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Posted: 12 years ago
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this a dare given by adity

i know i m a very bad in writing

jute chappal all welcome

so here i go

Finally , the most awaited day come .
yes , it's taarey's engagement today .

Today they are going to reach the 1st step to being one for lifetime .

The engagement party is held in taayam's house.

The whole house is decorated with pink rose & twinkling lights.

The whole gang is present along with taareyam's parents & many gusts.

Rey is wearing this

Soon taani cones at venue with aashi & Sharon , who's look only be compaired with a fairy of heaven .

Taani's dress


Soon taarey exchange rings & took their elder's blessing .

After a lot of music , dance & tons of fun , the party take a halt .

Now ,, taani is sitting in her room alone her room dreaming about her price charming . but she is not blushing , she is felling some sadness because everyone gave her gifts on engagement , but her Rey didn't.

In the mean time , our (sorry , taani's) hero sleeked from window & sees her princess sad .

Rey enter in the room and talk in her ears huskily; missing me sweetheart ?

Taani was so engaged in her thought , she felt that she was dreamimg rey & told him ,

Taani; main aapse katti hoon , aapne mujhe koi gift kuin nahi dia ? pata hai Sharon bhavi (sharon is officialy taani's bhavi now) mujhe chidarahi (teasing) thi !! With a cute pout

Rey was so lost in her cuteness , he entrained his hand to her cheek & with this touch taani came to her scenes .

Taani(shocked); rey ,,, aap sach main hain ? aap yaha kya kr rahe hai?? Vai ghar pe …

Rey(still lost in her & cressing her cheek); taani!! Shh!!...

Taani(realizing what she said a while ago); rey!! Wo main …

Rey put his finger to her lips & said ; jaan ,, tumne socha v kaise ki main tumhe hamari sagai me koi gift nahi dunga ??

Taani(with embarrassment & guilt); nahi rey ,, mera wo matlab nahi tha…

Rey ; aapna gift nahi cahiye kya?? Naughtily

Taani (entraining her palm in front of him); digiye fir

Rey; yaha nahi , we have to rush outside

Taani; reyyy!!! Vai or mumma papa ghar par hai!!! Hum kaise …

Rey ; kisne kaha ki hum door se jayenge… smirk

Taani(didn't understand what he want to mean); matlab

Rey; matlab yea…

He picked her up in his arms & went towards the window…

Taani; rey ,,, plz choriye ,,, mujhse nahi hoga

Rey(with love & care); mujh pr varosa nahi hai ??

Taani looked into his eyes & got lost in his eyes..

After climbing down from her room rey put her in the passenger sit of his car , still holding her in his arms .

Rey(naughtily); chodogi nahi kya mujhe … teasing her

Taani immediately left him ..

Then rey made her wear the seatbelt & tied a blindfold on her eyes .

Taani; rey ,, yea ku …

Rey; trust me sweetheart

Rey started the car & drove for sometime .

He stop the car & helped taani to come out from the car.

Infront of them , everything was dark .

Taani held rey's hand in fear & said; yaha itna andhera k…

Before completing her sentence , suddenly the whole place got lighten .

The scene infront of them was

Taani; yea kiska ghar hai rey?? Kitna sundar hai!!!

Rey; taani reyansh singhania ka

Taani(not realized what he said); to hum yaha ku aaye (soon realized) what yea mera ghar hai??

Rey; yea sweetheart , yea aaj se tumhara hai , kaisa laga mera gift??

Taani(with teary eyes); aapne yae ghar hamare liya kharida… thank you …

Rey; aandar nahi chalna kya??

Taani; ha caliye na

She started to move but rey stoped her..

Taani tearns towards him with questioning eyes & rey said; duniyaka sabse pretty girl ki apne ghar me grehapraves v sabse special hona cahiye na…

He scooped her in his arms & started walking to the mansion .

While entering the mansion they have a rain of red rose pedal .(dnt ask rain kaha se hua)

In the mansion , the first after entrance was a huge living room with a wall full of taarey's pics .

Rey(showing her different direction); waha hai humara studt room , ustaraf hai humara dining hall , or wo raha humara kitchen . or wo hai…

But taani interpreted in between; hamara nahi , mera kitchen .

Rey(coming more close to taani); nahi humara , swayam k ghar me coffee wala incident vool gai (naughtily) (dil ibadat sceen)

Taani became red due to blush & to divert rey's mind she said; rey caliye na humara bedroom decte hai.

Rey(nuzzling near her neck); bohot jaldi hai bedroom decne ki … kya baat hai jaan…

Taani can't handle her blush & hide her head in her chest.

Rey escort her to the bedroom.

The room war fully decorated with lilies & candle . it has a huge king size white bed in opposide to the door , on a wall there was a big photo of taarey .

Taani was admiring the beauty of each & every part of the room…

Rey went to a side to switch on the music player & come to taani , kneeled down infront of her; may I have the pleasure to dance with the most lovely lady in the universe

Taani looked at him with teary eyes with lots of love

Rey; say yes na sweetheart , my knees are hurting .

Taani gave her hand to rey & said; yes my prince…

Rey press the remote & started taani's favorite track(aditi I mean adicutypie's also)

Sun Zara Soniye Sun Zara

Sun Zara Soniye Sun Zara

Sun Zara Soniye Sun Zara

Sun Zara Soniye Sun Zara

Rey made her turn her bach to him & started slow dance(I m too bad to expln dance plz jote mat marna)


Aaj Khamoshiyon Se Aa Rahi Hai Sada

he started nuzzling hercheek with his nose
Dhadkanein Hai Deewani

Dil Bhi Kutch Keh Raha Hai

He moved her hair one side & start giving wet kisses on her neck
Sun Zara Soniye Sun Sun Sun Zara

He made her turn & looked into her eyes
Aaj Khamoshiyon Se Aa Rahi Hai Sada

Taani moved her index finger from his forhead to chin

Dhadkanein Hai Deewani

Dil Bhi Kutch Keh Raha Hai

Rey took her palm in his & kissed it's back side
Sun Zara Soniye Sun Sun Sun Zaraaa

They huged each other

Beetey Lamhon Ke Saaye Toh

He made her go fur still holding her hand

Bas Yahi Tham Gaye Hai

He took her back to him
Yaad Mujhe Aaye

He made her arch backward

Teri Baatein

He made her straight
Palkon Ki Surkh Chadar Pe

He lefted her on his palm

Ask Bhi Jam Gaye Hai

He made them take a 360 degee full round
Teri Ankhon Se Na

He stranded her on the ground

Hatti Aankhein

With his palm off her eyes
Bebasi Ka Hai Aalam Kya Karoo Main Bata

He scoped her in his arms & walked towards the bed
Dhadkanein Hai Deewani Dil Bhi Kutch Keh Raha Hai

He made her lie on bed
Sun Zara Soniye Sun Zaraaa

He kissed her forhead lovenly

Choom Ke Apne Hoton Se Tere Gam Ko Chura Loo

He lied beside her & started showering some rose pedals on her
Laake Tujhe De Doo Khushiyan Sari

Taani arched her up & rey kissed her on cheek
Apni Har Beqarari Ko Seene Main Hi Chupa Lu

Re rolled on his bach & took taani's head on his chest creasing her head
Meri Chahtein Jaye Tujhpe Wari

Kissed her whole face(not lips)
Sehme Sehme Labon Mein Ghul Gayi Hai Dua

slowly took her lips & kissed her passionately taani too joined
Dhadkanein Hai Deewani

rey took off his shirt & started kissing her solder

Dil Bhi Kutch Keh Raha Hai

He kissed her throat & give a small love bite
Sun Zara Soniye Sun Zaraaa

He kissed her neck & removed her straps
Aaj Khamoshiyon Se Aa Rahi Hai Sada

He took off her top still kissing her solder to throat
Dhadkanein Hai Deewani

Taani turtle her head to give him better access
Dil Bhi Kutch Keh Raha Hai

He started kissing her cleavage
Sun Zara Soniye Sun Zaraaa

Sun Zara Soniye Sun Zaraaa

Sun Zara Soniye Sun Zaraaa

Sun Zara Soniye Sun Zaraaa

They made love whole night & sleep cuddling in each other's arms .

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hmmm wah kya os tha! first first me cute n then it turned itno a passionate n romantic. kaun kehta hai ki tu accha nahi likhti! you are the best moon! mera favourite song! haaye it was awesome! loved it yaar! waise mujhe nahi pata tha tu itni jaldi complete kar degi! ab to tere liye dares ki list lagani padegi! love you my bestie!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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plz chappal se mat marna
opahelehi kan pakad lia
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb os was really good...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: chand91

plz chappal se mat marna
opahelehi kan pakad lia

oye unres kar diya maine!😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: adi.cutiepie

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hmmm wah kya os tha! first first me cute n then it turned itno a passionate n romantic. kaun kehta hai ki tu accha nahi likhti! you are the best moon! mera favourite song! haaye it was awesome! loved it yaar! waise mujhe nahi pata tha tu itni jaldi complete kar degi! ab to tere liye dares ki list lagani padegi! love you my bestie!

lv u too besty
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Posted: 12 years ago
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chand...
loved it dear .. from staring to end.. it was all perfect ...
from the starting naughty rey and a dreamy taani .. awwweee he carried her in his arms
and then .. he brought a mansion for his princess!!..aweee so sweet of him and then the romance portion ☺️☺️😳😳 ☺️☺️😳😳 ☺️☺️...aweee loved it all chand ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was so cute!! very well written... n i loved d outfits!! great one dear!! u shud write more!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aww such a cute OS, I love how Taani was pouting that her Rey didnot give her a gift on their engagement
Love Rey for always being romantic and him taking Taani in his arms through the window was adorable
Beautiful house, best gift ever... Taani is lucky. I just love naughty Rey lol. Ahem Taarey in their future bedroom was hot. U did a fantastic job, I love your OS
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Posted: 12 years ago
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this was just like a fairytale..👏👏
that was so romantic n passionate..😳
rey is so naughty..😳
the song was amazing...👏👏
awesome chand...
u r an awesome writer😊😊😊

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