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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
awesome cute and lovely
the way you started story
then flashbacksequence there confession
everything is just perfect
awesome end
keep writing more and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
awesum OS ..! 👏
TR wer to cute .. 😳
der cnfession was superb .. ! 👍🏼

thank u 4 d pm .. 😊
keep writing .. ! 😃

congo 4 becoming a dazzler .. 👏

PS - Belated Happy Diwali .. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
congratulation dear ...

brilliant os ...
i have no word t descried this os ...i full enjoy.
rey tell about his love, life ,soul and taani ...awesome...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: ankita_95

res..


unres...

Finally posted!! i was xcited so so much dat i dint evn ate my dinner.. n my mum shouting to eat food..!!1

hehhe.. well sweetypie all of it is suprb.. also i lyk Anku for me.. sweet1..
ps - abhi ke liye sweetypie ll call u .. i may call u by diff names too..hehehe..meri aadat hai na..

i actually forgot wat prt i wrote bt then i remembered sm of it..!!

well this is my 1st collab wrk n its wid u .. nvr thought wud do a collab thing lyk this.. n it turnd out to be gud.. !!

there were 2 surprises 4 me here.. 1st the song mix (amazingly put according to situation).. 2nd the ending wid taani gtin ready for diwali function n rey w8in n in flashback .. dat was cute :))


😆 😆 😆
Itna you were waiting😛
Very bad haan...dinner toh kar leti...
'Sweetypie'😳
I likey😳
Badam kha liya karo...memory atchi hoti hai😉😆
My first collab work too😳
Thanks to you for the start...warna me writting in someone point of view🤢
I'm pathetic at it
I love this song mix a lot...pata nahi idea kaha se aaya..and used it😳
Diwali function was because of Diwali...
Festival ka kuch toh feel aana chahiye😛

cming to my fav prts --


the dialogues : Taani - I've heard a lot about you from bhai!

Rey - Me too and from the same source! (he laughs)

that was suprb .. lolz.. !!

😛😆

Taani - Jab tum chote the aur tumhari most favourite car kharab ho gayi tabhi tumne kya kiya? Khelna band kar diya?

Rey wonders why she is asking such questions but still answers.

Rey - Mom ne new car gift ki, uske saath khelne laga. But meri favourite car ki memories humesha thi mere paas. (he smiled thinking about it)

Taani - Agar tabhi khelna band nahi kiya, toh ab jeena kyun band kar rahe ho?

nw this was supr amazing !! n taani ka baat karne ka n rey ko cheer up karne ka style was ma kasam .. main tog fida ho gayi isspe .. this whole seq was bst ..

No idea how this came to my mind😕

But I too loved this😳


Rey - I have decided. Mein aaj Taani se apna love confess karne wala hun!

Sharon - Am I dreaming, or did you really say that?

sharey r amazing !! lamao..!! sharon amazing one!!

I love ShaRey ki masti😆


Teri aankhon ki namkeen mastiyan

(Showed a picture of Taani's eyes focused on something)

Teri hasi ki beparwaah gustakhiyaan

(Showed a picture of Taani giggling)

Teri zulfon ki leharaati angdaiyaan

(A picture where Taani's hair are blowing on her face)

Nahi bhoolunga mein

(Another spot light now focused on Rey)

Jab tak hai jaan, jab tak hai jaan

(Rey came to Taani and pecked on the hands)

Jara sa jara sa

Yun tera muskurana

(Taani smiled)

Lage kyun khafasa

Aur aake chale jaana

(Rey moved behind)

Tu hi mera aa aa.. [x2]

Voh oh ooo oo.. [x2]

(Rey did a few hip hop steps)

Tujhe sochta hoon main shaam-o-subah

Isse zyada tujhe aur chahoon toh kya

(He moved his hands depicting needles of a clock and then winked at her)

Tere hi khyaalon mein dooba raha

Isse zyada tujhe aur chahoon toh kya

(Rey did a few steps moving lower showing him drowning in her thoughts)

Mera naam tu haathon pe apne likhe baar haan

Aye kaash ke aisa bhi din laaye woh Khuda

(He then moved his fingers writing something in the air and then looked up to wish)

Oh oh ooo.. [x2]

Tera Deedar Hua

Oh oh ooo..

pehla sa pyar hua

Oh oh ooo..

(He did some hip hop steps)

Baarishon mein bedhadak tere naachne se

(The TV screen flashed an image of Taani dancing in the rain)

Baat-baat pe bewajah tere ruthne se

(Next picture came up showing her frowning)

Choti-choti teri bachkani badmashiyon se

(It showed Taani upto something mischievous)

Mohabbat karunga mein

(TV screen went blank and Rey came forward again)

Jab tak hai jaan, jab tak hai jaan

(He pulled Taani to him)

Tu hi mera mera mera [x4]

Oh oh ooo..

Tera Deedar Hua

Oh oh ooo..

pehla sa pyar hua

Oh oh ooo..

(He did a few steps twirling her around. They both ended in a position where Rey held her around her waist and her hands were encircled round his neck)

As soon as the dance was over, the lights were on. Taani was touched seeing the decorated hall. She looked at Rey, whose eyes showed love and only love for her. She hugged him tightly.

Taani - I love you Rey!

Rey's eyes sparkled up. He pressed Taani to him literally crushing her.

Rey - I love you Taani!

kya propose karne ka style hai boss!! koi bhi ladki toh kya main bhi maan jaati ..!! so sweet n songs !! tera deedar hua is always in my plyalists!!

Reyansh Singhania ka proposal hai...has to be unique😎

I love this mashup❤️

Jo yaha pe barabar se upload nahi hua


Swayam - Apni shakale dekho! Aisa lag raha hai ki tum dono ke saamne bhoot aa gaya ho!

Taani - Bhoot hi toh aaya (she mumbled)

Swayam - Kya kaha!


n this taayam prt was supr cute :) the mummbling dialogue of taani .. muahh !1 :* :* <3ly :))

TaaYam ke bond ko jyada kabhi dikhaya hi nahi..

Hoping this time they shoe more😳

Please can you explain me one thing, why do beautiful girls need to do make-up? I've completed telling you my life story, yet she is busy with her make-up kit!

"Rey, I'm ready!"

Ah! Finally! I almost thought that we're gonna be late for Diwali function. Here she comes the most beautiful woman in the world and also my beloved wife Mrs. Taani Reyansh Singhania' !


kya ending hai !! luv u for this :)) well agar beautiful nahi lagegi toh hw will mr.reyaansh singhania drool ovr her..showr his luv n bcm jealous of evry1 staring at her !!

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ps. - yeh abhi tak ka mera sabse lambu n bst comment hai !! n all thnx 2 u completing it .. n i srsly forgot about it ..

well i m glad dat u lykd the concept n continued it so beautifully n also 4 the title too !! .. hehehe..

well ab dnt say the old same thing .. thnx nahi bolna chahiye.. ya ya i kno.. so taking back all the thnx :))

aage bhi koi idea aaya toh will tell u .. if i wrote i by myself na then i dont think it wud hv been turned out so nyc :))😉 😉

I loved the start of it immensely...so had to complete it😳

Title😆...sab aapki meherbani😛😆

Good girl..👏 😉

Sure sure...jarur batana...mil ke khichdi pakayenge😉

pps. - congratulations n celebrations for becomin dazzler.. yeah girl!! colour changed!! n haan fingers cross karne ki zaroorat nahi hai.. coz m vegetarian ..kha nahi jaoongi main.. waise bhi strt maine kiya toh yeh gesture mera hona chahiye na ke kaise comments aayenge..

joote chappal kitne padenge .. toh chill babe .. the shield is here .. n dats me !! hehe lolz..


Hehehe😆
Well perfect start ke wajah se iss OS ko chaar chand lag gaye😳
Luckily no joote chappal nahi pade😛😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: navk

res/unres
great job ankita & shweta
wonderful os yr😊
love it yr
in the starting
She is my everything, my dictionary ends on describing her, she is my and only my Taani'. Her every sudden expression and attitude is what which can make even a stone hearted person full of life. She is vivacious and I can talk about her endlessly!
am droolingover these lines
these lines r too good😳
& taani is so chirpy &friendly
taayam bond is too good

Taani - Jab tum chote the aur tumhari most favourite car kharab ho gayi tabhi tumne kya kiya? Khelna band kar diya?
haye these lines gives so good
inspirations
& after that confession
aww so sweet😳
song selevction was fab😊
& the ending was fantastic👏
love uuu both


You liked the work of both of us😃
This was the end because of the start😉
Thanks a lot Nav🤗
Love you too❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: tharu01

Lovely...loved it a lot...grt work guys..😊


Thank you😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: taarey_vrimar

Awesome os
taarey
Congo shongo for becomming Dazzler 🤗


Thank you shank you ji😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39

Thank you😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: Jhanvi_TaaRey

Reserved STILL...!!

Not going to unres until u update CC -_-


Will update CC when you update second part of your OS -_-
As decided earlier!!!

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