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Posted: 10 years ago
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Surpriseee!!!

Kria - Rey what's the date today...?

Rey- 31st October...

Kria- what...?

Rey- what happened...? Why Are u panicking ...? It's just 31st of October... No big deal... Yeah...!

Kria- no big deal... really...?

I mean seriously Mr. Reyansh Singhania... No big deal... (She looked at him with full anger filled face)

The moment she said that rey realized that he said something which he shouldn't have said... But now the deed was done... He created problem for himself ones again... And now the outcome of his deed was about shower at him. he knew it would shower at him any moment...

So he with innocence filled face turned to meet his destiny i.e. full angry kria...

Kria walked towards him slowly ... N stopped just few centimeters away from him.

She bend down making rey collapse on the bed n stopped just few cms away and spoke...

Kria- So Mr. Singhania what did you said no big deal, humm...

Rey calmly n cutely tried to intervene but was stopped by his baatcutter...

Kria- wait Mr. Singhania m not done yet...

Listen to me it's important for me because today is the birthday of my crazy fan...

I met her on g+ ... and rey you know (calming down and going in the flashback only kria... And narrating whole story to rey)

She is a very sweet girl. She calls herself a devil n says she owns hell. But on a contradiction I found her to b the sweetest fan and a friend too.

(while narrating all this she sat beside rey. letting her head lie on his shoulder. Rey smiled on her weirdly cute antics...)

And u know rey I think she is the only fan with whom I chat on hangout...

And the best part is that she is the only one who played a prank on me... at that time I thought she is a devil

And when I asked her name she said its "mysterious devil" in short MD.

(rey laughs when she says she played prank on her. But got an anger filled look from her.)

She gets up from her place and pulls rey with her too and says.

Kria- so Mr. Singhania as you know it's an important day for me n my important day implies ur important day so u need help me in the preparations for her b'day.

Okay (she said n an authoritative voice)

And rey could just wave is head in approval and could say just a small yes in low voice...

Rey- yes...

Kria- so lets get started... n talked to her last night and she told me that she is coming to Mumbai for her states basket ball match n skating race. In XYZ stadium. So we just need to go there n give her a surprise.

What say...? (she asked him with glittering eyes. To which he couldn't deny and moved his head in approval. )

Rey knew it's not easy to simply go at any such place and do party without certain permissions.

So called the stadium authorities and asked for the permission.

At first they rejected his request but after little bit of manofying session they agreed.

Kria n rey went to do some shopping for the b'day party.

They bought a dark chocolate cake and a tank top and denim shorts for her...

They also invited d3 gang for the party.

Then they quickly went to the stadium and turned the whole room which was allotted to them into a beautiful place.

They also invited some of her IF friends for her b'day party to give her surprise. They invited megs, diya, sneha, pradeep, shan and her chipkali for the party.

They all reached there by time. And help them in the preparation.

After all the preparation was finished they decided to go and see her match and race.

Basket-ball court

The match was going on between the pune and Mumbai team...

More than half of the crowd was cheering for Mumbai, being their home team...

But amongst the small number of crowd cheering for pune were two very special person they were rey and kria and with them the group of crazy people cheering for MD to win...

And guess what MD threw the ball towards the basket from the point almost near to the half court and only 15 seconds were left for the game to end...

Count down began...

10...

9...

8...

7...

6...

5...

4...

All of us breathe had stopped...

What we all just wanted was that the ball just hits the ring of the basket... rolls n rolls over the ring and finally get swallowed by the basket net...

3...

2...

1...

It was as if god heard us and it happened the way we wanted...

Team pune won...

MD's team won...

We won...

After the break of half n hour the skating race began.

It consisted of 5 laps...

MD was leading the race from the starting...

And the result didn't change in the final lap as well...

She was very very happy after winning both the match and the race...

To add more to her happiness...

Kria asked the one of her team member to bring MD to the hall where all the arrangements were done...

When MD entered the hall we all shouted...

SURPIIISSSEEE...!

HAPPY BIRTHDAY MD...!!!!

At first she was shocked to see us and then came running to hug all of us, specially our kriyansh...

Then the cake cutting ceremony went on followed by eating and games and chatting and clicking photos...

...The end...

Edited by --megs_arsha-- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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**Love or Fear? What Controls u? **

A KRIYAANSH OS


Heyya guys!
I have written a Kriyaansh os!
Hope u like it!
Its dedicated to my jaan,MD!
Happy birthday jaan!
Tell me how it is!
Its my first try, so do criticise if u don't like it.

~***~


Spinning, black 9mm bullets crash into the clear, navy blue sky. Loud gun shots deafening all, explosions ending with glowing,red flames, threatening bombs killing dozens.

My long legs kept on running, fast, killer birds willfully chasing me, maybe, there was name tag stuck on me, naming their favourite dishes, 'RAW MEAT', not even caring to ask my permission. A pair of greens orbs pierced into me, poisonous snakes resembling that old, treacherous man..

I didnt stop, a sharp glance over my shoulders was all I would need, dark thoughts flooding, a deep fear covering my delicate soul.. My sight turned bright maroonish-red, the colour of pure human blood, a knife belonging to a worshipper of Janus, The 2-Faced God, tearing apart a young man, beheading
his head, several cuts ordering for countless painful screams. His lightish brown plates closing down, his shining jet black hair no- longer needing to be taken care of, his chiselled, muscular chest showing off itself, dressed with enormous, deep scars, being completely ripped and whipped, his precious heart beating for the last, his lungs pleading for oxygen.

A sense of knowing filled my panting body, my brain trying to recall this stranger, his death was no normal thing , his importance unable to be compared. Love,
something I shared with him, my life symbolized this known. I stood, rooted to the evergreen body of our mother earth, witnessing an unforgivable crime through my very own eyes, effort equalled to zero taken by me. Recording that sorrowful memory was all I did, loyal justice never to be thought of...

Reyaansh Singhania, the classy name pumped through me, love, no, fakeness, pretence was the love, never did I ever love him.

~***~

"No! I did love him, I did...!! I know I didnt save him! STOP MAKING IT WORSE!" I wailed, tightly clutching the edges of my warm blanket, afraid, a horrid crime potraying me.

"Kiru!!" Someone barged into my royal room, the ancient, mahogany door closing with a bang.

He rushed towards me, jumping on my king-size double bed, engulfing me into a big hug, exceptionally hoping to protect me, giving away all his strength in doing so...

"Kiru, calm down, shh... Its okay. It was just a scary nightmare." he comforted me, a slight tone of firmness could heard.

"Swayu, please. I cant bear it anymore, I dont have anymore strength. Please, I want to die. Please!" I shouted, tired.

Facing the same nightmare again and again, it didnt make it easier, worse was the word which defined it. Hatred, the emotion I felt for these never- ending nightmares.

Losing myself, the time of that violent battle, my remainings not dusty ashes but a living soul, a trembling soul forced to stay alive, forced to live.

"Reyaansh, my Rey..." I kept on murmuring, bowing for Hestia, the Goddess of Hope, begging for mercy. Maybe, he would return, fit and healthy but I was wrong, nothing, nothing was going to happen, he was gone forever.

I winced in pain as Sharon washed my agonizing scars, zillions carved on my bony body, the proof of my worst times. Sharon and Swayam , my best friends, they lived for me, no matter how much I fussed, they remained patient, advising me everyday, hugging me tight, preventing anyone from harming me. I couldnt cause them more troubles, freeing them, their numerous favours chaining me. I was leaving...

I opened my empty closet, a few clothes neatly kept on shelves. I quickly changed into a white tanktop and comfortable black jeans. I grabbed my dark green hunting coat, storing the pockets with lighters, knifes and my cell phone. My brownish-black backpack contained the rest except my strong, archery bow which was held by hand, a pack of delicate arrows clinging by my shoulder. At last, I put on my favourite boots, the best to ever wear while hunting.



"I'll see you guys later!" I said, raising my palm, biding a good bye.

"Target Shoot?? Kiru, are u completely nuts? You cant! You dont have any more strength left in you. FOR ONCE, Why cant you just rest!" Swayam commands, his hazel orbs blazing with lots of care.

"I'll be okay Swayam.. Dont worry.." I reply, rejecting his command. I walked up to him, hugging him for the last, thanking him for being with me, apologizing a hundred
times for giving him so much responsibility.

I closed the door, vowing never to return, atleast not alone...

~***~

I force myself into a quick sprint, hardly touching the tips of the stoned pavements. The hot ball of fire glared, the atmosphere changing from frozen cold nights to sparkling sunny days, the sky painted bright yellow, providing me light, a vision to see. Soft, green, uncut grass met my feet, encouraging my presence, huge trees shading me, the running wind combating with the boiling, warm air. This was where loneliness met, this meadow was my new home.

Walking, knowing the way by heart, I come across my practice area. Circular targets shaped on the woody barks, long arrows taking place of small darts, concentration
always required...

I place my thin arrow between my bow strings, aiming straight, shutting my right eye, the center being my target. An arrow slips from my poised bow, the center bagged by it, cutting through the bark flawlessly. I sigh with pleasure, glad that it worked on my first try.

"So you aren't that bad either, Ghai!" teased a slim, well built man, aged in his mid 25's, young and careful, frightening, deep scars revealed, his thin lips dancing with a pleasant smile.

Shocked, I rub my eyes in disbelief,going crazy, wondering whether this was reality.

"Rey! U are.. are... alive.."I whisper,clutching the trunk of an old tree, wanting support, debating on what was real or not.

"Ofcourse I am sweetheart." he replies, delightful.

He's not Rey, he cant be, you watched him embrace his death, my inner soul argued. Trust or Lie, True or Untrue, I was helpless, shuddering if, he was just a mutant. Someone redesigned with the DNA of the dead, looking, speaking just like its owner but in real, a robot. My thoughts keep on buzzing, questions beating around the bush, answers to be conquered. Honestly, clever minds didnt support me, poweful lovers did. A risk was to be taken, the future lay unplanned.

"Kiru.. I know you wont believe me. According to you, you saw me die. How am I even alive then? Miracles keep on happening, any day, any time sweety. I am real, I am with u." he answers, his musical voice playing along with answers.His damaged yet charming face requesting to be trusted.

"I saw you die! My ugly nightmares kill me each night,cursing,breaking me slowly and deeply. My courage, my strength, my might! Physically I am shown to be strong but mentally, you will see me dead!" I shout, fighting back my watery tears, wishing not to be weak.

"It wasnt me!" he shouted, losing his temper

"What do u even me by it wasnt me! He freaking looked like u!" I argued, still confused.

"He was my twin Kiru! I watch you everyday, when u scream and yell during your nightmares, I HOLD U! After that deadly blood bath, I didnt, I couldnt randomly meet u!" he explained, his wobbly knees giving up,clashing them to the hard,muddy surface.

"Hold me? Are u even serious!" I shout, my trembling heart let go, my just mind agreeing with me.

"Yes... I love u Kiru! I really do! Am sorry, I know I hurt u but I didnt have a choice. I was afraid, I needed you to gain some..."he says,cleansing those hopeless minutes eventually changing into years.

"I love u too Rey! Please.. you're never leaving me. Promise me!" I say, trusting him, not wanting to lose him all over again.

The previous times, I could have beared it but now, I wouldnt be able too.. I would rather cut my wrist, ending this revolution forever.

"I promise. " he agrees firmly

In a few seconds, marching past those series of fast milliseconds, I found myself in his arms, holding me tight, swearing against all odds never to leave me. A hug wasn't enough for me, my hunger went far beyond.

I pushed him back, framing him, my solo body blocking his path. Moving in front, interlocking my tender lips with his soft ones took my breath away, licking through, tasting each and every delicious, sweet, tangy part of his freshened mouth, my hot legs snaked around his waist, my hands ruffling through his soft, silky hair. He forced his way in, deepening the kiss, making it longer, forgetting the need for oxygen. Dangerous Desires running through our blue veins, stopping wasnt our interest.

He rested me cautiously on a wooden bench, shoving every pain down the drain. My hazel orbs smirked at his mesmerizing, chocolatey ones, our twins watching colours shifting, thoughts perfectly the same, he was the most beautiful angel, I ever laid my dreamy eyes upon. His furious lips brushed past my skin, planting wet kisses on my bare neck. Grasping, clutching his green jacket, I bit my tongue, sounds of moaning hidden.

His control washed over him, losing it, he was an unruly hound. I soaked in the pleasure, the joy, the feeling of happiness blowing, the dandelions blushing rosy pink.
The lonesome woods secretly hiding our romance, our loving sessions, the chirping, colourful birds dooming my moans.

We rolled, falling on the living earth, its luscious grass flavouring our naked bodies, we were one, our souls were joined...

"Fear can control u but love can shield u from every fear ..." I sigh, breathing in fresh air

Giving my pair of tired orbs a rest, knowing no nightmare would disturb me today. Specially the fear of losing him...

Now I realize, leaving that red-bricked cottage helped me. I had found my destiny, living through these memories was a mystery.

~***~


Sooo, that's a wrap!
Hope u guys liked it!
MD! Meri jaan! I hoped u like it!
Guys, please comment and like.

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Kon soch saktha iss poore duniya me ki apne romantic date railway station pe hoga.sirf ek hi esa he aur wo kush kismathi se mera boy friend he. He tho ameer baap olaadh per kabhi kissi se bhi apne baap ka naam nahi letha ,agar poocha ki kyun apne dad ke naam nahi liya tho kehetha he "me apne dum pe jeena chahatha hun, aur apne petha ji ke mehenath ko iss thamaal karna accha thode na lag tha he". Kabhi usske chehere se smile nahi hat thi, baccho jesi harkathe he usske, per chehere se baccha nahi bilkul handsome hunk lag tha he Kabhi kabhi tho darr bhi lagtha he ki kahin koi isse apne vash me naa karle. aaj humaara anniversary he 2 yrs saath rehene ka. Mujhe ye yaad nahi tha per usse sub yaad he .mujhe kal raath 3 baje call kar ke kahtha he" kriya kal humaare liye special din he aur kal hum dono saath bahar chalenge". Mujhe kuch samaj nahi aaya tho mene poocha"rey kal kya he ,me kuch important bool rahi hun kya". "offo kriya ithne important din kese bool sakthi ho" "rey per kal naa aapka birthday he naa mer... na hi valentines day hai phir kesa special day" "kal hamara valentines day he kriya... Humne ek doosre ko 2 saal jhel liya ". "REY AAPKO YE BHI YAAD HE".Me shocked thi .Uski kushi ME HI MEHESOOS KAR PAARAHI THI. "THO KRIYA HUM DHONO KAL EK SPECIAL DATE PE JAAYENGE". "PER REY KAHAN". TUM WO SUB MATH puCHO KAL 6 O'CLOCK APNE GHAR KE SAAMNE MERA WAIT KARNA ". Jese ussne kaha tha me wese hi ghar ke saamne kadi wait karrahi thi per wo dhoor dhoor thak dik hi nahi raha tha. Phir mene dekha ek handsome ladka dhoor se apne haath me flower bouqet liye bag tha huwa aaraha tha. Uska chehera kushi se chamak raha tha. Wo hi he mera pyaar REY. WO MERE PAAS AYA AUR HAAFTHE HUE BOLA "SORRY KRIYA ME THODA LATE HOGAYA NA" "ITZ OK REY ... YE FLOWERS MERE LIYE HE ?" "NAHI THO TUMHARE PADOSME JO ANUTY HE UNKELIYE HE... WAIT LET ME GIVE HER THIS AND COME". WO BOLA sarcasm USE KARTHE HUE MENE USSE PEECHE keecha AUR BOLA " OK IM SORRY "MENE USSKE HAATHON SE flowers LIYe . "KRIYA AB CHALO WE ARE ALREADY LATE" "PER REY HUM KAHAN JAA RAHE HE" "MENE TUMHE KAHA THA NA DATE PE AUR KAHAN... KUB KESE TUME CHINTHA KARNE KI ZAROORATH NAHI HE I'LL TAKE CARE OF IT AND I PROMISE THIS WOULD BE THE BEST DATE OF UR LIFE". "REY AAPKE SAATH BITHAAYE HUVE VAKTH HAMESHA BEST HOTHI HE" "really" usske koobsoorath se anke mere anko me jaak rahe the . Mene usse peeche kiya aur "rey hum late ho rahe he right". Rey ne jaldi se ek rickshaw roka aur hum dhono ander bhet gaye. Mene apne dil me socha ki koi romantic sa place hoga jahan pe wo aur me ,sirf hum dohona hi honge. Rickshaw wale ko rey ne direction tho batha diya tha , jaathe hue dho rasthe ese aaye ki right me jaaoo tho lovers point (park) aur doosre tharaf railway station. Me ye dek ke imagine kar ne lagi " ek fountain , candles,curtain,light music, me wo aur... romance" Per bewakoof rickshaw waale ne ulta left ki taraf le gaya me chlaayi "bhaiya hame railway nahi..." Rey ne mujhe beech me rok diya aur mujhe shaanth kar the hue" kriya tension math lo ,hum bilkul teek jaarahe he,aur mene kaha na I'll take care of everything". Man me chal raha tha "railway station me kaha, hum train se kahin jaa tho nahi rahe na, agar jaa rahe hain tho mene kuch saaman nahi laya". Per jese mene kahan rey dil se bacche he ,unki soch bohut anoki he. Hum dhono station me jaake kade hogaye tho rey ne mere akoon pe patti band diya aur mere khan me whisper kiya "aaj me tumhe special feel kar vaunga ". Phir ussne mera haath firmly pakadliya aur mujhe care fully apne saath le jaane laga . mere anko pe patti bandi hue thi per me unne band anko se bhi dek paa rahi thi.It was magical. Phir suddenly wo ruk gayA aur usne mera haath chod diya . jab mera haath chuta it felt cold , kuch shivering sa feel tha wo. Then agin I could feel him ,mere peech usne mera anko se patti hataya . Me peeche mudi,per wo wahan nahi tha. Mene aage deka tho I saw him on his knee , Isse dek ke me bohut kush thi per mere kushi ke beech me aagaye the railway station ke log, sub ham aise dek rahe the jese hum vip's the. Sub ke chehero pe smile .It was a awkard feeling. Mene rey ko kaha" rey hum railway station ke beech me he". Wo jahan bete the waha se hi bola "happy realization kriya". "rey hum tho romantic date pe niklethe na ,tho railway station pe kyun he". Wo deere se ute aur mere kareeb aye. Phir se sub kuch gayb hogaya ,mujhe sirf wo akele dikaayi de rahe the Wo bol rahe the "kriya tumhe yaad he hum dhono for the first time railway station pe hi mile the ,kya tumne uss dhin socha tha ki hum dhono kabhi ek hosakthe he?nahi na...per deko aaj hum dhono isi jagepe kade he... ek saath ". "Tumhe ye bhi yaad he?". "Haan tumse joode har ek baath yaad he mujhe... I luv u kriya..and thanks for being my partner". Me sirf usse aur uske aawaz ko sun aur dek paa rahi thi.mujhe yakeen nahi ho raha tha hi usse ye sub kahan. Me kushi se kuch bol hi nahi paarahi thi,sirf ek kambe ki tarah kadi thi usse dekthe hue. Peeche se ek ajnabhi ankul chilaaye "dikree tum bhi bold ho I luv you usse ,bechre ko aur kithna intazar kar vaogi" Me apne jaadhu ke duniya se bahar aayi aur sharam se laal ho gayi thi Mene rey ko tightly hug kiya aur kaha " I LUV YOU TOO REY".

-by devilishpam

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Posted: 10 years ago
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alll d os were just amazing
i mean outstanding
out of d world
these r very special to me
luv u
jaanu
jaani
snehu
devilish girl
&
mera comment 1st page per hai
go read there
this comment is 4 only os
all these os r written beautifully luvely
i mean u r d best writter

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