taarey os - our love keeps me alive

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Posted: 11 years ago
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TAAREY OS - OUR LOVE KEEPS ME ALIVE


so hai guyz...here im wid my first os...dis story s nt my creation...actually its jst a small version f d movie A WALK TO REMEMBER...i saw dat movie mre dan 50 times..
never did dat movie mde me feel bore...n ven today i saw dat movie...i cudnt resist myself frm writtin dis os bout taarey...so here u go..😊


'congratz man..award n all huh??..dat too 4 d bst ceo??.'
'thnx vicky...n btw dnt u think i deserve dat award???'
'yeah..yeah rey u really deserve it othrwise nxt whole year also ur gonna settle in ur office everytime n nt gonna mind us'
'sry dude'
'no way im gonna forgive u...u didnt meet any1 f us frm d last 4 years...u didnt cme in any f our marriage..n u think im gonna accept ur sry...i wanna see u...nt only me bt many f us..'
'yeah man i'll cme dere soon.'
'u better...bye den'
'bye...'

i disconnctd d call...he hvnt chngd a bit...he s still d same vicky who crackd sme unwantd jokes everytime which smetimes turnd successful resultin us laughin n smetimes unsuccessful'
bt smewhere 2day i felt his voice dwn...mayb he really ws angry or upset wid me...n hw cudnt he...i ws his bff 4m our childhood till nw...n hw cud a bff miss his frnd's marriage??..im such a..
mm..leave it...bt even though i missd it i gt smethin i really ws waitin 4...d best CEO award..finally i fulfilld my promise which i kept 2 her..she wud b d happiest person if she had heard dis..
she wud say dat its all bcuz f my hardwork bt actually it s all bcuz f her...if she was nt dere den i wud jst hangout wid my frnds widout any dreams...bt she mde a dream ..an aim 4 me..i never did
thought my whole life vil belong 2 her 1 day n den 4ever...TAANI..i cud still remembr each n every moment which i spend wid her..dose memories vil never leave 4m me..n i dnt want dem 2..

i cud still remeber my life 7 years b4 when i ws 18...i never ws d topper f d st.loius collage..actually i really dnt remembr dat i even gt mre dan 40% in any f my subjects..i ws a complete flirt..a guy who had no dreams n never did fear any1...bt i ws famous in d whole school in bth positive 4 students especially 4 girls n negative 4 teachers especially 4 princi...
dey cud throw me n my frnds out f d collage fcourse bt dey all respectd my father MR.RANVIJAY SINGHANIA 1 f d best buissness man in india ...our gang ws famous a group f 6 boys n 3 girls...v always mde fun f d students..n did sme pranks on every1 includin teachers...n after 1 year came d new admission time...v all vere full on ready 4 raggin..no1 cud stp us in dat...n yes v did raggd many people...n den came TAANI..no no TAANI SHEKKAWAT..i cud still remembr dat light blue one peace cloth she wore which covered her completely...n den over dat she wore a dark blue sweater...yeah she ws beautiful..bt so mch traditional..which gve us mre fun 2 rag her...v gve her alot f tasks...bt 2 our surprise she dne everything widout any complaints or any tears which othr students gave us..v felt bit bad seein her no fear attitude...dats wen d principal came wid his dat big eyes which always lukd at every1 givin us a feelin dat he might kill us...as he came he huggd taani mkin us doubtful..'TAANI..MY DAUGHTER'..he said..dats wen i re-thought bout her name TAANI..SHEKKWAT..oh damn our princi mr.rishi shekkwat's daughter...v all vere scared 2 death 4 d first time...as v knw dat nofather vil b happy ven he knws dat his daughter s bein raggd...again dis new admission girl surprisd us..she didnt complaint anythin...instead she flashd us a smile n wnet frm dere wid mr.shekkawat...days passd..dis girl surprisd us all again n again...she became topper f d collage...did i mention dat she ws a bookworm??...if no den listen...she ws so mch attathd 2 books...it felt as dey vere parts f her..if anybody cudnt find her in her classroom..den better luk in d library...she'll b dere...v all tried our best 2 vilify her..bt never did she cried..i never saw any tears in her dose chocolaty brown eyes..she ws 1 f d many..i cud say i hatd her...y??...bcuz she ws d only girl who didnt care bout me...she didnt hve any frnds..bt every1 luvd her kind habit except me n my gang..

slowly slowly v strtd 2 ignore her...cuz v realisd v r always in bck f her tryin sme pranks which never workd..dat time teacher mde her 2 sit near me..sayin dat mayb sittin wid her vil make me a gud person...it felt as if god ws pullin me 2wards her..n so she became my benchmate...let me tell it ws damn borin 2 sit wid her..she always reas she'll read any book widout mindin d human bein sittin near her...n den bcuz f my bad luck teacher mdee her my partner 4 mkin a project..dats d time wen i actually saw d real hidden person inside her...i had 2 go 2 her home 4 workin out wid our project..d first day went normally..me bein bored n she nt carin bout me...d second day v talkd bout our plans 4 d project...d third v strtd our project...while workin out wid dat v bth really enoyd eachothrs company...hw did dis borin n traditional girl became so funny n super cool??...she cud play cricket perfectly dan any boys cud...she cud sing so nicely...ahh..her voice its lyk d honey..so sweet..n she mde me dance!!..4 d first time i discovered i cud dance..she said i had a gud buissness mind lyk my father had..her father nevr lykd her bein frndly wid me n hw cudnt he??...i ws so bad infrnt f him b4..he thought mayb i ws tryin her..bt no...d truth wsI WAS FALLING 4 THIS NEW ADMISSION GIRL WHO USED 2 SURPRISE ME WHENEVER WE MET!!!...
bt i ws unknown 2 dis fact dat time...i realisd it wen nilesh 1 f d guy in my group questiond me..dats wen i too thught i hvnt went 2 my gang 4 3 whole weeks..instead i ws wid her..
i ws feelin so happy wid her dan i ws wid my frnds...i startd 2 spend time wid my parents...i strtd 2 focus on my studies..v gt best marks in our projects..i hated wen my frnds playd pranks on any1..i hated hurtin people...ws i dat old reyaansh singhania??...was she changin me???..yeah she was...actually she ws inspirin me...slowly i found out dat i strtd luv her lyk anythin..no no i luv her already..i luv her!!...taani..my taani...widout no doubt i proposd her d next day itslef...aftr all
reyaansh sighania cnt keep anythin in his mind 4 so long...'I LOVE YOU TAANI'..dats wat i tld her on our first date which i begged her father 2 go wid her...i thought her answer vil b a yes..
bt she didnt say it..she lukd at me..her eyes vere filld wid dat salty water..dats d first time i saw her cryin...widout sayin a word she ran...mkin me confusd...as i didnt knw dat it ws a yes or a no...yeah i ws sad dat time..i thought i cud talk bout it 2 her d nxt day...bt she didnt cme d nxt day..i felt lonely dat whole day..i felt as if i ws alone...she didnt cme 4 dat whole freakin week...u cud imagine my condition dat whole week...i cnt let it go lyk dat..so wat i did ws dat i went 2 her home .actually 2 her room through her room's window...as her father wnt lyk my presence...i saw her lying on her bed..actually she ws sleepin..her face ws so dull n weak...her eyes vere puffy..things vere here n dere in her n room ws nt in a proper manner lyk it usd 2 b...d thought dat came in my mind ws dat did i hurt her??..bt den my love covered dat thought..i knw she dnt hve anybody else in her life...n 1 ting i vry well knw s dat i cud keep her happy n safe...dats wen she woke up..as she woke up she lukd at me shckd...as every girl she too ws nt so comfortable seein a boy alone in her room...'wat r u doin here??'...she askd dat question mre dan a 20 times..'wat if dad sees u'..'go rey'..she said all dis until i caught her waist n pulld her near me...everythin went silent...only dat cool night breeze surrounded us mkin a small sound..v bth lukd in eachothrs eyes..i cud still feel dat warmness which i felt while holdin her in my arms...'rey go frm here'..she said slowly...i gnrd her dat talk n said 2 her again bout my feelings..i expectd her 2 slap or scold at me 4 cmin at midnight n tellin bout my feelings once again...bt again dis girl surprisd me...she kept her soft delicate dat rosy lips on mine...automatically my eyes closd...v really livd dat moment...i cud still feel d goosebumps all over me which i felt dat time...she broke it...n lukd at me...her eyes vere filld wid tears...i felt 2 do sme magic n mke her happy... i lukd at her...'i cnt say any lie 2 u..n u knw dat..so..d truth s I LOVE YOU TOO REY'...she confessed..u cnt even imagine hw gr8 i felt dat time..bt aftr hearin d nxt words f her i felt lyk cryin out loud..no..actually i felt 2 die..jst 2 vanish 4ever...'bt rey'...she continued..her face ws grwin red dat time..'smetimes sme relations r nt meant 2 b..dey cnt b 4ver..n our relation s lyk dat...mayb i cud live wid u 4 sme days bt everythin vil go after dat...so its better 2 stop it here'...i actually didnt undrstand d meanin f her words bt den she tld d mst worst news..'rey...i..im sick...i hve leukemia...'..a tear wdout my permission escapd frm my eyes..even d wind stppd mkin noise...it felt as if d wind ws too sad 4 wat it heard..'i ws goin through many treatments frm d last 6 years..bt d doctor tld im nt respondin 2 dem n dere s no use f mre treatments ..he tld jst 2 live d life normally...n rey im wishin 2 live happily wid dad n mom...den u came...n chngd everythin...u mde me fall in love wid u...bt i dnt want 2...rey..i dnt want 2 mke a reason 2 b angry wid god'...her voice crackd at d middle..'bt my love wsnt so weak 2 leave her dat easily...'i luv u taani...nw n 4ever...i'll tke care f u ..i promise..my uncle s a doctor taani...i'll say him 2 mke verythin ryt...plzz...taani..im nt leavin anywhere..i luv u...n i'll always b dere wid u'...

of course dat day she didnt say anythin bt d nxt day she came near me n huggd me...yeah..dat huggd meant she luv me..n she'll b wid me!!...after many days f our relation v tuk our relationship 2 d nxt level..'MARRIAGE'..
it ws easy 2 convience my parents as dey already fond f my sweatheart..bt her parents ws nt dat easy...mr.shekkawat really strtd lykin me..bt he ws nt sure bout a marriage..
bt as said luv overcomes all...our love conviencd dem...v gt married...v bth felt complete dat moment wen i wore d mangalsutra around her neck markin her as only mine...
den d days aftr dat..i ws wid her n she ws wid me..our love..dose vere d best day f my entire life..my frnds too strtd 2 luv her so mch..dey calld us TAAREY d luv birds..v vere happy...bt as said every happiness have 2 cme 2 an end..my uncle ws helpless 2 stp her disease...n lyk our painful destiny 1 day she passd away...i still remembr d last kiss v shared...d promise i mde ..everything...v vere jst perfect 2gether..no..no actually v r..bcuz i still luv her...she s d 1 who taught me hw 2 live..hw 2 b happy..hw 2 love..i actually dnt miss her..buz i knw she s wid me evrytime...
even if i close my eyes her face can b seen...she cnt b taken so easily away frm me...d love wind still surrounds me...mayb she s also a part f it nw..im still happy in my life bcuz she wants me 2 b..
n i vil always keep my promise 2 her...as OUR LOVE IS THE ONLY REASON THAT KEEPS ME ALIVE..

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finally my first os s written...didnt cme in d way i wntd😕...i had a lot f imaginations bt as i wrote didnt gt dat feel which i wntd...
well...after readin dnt 4get 2 like n comment..plzz..😃


Edited by silpa-taarey - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow beautiful os
loved it
very nicely written
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its ur first os!
N I know very well how it feels when u get appreciations for ur works
Really well done
I liked it a lot
If its ur first os den superb
It luks lyk sum1 very experienced have written
Really nice!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanx guyz 4 ur precious comments😊...

n jst check out my taarey ff

taarey ff - love is blind


Edited by silpa-taarey - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awsm os
Taarey love ws enternal she died bt rey kept loving her 😭
It made me feel the undying love
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Posted: 11 years ago
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superb shilpa
loved every single line
too emotional
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It's damn emotional
Os swty u made me cry
Amazing do PM me nxt time
Plzz

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