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ShwePoo

@ShwePoo

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

ONE SHOT

Sharon - Swayam... Swayam.

Swayam was shocked seeing sharon getting an asthama attack again... he couldnt believe the sight in front of his eyes...

Swayam- Sharon (Shouting)

Ruhi was a little shocked, First she thought sharon was acting just like her to get swayam close... but then later she realized that something happened, she wasnt worried...

She was happy that Sharon was weak.. and she could conquer Swayam more easily...

Swayam came close to her... Removed pump from her ba and pumped it in sharon's mouth and was praying that she becomes fine... In no time... Swayam picked up her in his arms

and took her to the medical room... Ruhi was cursing her stars for this moment... she did not want swayam and sharon to get close... but coz of her they were...

MEDICAL ROOM...

Sharon was checked and made her lye down on the bed... the nurse asked them to leave as she needed to rest... Swayam was wondering why did she get an attack.. a while back

everything was fine... she was smiling... and was happy.. in moments what happened that everything turned against her health... He looked at ruhi and in his mind flashed the things

that sharon told him about Ruhi... That she loves him... He wondered that for him can she do something to ruin sharon's health...

Swayam- Ruhi tum thi na waha... kya hua suuddenly

Ruhi- wayam hume nahi pata.. hum kudh darr gaye yeh sab dekh ke...

Swayam and Ruhi come out of the medical room...

Swayam- Ruhi i cant help you... I am gonna stay with Sharon today... and please dont tell anyone about this... everyone will get worried...

Ruhi- Ok bye...

Swayam goes back to the medical room..

Swayam (in his mind) - Sharon aisa kya tension hai tumhe jo tum mujhse share nahi kar sakti.. Itna durr kar diya kya maine tumhe... jo tum mujhe apne problems nahi bata paa

rahi ho... I know its something related to ruhi... Usse baat karke tumhe attack aaya... uske baare me kab se mujhe warn kar rahi ho... aisa kya hai.. jo mujhe nahi dikh raha..

aur tumhe itna siturb kar raha... Its time i have to find out... I have to know aisa kya hai... jisne yeh halat kar di tumhari...

Sharon i will find out... Ek baar tumhe judge kiya... aab tumhe believe karaunga... and will always be there by you...

Sharon moves a litle..

Swayam- Sharon are you okay??

Sharon(half concious) - Nahi ruhi please... tum mat karo aisa... you have a proble with me... Team ko chod do... kisi ko mat batao humara secret... Carrer kharab hojayega humara...

Please dont get so obssed with Swayam.. woh tumse pyaar nahi karta... please leave us alone... please... (starts crying ) Mere swayam ko chod do...

Sharon- (gets up and yells) - SWAYAM!!!!

Swayam- sharon kya hua... I am here only... tum teek ho...patting her back... and looking at her with concern...

Sharon hugs him tightly... and starts crying...

Sharon- Swayam please stay here with me... dont leave me alone... Swayam please... (sharon did not know... that she spoke loud.. and swayam had heard it.. she thought it was her

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ShwePoo

@ShwePoo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

PART TWO..

Swayam and Sharon reach home REy drops them...

Sharon- Thank you guys...

Rey- Sharon tum akele kyu rehna chahti ho... come home... you can stay with me...

Sharon- No rey i am fine..

Swayam- Jo bhi ho... I am staying with you.. (sharon tries to say something) Sharon no arguement... I am staying.. come lets go... Thanks REy..

Rey- No problem re

Swayam holds Sharon's hand and leads her to her room...

Swayam- Chalo tum leto.. todhi der tab tak mai tumhare liye kuch bana ke laata hu...

Sharon- baitho na todhi der... I am not hungry now..

Swayam - Okay

Sharon- Thank you Swayam itna sab karne ke liye... For taking so much care... I dont even feel I had an attack

Swayam- You shouldnt have had one... Mere wajah se hi hua na sab... coz of me being so blind...

Sharon(shocked)- Kya bol rahe ho..

Swayam- Jo kuch hua medical room me...I know now Ruhi is the reason of all your tension and stress...I am sorry sharon..(teary eye)

Sharon comes close to him.. helds his face by cheek and makes him look up to her... slowly wipes his tears off

Sharon- Swayam tumhari koi galti nahi hai... No body could have thought Ruhi aisa karegi.. agar team ka carrer ka sawal nahi hota... I wouldnt have even let her come till here

But you know how much problem it will become agar hum sab ka secret bahar aata...

You dont have to feel guilty... Tum ne kuch nahi kiya hai... She took advantage of you being helpful and nice to her...

Swayam- Kya fayda nice hoke... agar woh tumhe problem me daal raha hai... Kitna stupid tha mai... how could i not notice all of this...

Sharon- ssshhh... chup abhi... bilkul... You are not at fault... tum toh sirf ek dost ke naate uske help kar rahe the... how would you know she is obsessed with you.. and she is not mentally stable

Swayam- WHAT???

Sharon- Ya Ruhi has bipolar disorder...

Swayam- oohh shucks... i dint even know it...

Sharon- Okay aab bass.. I dont wanna talk about her... (and just lies on his lap)

Swayam- Sharon... Thanks for not making me feel guilty...

Sharon- Swayam.. I know you well now... jab humara breakup hua tha... tumne mujhe judge kiya... I didnt like it... now i understand how it feels...I dont want you to

go through it... I have started seeing your POV too...

Swayam slowly bends and gives her a kiss on her cheeks..

Swayam- Thanks for being there...

Sharon- Always...

Ok now i am hungry... What are you making for me... (getting up)

Swayam- Khichdi...

SHaron makes a face...

Sharon- I dont want khichdi... kuch acha banao na...

Swayam- Sharon nahi.. aaj toh khichdi hi khana hoga... I will feed you and eat with you.. Tab toh khaogi na... (winking at her)

Sharon- With pleassure...

Swayam gets up and walks to go to kitchen...

Swayam- Uthne ki sochna bhi mat... Sit here...I will make and get it...

Sharon- (makes a puppy face) - Okay...

Swayam in half an hour comes with a big bowl of khichdi... as soon as he enters... he sees SHaron sleeping, She had dosed of waiting for him... He was lost in her beauty...

She had an angelic beauty...with a slight content smile on her face... As they had no secrets between them... They both knew they love each other... but wanted some time

with each other before confessing... they didnt want to rush... This time...

Swayam- KHUBSURAT (he thought he said in his mind... but he was loud to wake her up)

Sharon opens her eyes...

Sharon- Kya kaha...

Swayam- (looks down) - Khichdi is here...

Sharon- WOW cant wait... ( sarcastically)

Swayam (smiling)- You dont have an option Sharon... Khanna padega...

Sharon- You have to feed me... no spoon with hand...

Swayam(happily)- Okay...

Swayam takes a little bith of khichdi... blows it a little so that it isnt too hot in her mouth and feeds her slowly... Sharon slowly takes it in her mouth and bites all

his fingers...

Swayam- aaahhh... sharon...

Sharon stats lauhing really loud...

Swayam- yeh kyu kiya...

Sharon- tum jab se aaye bada serious behave kar rahe ho... socha todha FUN hojaye... hahahahahahahaha

Swayam- you want fun naa... Now you wait and watch Ms Sharon rai prakash...

he gets up and keeps the bowl on the table beside... and soon sharon realizes that he is gonna run to catch her... she gets up

and starts running in the bedroom and swayam behind her... they dodge for a while... While they both were running... Swayam gets hurt by the bed...

Swayam- ooucchh... (sits on the bed)

Sharon(concerned)- Kya hua Swayam kahan lagi... Im so sorry... mere wajah se lagi

In no time... Swayam picks her puts her on bed... and comes above her...

Swayam- aab kahan jaaogi bachke...

Sharon- Now i dont wanna go anywhere... Wrapping her arms around his neck...

Swayam- Sharon dont ever go away from me... I dont like to be away from you...

Sharon- Mujhe apne aap se durr mat karo... I also dont like...

Swayam slowly bends and places a kiss on her forehead... and lies beside her... Sharon turns and places her head on his chest... and swayam wraps his arms around her..

Sharon- This feels soo good... I always wanna be close to you...

Swayam- This feels the best...

and in no time they both sleep off content and happy with their life...

THIS WAS MY IDEA OF THE CURRENT TRACK... hope you guys like it... pls do comment and let me know...

Edited by ShwePoo - 11 years ago

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sonali saraswat

@cutelove

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

loved it esp swayams monologue..it was really well written ..update soon

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fanista

@fanista

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

superb ! jaldi se part 2 de dho

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Sachi

@sachi123

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

Nice One Shweta! (Shweta, right?) Loved how you showed Sharon and ofcourse Swayam was too good ! Ruhi have to pay for her sins! All in all great effort! Pls UPDATE soon!
Love,
Sachi.

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cool.surabhi

@cool.surabhi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

Nice OS... Swayam's monologue was nicely written...

Update soon...

Want to know ab ruhi kya karegi...

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

nice one...
swayam's pov is too good.
ruhi shocked..
loved it..
update soon.

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ShwePoo

@ShwePoo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

THank you guys... for liking it... will update tom :)

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GlamourousPearl

@GlamourousPearl

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

Dil garden garden ho gaya k ruhi ka game tamam ho gaya...lalalala...
OK OK...I know I m very bad at dat...

Seriously awesome update...loved ur way of potrayl of swayam...mononlogues n dialoges n guilt n concren,...aptly penned down...

Hoping next update to hv realizations confessions n a jaw breaking slap on ruhi's face

Eagerly waiting for next update 😊 😊 😊

Edited by GlamourousPearl - 11 years ago