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Posted: 11 years ago
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This surely has to be my shortest One Shot ever...😆

More than writing, I had to take time for re-editing the written OS😆

CP, Anky n Vaish...this was a Beautiful Idea😃👏

Words : Ravenous, Mermaid, Fantasy.

500 words it is.

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Beautiful. Ravishing. Drop Dead Gorgeous were some of the least adjectives that described her. Everyone claimed her to be the princess of fantasy. He smiled taking large steps to the gate to witness the antique.

"You are under a threaten son and it isn't safe",his mom coaxed a warning.

"I can protect myself", he assured her unsure himself.

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He sat down on his knees beside her lofty bed, his eyes worshipping the shining glory of a sleepy form infront of him lying to his side. Her dark kohled eyes, her flushed lips ready to be taken, her skin which radiated heat in its own essence. His eyes took a second to glare at her completely. Fabric adorned every inch of her body except her bare arms and also a sinful face which influenced men to commit crime. She looked like a mermaid in the long gown which overflowed her slim body.


He inched his palm closer to her face to feel her skin, caress it, so soft. She arched as if a rose petal was kissing her face with her breath going shallow. His finger rubbed against her lips making her breath hitched. Sensing a presence in her semi-conscious mind, she pushed his hand away and sat up breathing unevenly. His lips curved naturally into a smile. "I can't believe a divine beauty like you was locked in a room", he voiced huskily drinking her image. Her eyes widened in fear and she turned around facing him. He held her left arm with his palm against her lips stopping her voice of protests. "If you were mine, I would have been proud to show the world unlike your parents who are preserving you by caging", he spoke glancing at her innoncenct eyes. His palm caressed her cheek softly cupping her face making her gasp. "I want you", he whispered under a dark gaze and she stared at him in disbelief. She lowered her eyes ignoring the warmth of his body. "Forgive me my lord. I would prefer death being virgin rather than comfort being touched", she voiced looking up to meet his eyes and in a breath of second his cold lips fused onto hers. He kissed her fiercely nipping at her lips for sweet pleasures and moans zenith times to his heart content. "I thought I was risking my life but now I feel everything I did is worth you..You are mine", he stated possessively and kissed her breathlessly once again, his eyes dancing with happiness he stood back on his feet, casting her a last glance, he strode away.

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"Be my princess", he confessed on the huge assemblance cupping her face, she silently nodded overwhelmed and his lips found solace on hers, the kiss was ravenous and demanding that she could just moan and give into his needs.

He layed her like a soft petal on the cosy bed and treated her the way she was meant to be - Princess, his soul possession.


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Hope you liked it.

Please, do comment.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
Lesh ^__^
___________
Unlesh
M first my God
Dink chika dink chika~_^

Fab job meow
Loved it
Haye yr tum log ney challenge poorey b kr liye
M still working


Okay fine
It was amazing
Loved it

Baki work b update kr do maty
Aroma^_^
Edited by aroma.arsha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ap logo ko itne mast ideas drabble me hi kyu ate hain...kb khatam hojata h pata hi nai chalta...anyways, it was a unique 1 i must say...start me i thot wo sachme mermaid hai.,(thi kya ?)...i loved rey's actions, so much, nd ofcourse kria's reactions too...i wud luv to know y she was caged...overall it was beautiful (i imagined kriyaansh here)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
Lessshhh...
Unlessshhh...
Again 500 words... Urrgghhh... Itna bada torture. *pulling my hairs*
saare writters humpe itna bada zulam karing :'(
chalo .. Cuming to my review..
Masst os tha di..
Reallyyy ek dum jhakaas idea..
Waah waah.. Words ko kya correctly use kiya :D
prince n princes ki kahani... Wowww ^_^
mazza aaya read kerke...
Aage se aisa kabhi mat likhna -__-
aur torture sehan nahi hota mujh se... Never ever think of writing itna chotu sa os n DO NOT PARTICIPATE IN IT TO...
iss time toh kiase bhi torture sahing.. Next time kahi mar na jaau.. Toh hum jaise masum se readers pe taras khaan plz...
Edited by Madhu_ArSha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#5
Snigs it was beautiful...

kya mast likha hai tune chori... 😃

definatly Mosttt shortest OS ever written by u 😆

but it was beautiful...

Prince Princess..aawww..how cuteee...

loved eettt...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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omg such an amazing OS just in 500words...
it was short n cute OS...
well written snigdha...
loved it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#7
wow...just a word iz enough to describe it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#8
Beautiful os
Love it
was so sweet
n i really adore it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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snigs... dear.. this is freaking awsome...

superb concept...

short but very very much cute...

just loved it



with lots of love
moumita
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superbbb..
Wow kriya mermaid.
Loved rey ki sari batein and kriya ke reacvtions on them...
Perfectly written...

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