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deepkriti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: mishtypiya
simply beautiful...

thanks😊

Originally posted by: Sona_loveVD
beautiful os
loved it

thanks😳😃

Originally posted by: anatomy_nerd
as i started to read the os, i got a wide smile coz it has a doctor *you know wat i feel*
Then the entire flow of os was soothing n that grass wala part was the bestest...n so one pastry for you
so it was the most special os till date from you...do write more doctor vala os
P.S- at the end rey is not brain dead coz ahe moved his finger, which is a voluntary response from brain n unfortunately not from heart 😉 just flawnting my bio knowlegde dnt mind haan

I can understand how it feels like

pastry😃😃😃 jaldi de😉😃

aww!!! doctor wala os 🤣 this is the newest tag😆

P.S. keep falunting😛 I am just trying to show that yes, he was brain dead but the constant efforts of taani made him get well😃😳 and so now he is not brain dead😛

Originally posted by: poorni_vishali
superb os
1st its amazing storyline of taani as doctor and rey as brain dead person
its shows how much strong and confidence taani is
i really loved this ending its awesome😊

thanks a lot😃

glad you liked it😊

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deepkriti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: ___SAD___
nice concept loved it

thanks😊😊

Originally posted by: ONLYTAAREY
Awesome os...

thanks😃😳

Originally posted by: Viji.Chandran
nice os
n i really wish one day u write an os wt a proper ending...
i really liked ths phase...

thanks a lot😊

I wish that too🤣

glad you liked it

Originally posted by: _PanCake_
Awesome os...
Rey was brain dead :(
Taani as a doctor was trying her best to recover rey :)

thanks a lot mehru😛

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deepkriti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Sanju...
amazing peicee of work..

very nice .. d song apt n beautiful..

all emotions scenes very well portrayed!!

n ya I love ur abrupt endings .. lol!!

keep it up!

thanks a lot dear😳😃

okay so people have started loving my abrupt endings😆

good! lagta hai logo ko aadat ho gayi hai aur pata to hai hi ki mein nahi sudharne wali😳🤣

Originally posted by: taani.priya1997
awesome i liked the feelings u portrayed behind the os i really liked it
also i believe the fact that os or one short is such that the ending should be abrupt left for the readers to imagine in his or her own way
hats-off to your writings...

thanks a lot😃

you agree with me😲

thank u😳 meri thinking samajhne wale log mujhe milne lage hai😃

Originally posted by: Shubh007
Amazing + heart touching os...👍🏼

Its a little simillar to muna bhai mbbs...😉

Just love it kirti...😊

thanks 😃

ya! it is yaar..actually keh sakte hai ussi se inspire hoke likha hai😆

glad you liked it

Originally posted by: dasv
Haye deepz maar hi dala
Kya os likha hai.
Awesome so beautifully written.

Taani ne finally rey mein ek small sensation la hi di.
Just loved it.

The taani character was just superb.

Keep writing

arre marna mat😲😲

mujhpe khoon ka ilzaam NAHI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!🤣

glad you liked it dear😳

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deepkriti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: rose_taarey
deep its an awesum os...very well written... its nt essential 2 put end evry tym...its a phase ...nd sumthing lyk dat or sumthing diff. ...phase cums in evry1's lyf once...jaha dil hope kbhi nhi chodta...all d best ...wil wait 2 read anoder awesum os by u...
n 1 mor thing...in note which i luved bt i wil tell u dat in pm...
bye
priyu

thnks a lot priyu😳 *see I remember your name*😛

you are right..kabhi na kabhi aisa phase zaroor aata hai jab humara dil hope nahi chodta😳😃

Originally posted by: princess_tara
beautiful os
emotional n heart touching
it made me cry😭seriously
keep it up

thanks a lot aimu😳😃

its okk yaar..emotional tha. i know.but zyada mat rona😛

Originally posted by: raddhi
Emotional n beautiful
Taani luv rey n taani
Take care of rey like a
Mother yaar I got emotional
Finally rey respond so happy
Luv it baby thanks for PM

thanks a lot baby😳😃

mother love..so true

glad you liked it

Originally posted by: meenu_taarey
lovely so pure dear i love
keep writing
n thanx for pm
dear

thanks a lot dear😊

glad you liked it

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deepkriti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: khyati2000
oh i loved it... 😊

thanks a lot😃

Originally posted by: zulfinazi
amzng os

thanks😊

Originally posted by: sirivalli.t
awesome n a heart touching os...
beautifully written...
loved it...

thanks a lot😳😃

glad you liked it

Originally posted by: GuruTheBest
awesome

thanks😳

Originally posted by: ...Mallu...
Awesome Update :))

thanks a lot😳😊

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deepkriti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: monikasaxena05
So emotional nd lovely os
Loved it

thanks a lot😳😃

Originally posted by: Priyanka.saha
agle baar se aisa kuch likhne se pehle tissue box bhejna...
mein bohot emotional hun yr...
as the title ye os bhi undefined hai...
kuch kahke bhi iska essence mein kam nehi karna chati...
hope isse tujhe samaj aagaya what i'm trying to say...

pakka..post karne se pehle tujhe tissue box courier karungi😆

I can understand..kuch na kehke bhi to bahot kuch keh gayi😉

glad you liked it😊

Originally posted by: silpa-taarey
amazing os..
its jst superb..luvd it
it ws really touchin...
keep writtin...

thanks a lot

glad you liked it😊😳

Originally posted by: sanjana.sanju
beautifully written dear, every real story has a undefind journy where many questions r left unanswered so dnt wry abt endings, d feeling a reader get fr reading a stry is mr imp, ur writings always keeps us think mr abt it even if u end it.. Dats d power of words dear so keep writing mr : )

thanks a lot dear😳😃

you are right..every real story is a undefined journey 😊.

thanks..your appreciation means a lot😳

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deepkriti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Ale_TaaRey
Loved it 👏
Great job love 😳
Taani 😭
I got too emotional 😭
Keep writing 👏
Much love: Ale ❤️

thanks a lot😳😃

awww love😳😳😳

glad you liked it😊

Originally posted by: MarriedLove
awesome os...

thanks😃

Originally posted by: Visk_Taarey
It ws awsm os

thanks a lot😳

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...
Beautiful OS
I love it
Although it made me cry 😭
Taani love for Reyaansh is incredible

thanks a lot dear😊

aisa wala rona sehat ke liye achha hota hai😆

cause you are feeling the pain of others😉

and that's a big quality of being human😃😳

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deepkriti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: velvetrose
Amazing os
You have written it beautifully

thanks a lot😃

Originally posted by: sashaz_sis
Doctor is not only supposed to be a curer but also a friend
And that is what I loved about this OS
Thkight its illogical to say that you feel emotions through your heart but sometimes its just a belief that matters to trigger the brain to function...
And here Taani got in the belief to cure Reyansh😳
Loved it❤️

@bold completely agree😃

glad you liked it 😳😊