SWARON OS: WHERE ARE YOU

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Neel

@neeliyer

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: medhasarkar

sorry sorry, neel.😳. and mom thinks i'm mad anyway coz i'm hung up on swaron. but since she we stay in different cities now for my college, i missed her a lot on mom's day. mailed this to her and well she thought it was a wonderful gift for her.😃

well nothing can be beat a written (letter or story) gift, when it comes to gifting moms.. n moms ka tho janamsidh adhikar hai hume paagal samajna .. 😆

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Divya

@Winter_Falls

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

dat ws cute...nyc OS dear... 😊

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medha

@ToujoursPur

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: swaron_pk
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After a long time I read ur write -up ..this was like always amazing OS by you . 😊at first I thought it was swayam who was missing but it was a pleasant surprise to see shreyas :)
The way portrayed Sharon's...a mother's pain of loosing his son was brilliant 😊
This OS couldn't get better than this that too on the occasion of "Mothers day ".
I loved it 😳 awesome work!!!!

ya palak been a bit busy re----just joined office and took time to settle down. relief to get back to writing. and swayam missing wala jhatka was what i aimed at😆

Edited by medhasarkar - 12 years ago

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vrushanharshi

@vrushanharshi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: strykeryder
very cute os
best line for me in this os is
"yeah...love you too baby ke papa" Shreyas mimicked his mom's
reply.
thanks

superb os
very apt os for mothers day

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

amazing os..

i read it twice

loved the dialogues that u used...

loved it

please do write more and do pm me

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VAISHNAVI MURALI

@-vaishnavimural

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

ur a awesome writer... loved this os.. it was great.. sharon's feelings for losing shreyas n desperation to talk to swayam was brilliantly portrayed .. lovely fantastic job.. loved shreyas part he was cho chweet.. loved him.. n d last part where he mimicked sharon to swayam making every1 laugh was great...

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medha

@ToujoursPur

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: spongy
amazing os..
i read it twice
loved the dialogues that u used...
loved it

please do write more and do pm me

u read it twice?? thanks yaar, for liking it so much and letting me know. readers are the only inspiration a writer gets.😃

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sanjana_D3

@sanjana_D3

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

This is adorable

In the beginning i thought that swayam was missing but it turned out to be shreyas !

Great plot and concept

Appropriate for mothers day !

The portrayal of sharons and the gangs emotions is great

Edited by sanjana_D3 - 12 years ago

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medha

@ToujoursPur

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: sanjana_D3
This is adorable
In the beginning i thought that swayam was missing but it turned out to be shreyas !
Great plot and concept
Appropriate for mothers day !
The portrayal of sharons and the gangs emotions is great

i was aiming for that dear...confusing.😆