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Posted: 12 years ago
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LOVE LASTS FOREVER -1

If u lyk it comment on it and tellm e that i shud continue or not.

Characters- Rey, the Mr Popular of the college, Handsome but very sensitive person.
Taani- GS of the college , her step dads 4th daughter nd her moms only daughter who is never showred with love.
Nikul- Reys enemy , Taanis bf and childhood friend , Mean and can do anything to beat rey.
Swayam- Taanis cousin nd swayam and taani live together.

Taani enters the college…. A boy come to her.
Boy- "Hi Taani."
Taani- "Hey , Kuch kaaam tha ."
Boy-"Kyu kaam ke bina tumse milne nahi aa sakta , mein tumhara friend bhi nahi hu ya Gs madam kuch zyada hi busy hai."
Taani laughs
Nikul seeing from far
Taani says bye to the boy and leaves. As she moves a hand pulls her.
Taani- "Aaa!! "(sees the guy) "Nikul yeh kya tareeka hai. Leave my hand its hurting me.."
Nikul- Tumhe apne dard ki bahut padi hai what about me ha.. Tum janti ho na ki it hurts wen u talk to some other guy ( Very angry) Ur mine get it.
Taani- "What crap are u taking"
Nikul- "Wow wen I talk its crap and wen other boys talk its like the best thing for u na"
Taani "Aaa!!! Plzz nikul chodo na"
Rey enters. He leaves taanis hand from nikuls hand .
Nikul- "Hey Mr Singhania .. Leave her hand she is my gf"
Rey- "Kisi ladki ko bacha ne liye mujhe uskabf ya bhai hone ki zazurat hai hai.. KK and besides she is my friend my boss . Gs hai iss college ki. Thats an enough reason"
Nikul-"stay away from her.. Kk tujhe uske aas paas bhi dekha an toh..
Rey- "toh what?" (to Taani) Do u hav any problem in saving you"
Taani –"No (they keep on luking into each others eyes, they are completely lost into each other they do not need any1 else)"
Swayam enters
Swayam- "ek bhai hone ke naate mein tujhe rok sakta hu na, next time mere behen se aisa behave kiya toh u watch it get it nikul, ab mujhe apni behen se baat karni hai so get lost"
Nikul leaves
Sawayam- "rey thanxx for saving my sister once again(to Taani) Taani kyu iske saath rehti ho iss stupid ke saath "
Rey- Haa mujhe kitna bura lagta hai wen he hurts u "
Taani looks at him and smiles
Swayam-"What??"
Rey-" I mean ke hum sab ko We are all ur friends na"
Taani-" Bahi, rey aap toh jaante hai na ki nikul mom ki best friend ka ladka hai nd mom ke strict instructions hai ki uske saath rehna hai warna mere "so called dad" ko bohot nuksan ho jayega.. he hurts me then also I have to be with him. Mujhe toh lagta hai ki mom ko sirf apni padi hai mere bare mein toh unhone kabhi socha hi nahi hai 5 days mein mera bday hai par who toh Singapore ja rahe hai.(she become sad)
Rey- "Hey please tum upset mat ho . I promise I will make ur bday special."( again they luk into each others eyes and are lost )
Swayam- "hum sab, hai na rey"
Rey- " ya hum sab"
Taani- "thanxx rey. Accha chalo ab mein chalti hu Vp Sir ne bulaya hai, Bii bhai ,Bii rey"
Rey- Bye Taani( Sees her till the time she goes"
Swayam-"chale canteen mein sab wait kar rahe hai"

PRECAP- TAANI BDAY PREPRATIONS. Rey plans to give Taani a Cd and tell her about his feeling. Taani realizes she has fallen in love with rey.



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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice concept...👏
update soon and pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Why do I have a feeling I've read this before😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice story i realy like ... next part update pls PM dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start dear
continue soon
and plz pm me when u update

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