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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello people! 😃
i wrote this os long back but never posted it!
Today i think its time to share this os with you..😳😆
Sorry agar aapko boring lage! 🤢

karva chauth -a taarey os
this story starts from where the college days are aldready over..the final exams have took place and everyone has passed with good marks.. swaron,bharkha,nimmi,rimar and viha are all married while taarey marriage date is fixed and they are going to be each others after facing all the problems.. (intro over)
it was 2 o'clock at noon..a beautiful girl was sitting on her bed ...sumtymz giggling, sumtymz laughing... a girl in beautiful red indian attire..a silky smooth saree wrapped around with black border at the edges..a thin strapped black glittery blouse was just it!

link to the photo- http://www.google.co.in/imgres?imgurl=http://media.kalkifashion.com/media/catalog/product/cache/1/image/1250x1750/05eabcfd22245c4c760dd56f1bffd57f/r/e/red-saree-with-sequin-border-by-b91-exclusive-175012_3__1.jpg&imgrefurl=http://www.kalkifashion.com/red-saree-with-sequin-border-by-b91-exclusive.html&usg=__Y1c68wIhHMGuTUwQKoKCXG32q9o=&h=1750&w=1250&sz=215&hl=en&start=13&sig2=xo2y05ItfJTnkbLikKHYmw&zoom=1&tbnid=3iFdeIO7THdNlM:&tbnh=150&tbnw=107&ei=0p-NUsPBG8H_rAevh4CIBw&itbs=1&sa=X&ved=0CEIQrQMwDA

a girl sitting with curly ,partially wet ,open long hair.. a pretty red bindi on her forhead was just the cherry on the cake
the soothing beauty seemed to melt every other heart! <3 the girl was, Taani..
taani- awww! aap kitne cute ho...i luv u my shona..n kisses.. aap jaante nahi ho ,maine aapko kitna miss kiya.. apne har ek memorable moment ko aapke saath maine share kiya.( no!! u r thinking wrong.its not rey! :P )
while, swayam was listening to all from behind the door..n after listening to this he cud'nt just resist( being an indian bro! u know..) n dyer cumz our hero, jispe har ek ladki marti hai..
the guy, every girl dreams of.. our superhero.. ..the guy who can never be sumone else'es than taani.. d guy who luvd the girl like anything! <3 r hero, Rey
entered..
rey- hey swayam, sorry bro m late..par tu yahan kya kar raha hai..i mean,taani ke room ke bahar aise chupke kya kar raha hai?
swayam (shocked) - uh, t-tu yahan..agar tu yahan hai toh fir andar kaun hai?
rey- andar matlab? ye taani ka room hai ,toh vahi hogi..
swayam- i doubt so.. shayad koi aur bhi hai.. (in mind- wat is dis happening... taani kisi aur ke saath.???? (angry likes anything) "
rey- aur kaun hoga swayam..?
swayam- chal chalke hi dekh lete hai..
swayam- taani (loudly with boldness in voice)
taani- (stands) ji bhai.. kya hua? kuch kaam tha kya? n den sees rey..
swayam- yahan pe koi hai, i heard u talking to sum1..
taani- ji? bhai, yahan koi nahi hai
n actually no one was dyer ..
swyam- toh fir tum kisse shona baby n all that keh rahi thi (rey -shocked but yet trusts taani n patiently waits for her reply)
taani- bhai vo..(giggles) .. bhai, aap bhi na..vo toh krishna ji thhe..
n on the bed was lying a cute krishna ji's soft toy!
reyam- kya?
taani- ji.. (starts to laugh.. as fr now she is aware of swayam's doubt )
swayam - taani...! kya koi bhagwan se aise baat karta hai..my baby.. i luv u n all!
taani- bhai, vo mere bhagwan toh hai par saath hi unme aur kisi aur mein meri jaan basti hai.. (n winks at rey ;) ) (swayam unaware of her wink)
rey- kya swayam..tu bhi na kyu meri sweetheart pe aise doubt kar raha hai..? n holds taani from her shoulders wrapping his hands around her (keep his one hand on her back n other on her shoulder)
swayam- (awkward) sweetheart???
rey- uh! (luks here n dyer) vo actually..
enters sharon
sharon (shouts)- swayam! itni late??? bhul gaye tum, humme upcoming dance event ki payment lene jana hai.. m waiting for u frm soo long. ye d3 team se related hai isliye mai yahan aayi ..nahi toh sharon rai prakash kisi ka wait nahi karti! (crosses her both hands in anger in full on attitude mode) do i need to tell u dat?
swayam- uh, sry vo mai bhul gaya tha..chalo sharon.ok den guys (taarey) see u at the evening... bye!
taarey- bye!
swaron leave! now taarey alone in house...
rey -(teasing tone) so madam, aap apne krishna ji se itna pyaar karti hai ki unme aapki jaan basti hai,vo toh mai jaanta tha..par ye koi aur kaun hai? (winks)
taani- ohh! mr. singhania..mai vo aapko,kyu batau? (in a playful mode)
rey- oh.. toh ab mai rey se mr.singhania ban gaya hu? huh..? don't forget miss taani.shekhawat,aap bohot jaldi mrs.singhania banne wali hai!
taani (blushes) - i will wait for that day! <3
rey holds her from waist.. taani is shy at the present moment
rey- but sumthing's different..
taani- kya? (confused)
rey- aaj ye saari? aur red saari..kyu madame...vaise aaj hai kya? i mean koi festival hai kya? (aware but acting if he is very shareef :p )
taani- (angry) rey aap, aap ye mujhse puch rahe hai? i mean maine aapke liye vrath (fast) rakha hai maine subah se kuch nahi khaya.. ye sunne ke liye? aap toh jaaiye.. mai hi pagal thi jisne aapke liye fast kiya.. ( crosses her both hands n luking on other side)
rey -awww! meri sweetheart naraz ho gayi? m sry baby! (n he takes the stran of hair which was coming on her face n he put dem aside.. he held her from waist n pulled her closer)
taani- chaliye hatiye abhi.. ( pushes him slightly ) rey holds her hand n pulls her back.she comes crashing on him. and he with his both hands on her waist.. (remember just lyk dil ibadat sequence..no-no don't go sooo far! try to remember just d pose ;) )
rey- vaise, aaj raat lawn me aa rahi ho na?
taani- ji????
rey- sweetheart ,fast todne ..nahi toh lifetym mere liye fast karne ka iraada hai kya? ;)
taani- ohh!!! vaise aapke liye kuch bhi!
rey - my darling taani is getting romantic huh? pulls her closer!
taani- rey hatiye abhi..chaliye.. dekhiye !! aapke saath tym ka kuch pata hi nahi chalta hai..2 bajay ke 4 baj gaye..
rey- toh mere saath hi raho na..plss...
taani- rey...! aap bhi na...shaadi ke baad sath rehne ke armaan pure kar lijiyega..but abhi mujhe jana hai ..infact abhi aapko bhi jana.. kabse bhai aur sharon vaha pe hai.. as a friend n as a d3 team member , aapko bhi jana chahiye..
rey- tum bhi chalo na saath...plz..mere liye! chalogi na?
taani- rey!! aap bhi na..aapke saamne kabhi meri chali hai?
rey-hmm..toh chalo
*****taarey with swaron******
swyam-rey,chal toh sahi... patanahi gaadi me shayad kuch problem ho gayi hai..
rey- uh haa..aata hu
taani-sharon are standing alone here..
taani- aap abhi tak tayaar nahi hui... aapne bhai ke liye fast rakha hai na?
sharon- tumhe kaise pata maine fast rakha hai?
taani- aap chahe bhai se kitne hi rude kyu na ho.. par mai jaanti thi ki ye vrath aap zarur rakhoge! par aap aise jaaoge? i mean skirt me..
sharon- nahi..abhi toh change karna hai... par patanahi car me kya problem hai.. vaise taani, tum ho bohot lucky huh..
taani- kyu?
sharon- as if, tumhe kuch pata nahi..
taani- aap kya keh rahe ho mujhe sachi nahi samajh aa raha..
sharon- taani,rey ne bhi tumhare liye fast rakha hai..
taani- really sharon? aap sach bol rahe ho?
sharon - haa tani..mai kyu jhuth bolungi.. par mai janti thi ki rey tumhe ye khud kabhi nahi batayega..
taani- (with teary eyes) rey ne mer liye fast kiya! (in mind - ab aapne ye mere liye kiya hi hai toh aapko repay toh zarur karungi..par kya rey..agar aap pehle bata dete toh mai aap pe gussa hi nahi hoti..khamakha mai aap pe chillai.)
*******at evening in lawn for puja (taarey-swaron-viha-bharkha-nimmi-rimar)**************
all girls are preparing for the puja whereas the boys are standing at a side adoring dyer beauties..
taani n oder girls take dyer karvas (pitcher full of water) and some puas in their beautifully decorated plates.. on one side of the plate they placed some roli. the girls tie a red kalawa around the opening of their karwas. the puja then starts.. the girls apply roli to their godess gauri and also to each other. the girls sprinkle some water on the godess gauri's photo..while the boys are trying to notice the rituals carefully..when the puja ends everyone,including the boys shower some rice on the photo..
then shouts vicky- arre dekho-dekho..chaand aa gaya..
everyone look above to the sky..the moon was slowly becoming bigger while coming from behind the clouds..the beautiful star constellation was adding beauty to the dark sky which was now lightened by the moon's light..
the girls pray for their husbands.. while taani prays for his GOING TO BE husband! the boys and girls stand in 2 rows ..each couple facing towards their faces..
the girls turn and see the moon from their seives and then look at their husbands.. rey makes taani drink some water and then she eats morsel food from her going to be husband's hands and she felt like heaven at that time.. all other couples followed the same rituals..
rey- sweetheart, ye shaadi se pehle manayi hui hamari aakhiri karva chauth..jisse tum aur mai hamesha yaad karenge.. 1 maheene baad hamari shaadi..ab toh intezaar nahi ho raha..
taani takes him to a side..
rey was about to speak when taani places her finger on his lips not allowing him to speak at the moment..
taani- aapne mere liye fast kiya?
rey- tumhe kisne kaha?
tanai- rey..sharon ne...aapne sach me?
rey- (gives a smile) yess..
and in a blink of eyes taani placed wet kisses on his cheeks..while rey was shocked at this treatment of hers..
taani- aap mujhe pehle bata dete na, toh mai aap pe subah chilaati bhi nahi..khamkha maine aapse aise baat ki..
rey- pehle bata deta toh kiss kah milti! ;) (gives his killer smile)
taani- rey!!! aap bhi na..chaliye sab hamara wait kar rahe honge..
taarey and all other couples assemble on the big table for food and den followed a round of small chit-chat,some teasings and the food!
~~~~~~~~THE END~~~~~~~~~


Chuttku si os thi! pasand aaye toh like+comment karna.. aur nahi aaye toh all the tomatoes n sandals are welcome(No eggs becasue i am pure veggie 😉 )

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amazing os😊
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Awesome super cute os
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awsome i really loved it...

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