||Papa's Angel and Mama's Boy||KR TS||

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Taaddaaa dekho kon aya..!!
Well I know nobody knows me here.. 😆
Hey people myself Rupanshi..!!! 😉
Pehle b bohat tang kar chuki hu ap logo ko socha thoda aur karlu..
Mere SS ka last part sadio se aise hi pada hai and ek naya FF b ainve echod rakha.. 😆
But I promise is bar aisa ni hai..
Do review us..
Us yeah this time am not writng alone..
Its a team..!! Me and Mitali (MittuArsha).. 😛
Credit of the concept and the writing goes to her.. Am to jst posting..

I know bohat bakk bakk ho gai so here prestng you the TS.. 🤗
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Papa's Angel and Mama's Boy


Kria Shouting
'Rey mujhe bhi apke sath shopping
k liye jana'
Rey- No baby.. U need to take rest..
I will get everything needed.. You
dare not work for full 9 months..
You know na am so excited for
this..
Kria- *SelfTalk*
Vahan jake jo ladki mili uske sath
flirt karenge huh..
Rey- Jaaneman jaisa tum soch rhi
vaise kuch ni hoga *Winks*
Kria - Throws pillow on him.. Jao
baat na karna mere se..
Rey comin closer..
Rey- Hey baby am doin Evrythng for us na.. For the welfare
of our baby..!!
Gussa na karo please. I Wont flirt . I
Prmse.. Sara time mbl k speaker on
rahenge..


*In The Mall*
Rey- Hey Miss can you please tell
me where to get coffee powder
from ?
Seller- Sure Sire come with me.
*Speakers are on*
Rey - Yo sweety lets go.. *Winks*
Kria overheards this
K- Ye kabi nai sudhrenge.. I hate
him.. God us kameeni sellr ko
bagao vahan se.. Rey was enjoying
as he knw his baatcutter must be
fuming at home..
Seller- Ye lijiye Sir apke liye coffee
powder.. Kya ap aj apni wife ki
jagah par shoping krne aye hai..
Rey- Sweety do I look like this much
old.. Do I really look married.. Dnt
cal me Sir cal me *Reyansh* ..
This was too much for Kria to handle..
She was angry yes so damn angry.
She cuts the call. Rey saw the
phone and laughed out loudly..

Rey *Self Talk*
Yeah ab maza ayega.. Meri
baatcutter ka gussa.. aye haye lets
meet in an hour Kriyu..

Sler- So Reyansh wht else do u
need..
Rey -No need of you.. I will get
evrything of my own..
*She was startled*
Reyansh got everythng needed and
started his journey back home..

As he entered their bedroom he was
welcomed with pillows.
Kria threw pillows at him and
shoutin
*Jao yahan se. Dont you dare come
here. You are not married na. Jao
usi chudail k pas. I Dont need
you..* Rey knw this would happen
but yeah he is Reyansh Singhania.
He knws how to monofy his
baatcutter
Rey comin closer to her. Kria she
was full in tears.
Rey - Shhh.. Baatcutter ye kya
bol rhi ho.. And with this he kisses
her eyes.. Kria didnt speak a word..
Rey - U knw me right.. I was just
kiddng Kriyu. I love you right.
Toitna gussa kyu. And I love
teasing you yar..
Kria pushed him away- U love
teasing me.. Haww Reyansh how
could you.. Well let me tell you I
was not at all jealoused.. I was just
testing you.. *Winks*
Rey - Oh really..
Kria - Oh Hanji...
Rey - Are you sure?
Kria - Jo krna chahte ho jaldi kro
idiot..
Rey - Naa mai kuch ni krna chahta.
Kria saw him her wide open eyes.
Kria - To mai krba chati hu..
Rey came forward till his forehead
met hers!
Rey-Tum sachi mein karna chati
hoo? And he kept coming closer
and his this clossenes made kriya
numb!

He leaned in to kiss her and Kriya
even closed her eyes but then
suddenly something else
happened ...Rey moved up till her
forehead and kissed her their and
then covered her with a blanket!
Kriya-Rey...Yeh kya tha? Rey-
Yah he ki aab sone ka time hoo
chuka hai so go of to sleep my
wifey! Kriya- I so hate you Rey!!!
Rey-I Love you too darling! With
this he switched of the rooms lights
and went of to sleep beside her love..!!

*Next Part*

Kriya and him both were together
on the road eating corns in rain
when suddenly light thundered in
the sky in this thunder made Kriya
hug Rey tightly! Kriya was 7
months pregnant then! After eating
they moveed out of the stall
together Kriya in Rey's embrace!

But sudeenly what happened was
the most horifying thing that
happened! Kriya slipped beacuse of
the water on the path and and went
diretly under the tree which was
about to fall cause of the storm!
And that happened The tree fell on
Kriya! Rey who was watching all
this in shock now ran to save Kriya!
But when she was bought to the
houpital she was declared dead! It
was the biggest blow in Rey's life
and he felt the earth moving under
his feet!
Rey got up with a jerk and looked
at her side to check if Kriya was
there! And there his beauty was!
Sleeping peacefully hugging her
favourite teddy bear! Rey sighed of
relief and started stroking her hair
and forehead gently! He kissed her
on her eyes! Rey- I promisse you
baatcutter I wont let even a pinch
of problem to come near you! You
will be with me forever safe in my
embrace! And with this he hugged
her tight and slept!

( Thank God It Was A Dream 😉 )


Next day owanwards he became too
possive about her! He wont let her
go alone anywhere,do anything
risky or even let her do any work!
He even took a long break from his
job for just her! FEW DAYS LATER
Rey- Kriya I have a surprise for you!
Kriya- Surprise for me! Really Rey?
Jaldi dikhaooo mujhe! Rey-Shant
meri baatcutter...Yeh lee jeea
apka surprise! There was a room all
covered in cute baby colours...stuff
toys,plastic toys,books and all stuff
a bay needed was present there!
And in the middle was a craddle in
wich two shirts were kept! Kriya
picked up one shirt... In it was
wriiten PAPA'S ANGEL he looked at
rey and recieved a heart melting
smile back! The second shirt she
picked up said- MOMA'S BOY! This
melted Kriya's heart totaly and she
was about to walk to hug Rey...
SHE FAINTED..!!


And yeah its done..
Hope you guys will like it..
Do review please..
Atleast like hi krdio.. :))
Edited by PunjabiKudi_17 - 10 years ago
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Index

Chapter 1 - Page 1 😉




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Posted: 10 years ago
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Res! ^_^

Unres!

Yay! Me first! *does bhangra steps * 😳

Yeh kya tha Rupanshi, cliff hanger! 😭

Chalo ab jaldi se update karna iss ko compensate karne ke liye 😛

So Kria, a soon-to-be mom...

A very refreshing concept indeed!

Thank god woh dream hi tha 😳

Haw Kria faint ho gayi! 😲

Update soon! 😃


Love,
Parigya 😊



Edited by parigyaverma - 10 years ago
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cute.. Lovely.. Thanks for pm..
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supab part ek pal ke liye to I was to scare but thank god it was just dream love it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome story :)
totally enjoyed reading it
thank u so much :)
Rey and Kriya
would be mom and dad 👏
Pls update next part soon
and pls pm me :)
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nice story...continue soon and pm me

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