Swaron OS : I can never let you go ||updated on page one||

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Okie guys i was clearly frustrated at the whole denial and i know we all went through a really bad phase ...so here's a little OS on our swaron i hope u like it !
Sharon is broken , guilty , hurt , lost , pain ..these all words where nothing compared to her state now...she was walking randomly she didn't know where her road was leading ! And suddently a few galli ke kutte as in boys in streets started to say " kya maal hai .." " wah bhai aaj tho jashan hoga " ...suddenly reality struck her and she rushed to her car and drove off !
While swayam was broken in inside but he no longer was able to express anything ...tears flooded on his expressionless face . He went to delete or dispose or remove or erase the sharon corner in his cupboard , to his dismay he couldn't remove a single photo from it . As this resembled his heart he said " kya kismat hai mere pehele dil ko cover kiya abh ey ! " and covered the corner with a peice of cloth !
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Sharon reached home and was continuously weeping ! She thought that her situation was just like a single plant (herself )looking at drop of water (her swayam ) on plastic (duriyaan )which is in the desert (without love). Get knew that only wind (her love) could bring it down , and she also knew that no sun in this universe and dry that drop of water .
*Tuck tuck * door knocked . She opened it to find Simmi standing there...
Simmi :" Sharon woh tumhara aur swayam ka break up hua ? Are u ok ?"
Sharon: tumne kaise pata that we were together ?
Sim: etna tho pata hai Sharon ke Swayam tumhare releted matters mai kabhi bhi jhoot nahe bolega !
Sharon collapsed and started yelling and crying ..continuously ...
Sh: maine usse usse hu-hu-hurt ki-i-ya ma-ai boh-uth bu-ri hoon *stammering out of guilt *
Sim: shhh shh chup ho jao sharon ...bilkul chup ! Tumhare health begad jayegi ..
Sh: tho bigadne do waise bhi mai Swayam ke bina nahe rehna chate hoon .
Sim: okie tho Swayam tumhare bina reh sakta hai ?
Sh: ...*couldn't speak *
Sim: chalo sharon ..
Took her to the mirror ...deko sharon kya halath bana le hai apne tumne ...mascara is all running ...lipgloss is spread and ese rote rahogi tho dark circles ...tho swayam waise hee bagh jayega "
Sh:*gig* simmi
And gives her a hug
Sh: muje pata hai tumhe yahe rey ne beja hai and muje ey bhi pata ki muje abh ladna hoga and mai ladhoongi mujse jitna ho saka utna aapna saara pyaar aur attention swayam ko dongi "
Sim: das like a gd gal chalo il take care of you today ...lets sleep now waise bhi bohuth der ho chuki hai .
Sh: hmm ...
And they drifted off to sleep while sharon drifted to swayam world
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Next morning swayam and sharon rise up with new dreams new hopes new aspiration . One to step away from love which is impossible and another to bring back love i.e hard but possible .
Swayam walks into the collage and comes to collage only to see the" sry swayam " and " i love you cards " everywhere . Everyones gaze was fixed on swayam ...as he entered all were to confused to comment. He was affected but this couldn't overcome the pain in this heart . he rushed to the RH to flush the thought process and to get peace ..he stoped his steps when he found sharon there dressed in red with pink lip gloss and satin hair lookin fab as always ...
Will continue will your response ' hit the like botton hard silent readers '

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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
res
unres

a really nice OS...
i loved it a lot..
i really loved the way you have written it.. 👏
and the story as well...

simmi part was really nice... 👍🏼
loved it ❤️

Please Please Continue this OS
and send me the PM ASAP !!! 😛 [ on -spongy- please ]

PS. me first 😃
lets dance
party 🥳
Edited by iishaa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#3
wow aswom os as always...

but ap continue to karte nhai...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#4

Originally posted by: swaronlove001

wow aswom os as always...

but ap continue to karte nhai...




mai free hoon karye hoon abhi 😊
hehe ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#5
Nachayenge
Nachayenge
[ music started swayam was shocked everyone was standin ouf the RH peeping Rey gave a smile to sharon ...Simme had tears in his eyes ]
Latoo Latoo Latoo Main
Us Pe Latoo
Latoo Latoo Latoo Mein
Aye Lala Aye Lala Aye Lala
Palak Kyun Phadke Re
Dil Kyun Dhadke Re
Thirak Si Jaoon Re
Kyun Mein Sharamaan Re
Aaj Ye Kaun Aaya
Khushbuwon Sa Chaaya
Chal Mein Ghungroo Hai Mausam Hai

Sharon goes to swayam and hugs him tight ! Swayam is awestruck

Oh Oh Oh Oho Yaar
Yaar Yaar Yaar Mera Yaar
Yaar Yaar Yaar
Yaar Yaar Yaar Mera Yaar
Yaar Yaar
Latoo Latoo Latoo Main
Us Pe Latoo
Latoo Latoo Latoo Mein
Us Pe Latoo
Yaar Yaar Yaar
Yaar Yaar Yaar Mera Yaar
Yaar Yaar Yaar Mera Yaar
Yaar Yaar
Uske Aane Se Bus Jaaye
Soone Soone Maan Ka Ilaka
Nachayenge
Woh Bus Kar De Ishaara
Aur Mein Boloon Jo Hukm Ho Aaqa

Swayam comes out of the shock(inside his heart it was surprise ) of Sharon's sudden hug ...sharon bends her head and keels down romantically . Swayam turns to leave while sharon quickly gets up and twirls arround him .

Nachayenge
Masti Mein Tee Woh Hai
Jeene Mein Jee Woh Hai
Seene Mein See Woh Hai
Dhak Dhak Dhak Har Dhadkan Mein Woh
Pani Mein Pa Who Hai
Dhani Mein Dha Woh Hai
Maani Mein Maa Woh Hai
Saazon Mein Har Har Sargam Mein Woh
Luft Kya Uski Ashiqui Mein Hai
Usko Ghoonth Ghoonth
MEin Pee Loon
Zindagi Chayen Chayen
Main Jee Loon
Latoo Latoo Latoo Mein
Uspe Latoo
Latoo Latoo Latoon Mein
Uspe Latoo
Yaar Yaar Yaar
Yaar Yaar Yaar Mera Yaar
Yaar Yaar Yaar Mera Yaar
Yaar Yaar

Swayam isn't able to controll himself .he gets outside of the RH pushing evryone on the way for clear path ...but sharon continued wooing him ...by catching his hand and indicating that she is sry and she loves him

O Palak Kyun Phadke Re
Dil Kyun Dhadke Re
Thirak Si Jaoon Re
Kyun Mein Sharamaan Re
Aaj Ye Kaun Aaya
Khushbuwon Sa Chaaya
Chal Mein Ghungroo Hai Mausam Hai
Oh Oh Oh Oho Yaar
Yaar Yaar Yaar Mera Yaar
Yaar Yaar Yaar
Yaar Yaar Yaar Mera Yaar
Yaar Yaar Yaar Yaar
Everyone follows them .
Vi: ey sab saacchi mai hua ?
Ni: nahe ham sabko sapna aya .
Bh: nahe bhe ! abhe dek maine sharon ki photo le .
Vi : haan yaar its true
Si: finally!
Rey : finally
Aashi: kya types ?
Rinni: swaron types ! * stressing types *
And givin highfive to simmi.

Sw: Sharon !
Sh: yess swayam !
Sw: kar kya rahe ho tum ...sab dek rahe hai
Sh: dekne do
Sw: kya sochenge
Sh: sochne do !
Sw: ho kya gaya hai yumhe *yelling*
Sh : tumse pyaar *romantically*
Sw: nahe sharon tum aur mai ..
*cut by sharon*
: kabhi ham nahe hoo sakte kyoki ham already ham hai 😉
Sw: jane dho muje !
Sh: i will never let you go !
Sw: pyarr ..kabhi selfish nahe ..
Sh: hota pata hai but mai tumhare dewani ..tumhareliye selfish ayr selfless dono ban sakte hoon ...
Sw: muje bohuth kaam hai ...
Sh: mai help kar dete hoon *the whole collage stood lifeless*
he went to classroom without responding .
Sharon followed him quitly swayam was liking all this but pain inside him was too much to notice her love .
Swayam sat in a seat shron sat beside him ! Entire classroom remained quite ! Including the professor .
Pr: Sharon are you comfortable?
Sh : with swayam ? Always!
Sw: but
Sh: yea but y are you askin sir ?
Pr : aftr that mike ...
Tears rolled down Sharon's eyes ..
Swayam made fists of his hand ! *aftrall no one messess with his love *
Sw: sir (fuming )
Sh:(swayam's temper din go unoticed by sharon ) sir lets continue .
Class went on like this .Sharon asking silly doubts . Swayam with least interest listening to her (atleast acting as if he was least bothered ).
She kept on following him. He din look back at her that killed her .
Sh: Swayam !
Sw: kuch kaam tha ?
Sh: haan ,wo kal ...
Sw: rose day hai ..
Sh: tum mere saath ...
Sw : mere paas koi option hai ?
Sh: tumhare marzi hai tum jaisa chaho waise hoga ...aftrall you are my boss !
Sw: par GS tum ho ...
Sh: mere GS tum ho .*cutely*
Sw *touched*
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Rose day (night ) love is in the air ...Sharon waiting for Swayam outside his house on cycle .
Sw came outside he wore white white sharon wore white with a pink hue .
Swayam looked at sharon they shared a eyelock.
Sw: tum?
Sh: haan tumhe dekne aye hoon ...
Sw: cycle mai ?
Sh: aaj cycle mai...
Sw:*controlling himself sternly * par i want to go in car !
Sh: okie tho maine kabh mana kiya ?maine socha...
Sw: kya ? Its night and cycle mai jawon mai?
Sh: tables have turned mai lovergirl hoon ...so mai cycle mai Awoongi ey mera copyright hai !
Sw:* it was becoming difficult for him to controll himself * abh rose katam ho jayega ...agar tum cycle pai aye tho !
Sh: don underestimate the power of ...
Sw: common ..
Sh: *cut by sharon * lovergirl !
Sw: abhi chalo ! ...
Sh: nahe il c u at 10
Sw : ua wish is my ..( reality struck him ) ..its ua wish !
Swayam goes off !
Sh:* to herself* muje chod diya par mai tumhe abhebhi pyaar karte hoon utna hi !
And she rides of ..
On the way ...
Galli ke ladke : arre ey wahe chori hai jho ...
Gkl 2: wo he pataka jho baddhi gadhi mai ayee thi !
Gkl3: abhi tho nahe na gaddhi tho chalo chalo ..
Sharon was devastated ...she was siren but she too was a girl .
All surrounded her ...
-.-.-.-.few minutes back ...
Swayam slipped out of his car,sent his driver alone , .and had tears in his eyes by listening to Sharon.
Sw:*to himself* (aloud) tumhare protection mere prime duty hai ! Tumse pyaar karna mai bhi rok sakta sharon ! .
And follows her
.-.-.- -.-.-.-.-..-.-.-.
Sh: u u ... Peeche hato ...
Swayam fuming with anger holds his cycle so strongly that the handle breaks ...
She gets a astama attack..
Swayam was about to rip their heads off ..
While a car with horn came and scared the heck out off them ...
Sharon gt in immediately ...
Swayam was worried
Sw: sharon .!!!!! Sharon...
*te te *
Swayam ...collage awo !
Swayam rushed there falling getting up ...
He found sharon holding mike he understood that she was rose queen ..she was speaking something a arrow went inside his heart she had tears in her!
She spotted him am sorry swayam ...for the hurt i gave you ...mai ey kabhi nahe chahonngi ki mere wajah se tumhe problem ho ...tum move onn kar-kar sakte hoon mai jaa rahe hoon ...im going ..forever ...i will follow my passion dance ...i knw i don deserve your forgiveness. Bye swayam ...bye guys
gang gives her a group hug ...
Sh: simme il text u my new number ...on the go..umm bye .
Rey : but sha..
Sh: bye rey ...mai tumse naraz nahe hooon but i thnk ud like to have a better bff ..
Rey : *crying* no sharon .. I want u ...my sister my siren ...
And hugs her ..she bids every1 .bye .
Looks at swayam ...fr the last time ...and leaves ...
Swayam seez the retreating figure of his life ...his love . his everything ..his reason for existance ...she went offf ...
Sw: i love you sharon ...*breaking off * *crying *
To be continued if u hit that like And comment . ...sry if u guys couldnt reach the end and slept off ...hehe
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Posted: 11 years ago
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finally finish both the parts together... sharon confessed it to swayan and
also forgive rey and will remain his.. bff... look forward to read more...
and table are about to turn... do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: iishaa

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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">unres</font>
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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">a really nice OS...</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">i loved it a lot..</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">i really loved the way you have written it..👏</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">and the story as well...</font>
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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">simmi part was really nice... 👍🏼</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">loved it ❤️</font>
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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Please Please Continue this OS</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">and send me the PM ASAP !!!😛 [ on </font>-spongy- <font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">please ]</font>
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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">PS. me first😃</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">lets dance</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">party🥳</font>



yea lets dance ...
dil dosti dance 😊
thank you !
love ua spongy DP ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice OS...
i loved it a lot both PART

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