SwaRon OS:Love Confession???

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@Incorrect

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Wow what was dat Mr.India
It was d most wiered and cute confession
U wrote it awesomely well
Dis os was completely unexpected
Sharon was super cute
N Swayam s such a foodie
And m glad u wrote it
Hope Ull write more and more

Love u Meri Mr.India ua just fab

Rajdhani express

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Mansi

@Mansi98

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

wow👏

awesome work👏

poor swayam😆

sharon punched him😆

bt sharon's confession was jst like tat😃

i jst loved it😊

keep writing more n more😊

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Khizar Ali

@Khizar_SWARON

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Great OS and lovely and thanks for the pm

btw no it is not bad at all that anyone would throw tomatoes 😆

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Fatima

@HSFA

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Beautiful OS.

So simple yet so Swaronish. Loved it a lot.

Do write more :)

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GlamourousPearl

@GlamourousPearl

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Marvelous job...dat felt so realistic ...I loved swayams reaction n DA way he confessed dat was pretty nyc...n seriously wat a foodie u made him...seriouslieee...noodles...hahaha...loved it...
The fact is u turning into one fine writer...
Keep writing...
Love...

Edited by GlamourousPearl - 11 years ago

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athi_vrushan

@athi_vrushan

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Sorrry 4 d late reply dear
nice work
expecting more from you
thanks 4 d pm
keeep writing more

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Okay! Since you asked me for my opinion. As always I will put forth my honest reviews.

This was utterly weird. Yeah! I mean, this was weird in its own sense. It was cute at times, Immature at certain places, a bit of romantic essence in between.. But that was quite a good read though.

All I would say is, that you have an altogether a different standard of writing. You have a different way of writing. And considering all of that This was a little Okay! *No offence though*

I certainly feel that you could have added a little more to its description and this would have been perfect. But isn't that It was BAD. No it wasn't. So calm down.

PS: I would like to mention, nothing here that I comment is meant for offence.

PPS: I apologize in case you are hurt or disheartened because of me, or my review. I didn't intend to.