kriyansh OS:Its new beginning

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi all... its my 1st OS... n to be frank.. this is what is running in my mind after I heard arsha leaving the show together.. and this is how I wanted kriyansh to end... 😊

Yuss... It was their last day in India... Last day in St.Louis... and the last day with their beautiful friends... With a heavy heart kria and rey bid a goodbye to their friends after a small farewell party arranged by their friends in the college... Walking through the corridors kria remembered her days in the college..The first day when she entered St.louis she had written Dance=Mumbai=Dance... the spit promise.. fire exit.. dazzlers.. weaklings.. footloose.. her exit.. then her entry.. everything passed through her eyes as though things had happened yesterday... Back to reality.. she turns her head to see rey who's walking with her with silent tears in his eyes.. she holds his hand and presses it giving an assurance she's always with him.. he hugged her.. n she hugged him back.. There was complete silence between baatcutter and linecutter.. Breaking the hug they walked in silence together holding their hands... to the parking lot.. First they reached kria's home.. packed and vacated the home... Next rey's home... packing his things.. kria comes across a group photo frame of D3 gang.. she was staring at it with tears rolling in her innocent eyes... rey was looking at her in the corner of his eyes... " Goodbyes are soo difficult"..

"You both might say goodbye a thousand times.. but with both of you together a good bye means nothing at all", said rey's dad walking in...

They had to report to NYDA 2 days later.. they were selected as the best dancers from India.. rey's dad cheered rey n kria and finally bid bye to them...

They reached New York.. It was night.. Rey had already bought a new flat for them which kria was unaware... and she was all set to go to her mausi's home and excited to introduce Rey.. but he pulled her to the new flat saying let's go morning... The new flat was beautiful and luxurious... He gave a soft peck on her cheeks and said "Welcome to our home".. kria blushed... she kissed him back and went to freshen up... Rey was all tired and reached his room.. Oops.. "their" room... As the luggage was in the room she went to the room and begin unpacking the things.. she showed rey her photographs... her collections.. some toys.. her dresses and her skirts... Rey was busy admiring her face.. that Red skirt caught his eyes.. Red was his weakness.. he asked her to wear it.. eventually she didn't agree but didn't wana disappoint him..😛

"Change here.. I won't see you changing.. i will close my eyes.." rey said..

"Dare you open your eyes" she said changing

"I won't open my eyes.. but I will open your skirt for sure" Rey said teasingly..😆

"Shut up rey.. n now open ur eyes.. " she said and gave a killer look..

Rey was almost dead looking at her..his heart skipped a beat..It always happened... the color itself was so taunting.. he couldn't resist himself.. he pulled her to the bed..

They laid on the bed facing each other.. eye locked... rey put his lips onto hers.. n started kissing... she couldn't resist and started responding to him.. they kissed so hard that they forgot to breath... she broke the kiss trying to take some breath.. his body heat.. his touch.. was effecting her alot... he started discovering her body and making moves against her neck... She started playing with his bare chest.. this was the first time they were on bed together.. it was the hottest moment... both lost control over themselves..The first time Rey was naked with Kria peeling off his shirt and unzipping his pants.. she whispered "You are soft"

Her voice was steady and soft.. her lips close to his ears.. Her words were an endearing mix of tender.. she mouned with joy and pleasure... his hands were securely wrapped around her back and chest pressed against hers... they madly made love.. and fell asleep in each other's arms..

She looked fresh after making love.. her face glittered.. It was an another day they both will never forget..😳😳😳


reviews plzz... 😉

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Snehaaa 😳
I'll never thought u will write this kind of os 😛
It was beautifulll dear awesome
so pure amezing perfect ending yrrr
Wish kash show me v aysa hota
bt cvs huh

Any ways it was so perfect awesome nd great love it thanx for this
love u Sneha for this <3 muhaa
Edited by Sanchita_ArSha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sneha first Of all.. u know na cv's are dumb.. vo aisi ending kabi dene se rahe.. so never expect anything from them -_____-

n coming to OS... fcukinggg HOTTT *_________*

I love d way u ended kriYansh story!! n connection of RED with Rey too.. he cant resist after seeing her in red skirt ;)

Hottt really hottt.. i never imagined dat u can write dis kind of stuff.. oye keep writtng.. i love to read more 😳 😃
Edited by jyoti_arsha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG!! this was Hot *-* Ahhh I want something like this to happen but you know 'World is not a Wish Granting Factory' Indian Television Censor Board :/ Loved it :* Too Hot *-*
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow amazing.
initial bit was emotional but the end was hot.
loved the way you wrote the entire flow of emotions.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Snehaaa😲😲 *rubs ma eyes* Am i dreaming 😛
Did i jus read Itta hot os frm ur side???? *pinch me*

I swear... Neva knew dat ur such a gud writer.
Kria remembering al her memories joined wid Louis n her frns... Rey der for her support awesome!!!!
Dat gang pic n Rey's Dad's line was great.
Rey surprising her wid dat flat... N deir romance ☺️ ufff hottt. Lovved it.
Hope Something like dis cud hav happened wid Kr in D3 as well.
Innu eethara os barithaane iru... I wud love to read😉

Edited by geeth_amar - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was so hot... I loved it i wish cvs could show something like this bt i hope they would give us a better kriyansh after they return(fingers crossed)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ommggg.. Now dis was seriously HOTTT..
A NEW BEGinNING truly...
Loved this bold kriya..
Superb os..
Keep writting yaar..
Would surly love to read ur works :*
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey its greaatt!! the way u described the scenes which kriya was remembering,i was also getting reminded of those golden days!!!!! kriyanshh romance hayyee justt wooww!!!! then wo skirt wali line,reyy u r veryy naughtyy!!!!!!😉justt superbb,thanks fr the pm!!!!!😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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this was superb and fabulous os... loved it

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