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Posted: 11 years ago
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Umm...im not sure how to start...im diya..im new in the forum...infact I just regestered today...im really kind of nervous to post...
I used to read a lot of stories here...from so long...some were my favourites...like chaahat,laal ishq, kahin pyar na ho jaye, destiny's discision and a lot more...I really didnt hvr the guts to post here but today...I finally couldnt take my far anymore and just thought to express my love for taarey through this story...I hope everyone will be convinced with this story

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Teaser...


"U better stay away from me taani...else the result won't be good"...he warned her
"What will you do if I didn't?"...she moved closer to him
"Im loosing it...im telling you"...he moved back warning again
"Loosing what?.."..she looked at him in confusion

for a second everything went silent and then he moved his face closer to hers...she could feel cold all over her..his eyes burned in hers...she felt tickling..

"Else..I'll loose the control from drinking your blood"...
"Yeah sure...u'll be the vampire from the movies"...she said with sarcasm after recovering from his sudden closeness
"No but in real"...he said with a small devilish smile
"Yea...I believed it"...she turned her head without much care..

but he just smiled and went..his eyes dark...

she felt sudden shiver as she saw his dark eyes...wasn't he just kidding??...or...he mean it???
Edited by diyataarey101rc - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#3
interesting concept
do continue it soon
n do pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow, the concept is interesting
Please continue soon and pm me
Welcome to the forum 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#5

😊 INDEX😊

1. The Perfect Young Guy - pg 2
2.The Reyaansh Karlz -pg 5


Edited by diyataarey101rc - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#6

Originally posted by: princess_tara

interesting concept
do continue it soon
n do pm me


thnx dear...
wil contnu soon..
n yea wil pm u😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#7

Originally posted by: -SunShine

Interesting
continue soon


thnx...
yea wil contnu soon😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#8

Originally posted by: -NautankiAsh-

Wow, the concept is interesting

Please continue soon and pm me
Welcome to the forum 🤗


im glad u lyk it😊
Sure wil contnu soon n wil pm u
thnx dear😳..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#9

Hello people!😃...well this time I'm feeling much more anxious about my post than before..as its my first story and this is the first part...it's a small one and its just an introduction of characters in the story...I hope you guys are gonna like it...so here you go😊

1. The Perfect Young Guy


She rubbed her palms together in order to produce some heat...and then she rubbed her palms slowly over her shoulders which was baldly shivering due to extreme cold climate... It seems like it didn't even help a little...she took a sweater from her bedroom's closet and wore that over her already worn jeans -full sleeve top n 2 sweaters..even that didn't help her...she was still shivering...she cursed herself for coming here...in CHICAGO...here is the most freezing winter she ever experienced!... It was terribly hard for her to bear this cold specially after coming from London that too when it was summer...

"Hutch!!"...he sneezed from behind startling her
"Shivam ...you scared me"...she turned and glared at her BFF who was busy in controlling his next sneeze
"I..I'm...I..hutch!"...another sneeze made its way blocking his talk
"Here...take this jacket..."...she passed him his jacket which was lying on the bed
"Thaa...a..nx...taani...hutch!"
"I wanna go home...Shivam"...she made a very unhappy face not caring about his sneeze
"I know...you miss being there with our gang"...he agreed while put his jacket on
"Excuse me...I'm not sad about that at all...I'm just sad about this unbearable climate"...she said while sitting on the bed
"I know why your not missing them...isn't it because of Alvin?..."...he asked while lying on the bed..his head resting on her lap
"Exactly...he was seriously a trouble "...taani's sad face suddenly changed into disgust
"Yea...I remember his hundreds of letters and proposals...and also your anger"...Shivam laughed
"I hope nothing bad is gonna happen in our new university"...she hoped
"Even I hope...I'm kind of irritated thinking about waking tomorrow at 7 at this cold and getting ready for collage...hutch!"...he said without caring much about the sneezing now
"As if I'm not...but u know somewhere I'm sure...something good will is waiting us...here"...she shared with him what her heart felt since she reached the airport of Chicago this day...
"Let your belief be true then.."...he hoped
"So...finally...tomorrow we are gonna go to attend our first day in university"...she felt a bit nervous
"Yup...I hope there will be hot girls all over"...he wished with a dreamy smile
"Let ur belief not be true"
"U r cruel"...his face turned cute and angry
"Whatever..."...she rolled her eyes
"Why can't you just support me in this case?"
"You know I hate flirting"
"The thing which I love the most"
"Maybe we are late for bed"...she said looking at the average sized clock fitted on the wall
"Gud nyt..."...he wished her while getting up from the bed after sometime
"Nyt...n have sweet dreams Shivam"...she wished back with a smile

He left the room...she stood up to close her window...but then she stopped on her tracks as she saw the night there...a smile took place on her lips as she saw the the puffy snow balls..laying on the road...and the street lights making them glow...the red and orange posts ..and the long trees and small plants adding more beauty to the area...her eyes stopped on some kids who were busy in throwing the snow to each other...and their parents sitting on a bench near them ,watching them and talking something...she felt a sudden argue to call her mother...but then she remembered that her call would disturb her mom...as she had already informed that she had to attend a business success party tonight...a line of disappointment took place...

A cold wind started to surround around her...she shivered...and them with trembling hands she closed the window...keeping on thinking about her next day..in the new place, she walked up to her bed..only to drift into a not so fine sleep due to the disturbing sound of wind and the cold which made her pull over the blanket more and more...



Puffy small white balls started to fall from the sky along with the small beam of sunlight which was hardly seen...Shivam wearing a casual light blue shirt, dark blue jeans and a jacket over his shirt which matched his jean's colour and Taani wearing a orangish pink sleeve-less top along with a three-fourth skinny white pant ,with a jacket covering half part of her top, stood in front of their new, big dream-like university...it was really a big change here...as before they used to go to their school all-shouting and singing along with their crazy gang but now they were so new here..that they didn't even bother to talk with each other..."JACK-SAMMER UNIVERSITY"...was boldly written in dark maroon colour on the white board...the whole university was in the same colour...full of white and maroon...

"Uh-oh..why are they all staring at us like that?"...taani asked to Shivam nervously seeing the many of the students staring at the new comers while they wer walking in
"They will...as we are new here...and we joined at the middle of the semester...and also..don't we look just amazing??"...he said with a very pleasant smile playing on his well-shaped lips
"Where can we find the princi's office"...she asked still not feeling good about the stares
"That's what I'm searching"
" Maybe we should take help from someone to reach there"...she suggested
"Yeah...your right..."...he agreed..."but to whom?"
"Mmm...lets look"

And she looked around to find any better guy or girl to ask...all the people were laughing..pranking with each-other, staring at her and her handsome friend Shivam but except one...who was turning to the opposite side ,leaning over a car and talking with another guy who had dark black hair till his shoulder and was good looking and also very much cute...she thought that would be the perfect one to ask...

She walked up to him who was just few feet far from her...the guy turned suddenly towards her...as if he knew she was coming towards him...as if he was waiting for her...she stopped ...almost forgot how to breath...as the guy in front of her was terribly handsome...though his gorgeous face looked serious ,his eyes were calm and amazingly beautiful with those attractive light hazel brown pearls which sparkled gaining her attention...his dark black hair was perfectly jelled and spiked...his reddish pink lips was perfectly shaped... his skin was so soft..so white...so beautiful...everything seemed to be best in him...it was the first time she saw such A PERFECT YOUNG GUY...it seemed like she didn't know how to speak now...her all body stopped working...she was just lost in his breath taking looks...

At the same time the guy was very much disturbed by her presence...without speaking anything to her...he just passed away with the cute guy following him...as if she had done something bad now...she just looked at the way he gone...his model-like walk...that's when she saw it was not just her who was dreamily looking at him but the whole girls!!...infact some boys too..whose face very well showed the word 'jealous'

"Hey.. Taani"...Shivam called from behind
"Y..Yeah?"..she had completely forgot about him
"It's there"...he pointed out a block
"What is there??"
"Princi's office"..
"O..oh..I just forgot that"...she said coming to the reality
"Well...who was that guy?...I saw you going there"
"I don't know...but have to admit...he's just freaking handsome"
"Really?..I didn't see his face...I was asking to a guy there...anyways lets go"
"Yeah"...

She left to the office...her mind full of that guy's face ...his hazel brown eyes...who could it be?...so much beautiful and very different from all...and the thing which she noticed was that every one in there though looked at him ,didn't dare to smile or talk with him, like they did with others, why?



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I hope you guys must have liked it...so please now just click right button and don't forget to comment😊


Edited by diyataarey101rc - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow awesome start
loved it
continue soon

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