujhse kabhi baat mat karna"

"Yeh princess princess kya hain agar ladka hua toh wo bohot naraz hoga Rey"

"I am sure tumhare universeji mere liye ek choti Kriya hi bhejenge" Rey picked her up and they both started laughing.

"Ouch" the formula was too hot as Kriya tested it on her hand which also brought her back to reality. She looked at the baby, he was playing with a spoon making noise. Kriya placed the bottle of formula on a bowl containing cold water to cool it off.. then they went to the living room...now completely empty except for a big picture of the four of them on one wall. The baby became excited on seeing the picture. "Do u recognize them angel? I am so sorry...I ran away like a coward..leaving them all". A big fat tear drop escaped her eye...the baby playingly put his lips on Kriya's cheek wiping the tear away as if saying "don't cry...I will be there for u". Kriya took out an album and stared showing him the pictures of her best frnds and Rey, baby-talking with him all the while.

"It's not a good plan Swayam...perhaps we should go to some other place" Sharon looked unconvincingly towards her husband.

"Relax Shar it's now safe for tourists...so many people are visiting Kashmir now a days" Swayam argued.

"I think Swayam is right...Kriya needs some fresh air too...Mumbai has become so polluted" was Rey's pov

"Sharon I think ur fear is unreasonable...Kashmir is now safe and it has been a long time since the four of us went to some vacation...plsss" Kriya pleaded.

"OHKKK...majority wins" was Sharon's answer and the four of them broke out laughing.

"Kriyaaa" shouted Rey as Kriya winced feeling a sharp pain in her belly. She was two months pregnant. Her hands were tied to the back and so was Rey's, Swayam's and Sharon's. Swayam had blood oozing from beside his brow. Sharon was nearly unconscious.

A girl came carrying some sort of food and water. She tried to wake Sharon up.

"Plss let the girls go...u too r a woman...my wife is pregnant and Sharon has a one year old son to look after" Rey was in tears. Sharon had left her son with the nanny at the hotel that day when they went out. The girl thought for a while and then opened Kriya and Sharon's hands "plss leave now...otherwise I wont be able to save any of u including me".

"I am not leaving without u Rey...u will die together"

"Don't be a foolish Kriya...u don't want to kill my princess do u?"

"Kriya u look after my son...I wont leave Swayam"

"Shar do u remember our dream? It was to make our son the world's best dancer and only u can do that"

Kriya and Sharon gave the last glance towards the love of their lives...the girl hurrying them up "pls gooo..they can be here any moment". As they came out of the wodden cottage a man with a gun noticed them. Sharon had a injury on her right leg and she was limping, she was not able to keep up her pace with Kriya and fell. Kriya bent to help her get up as the gun-man was nearing "run Kriya run...don't wait for me...otherwise u both will die...look after my baby...run Kriya run...the three of u have to survive...runnn".

"Sharon's voice was still ringing in Kriya's ears "run Kriya run...the three of u have to survive". "I will make u the best dancer of this world as ur mom and dad wanted" Kriya wiped her tears and kissed SwaRon's son. "I wont give up Rey...ur princess wud b the girl u wanted her to be. I promise u Rey, Swayam and Sharon I wont let go waste the life u have given the THREE OF US...I PROMISE"

THAT'S IT...PATANAHI KYA KYA LIKHA ...DO GIVE UR REVIEWS

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devilishpam thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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res
unres

haaye
didu no wordz
itz was awsome
u really are awsome writer
Edited by devilishpam - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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mind blowing os 😊
so beautiful...
tumne mujhe almost rula diya
it's so heart-touching!!!!!!!
love u diii 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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emotional so swaron nd rey dead kriya is alone oh bt happy that kriya will fulfill their dreams.. loved it thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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this is...this so damn beautiful...
emotional nd just...i dnt hv words...
m a sucker on sad shots specially where the other die...
can u plz plz plz give another part where all three of them come back after getting released howsoever??
pretty plzzz
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Posted: 10 years ago
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so emotional kria remembering past n swaron son giving her strength that to unknowingly that was really beautiful
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awwoowww
its awesome 👏

Loved it the way u writed

its beautifull story
loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Guyz my whole post ruined
due to my cell 😡
will updt properly 2mrw
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Posted: 10 years ago
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don't worry yr..
update whenever you got time
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Rula diya yaar...
Shareyam ko marr diya😭
It was well written but damn emotional
Iska part 2 likhna...and make it happy ending na
Give a survival story of the three😭

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