Swaron os...on current track

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Guys I thought to write something different...i always write about taarey but this time I think to write about swaron...hope aap sabko pasand aaye...its on the current track...



Sw:sharon kya taani tumhare sath hai?

Sh:nahi swayam...

Swayam cut the call...he is fuming with anger...he call taani...

Here vicky call rey...

Swayam told taani to come home right now...and ask her where is she...

Vicky told rey that swayam is coming there...

Here taarey...

Ta:bhai ko pata chal gaya ...

Rey:swayam ko pata chal gaya...

Both speak together...

Ta:ab kya hoga rey?

Rey:dont worry taani tum jao...me sab sambhal lunga...

Ta:but rey...

Rey:no buts taani...plz go...

Ta:ok...

Here sharon call vicky and ask where is swayam...vicky told her that he is at college...

Sharon rushed to college...she enter the coridor and see swayam there...

Sh:swayam...

Sw:sharon tum yaha...

Sh:ha...but tum yaha kya kar rahe ho?

Sw:me vo...rey se milne aaya tha...but ek baat batao sharon...tumne bhi mujhse ye baat chupai...kyu sharon.??...sabko taani and rey ke bare me pata hai...sirf mujhe hi nahi pata tha...

Sh:swayam...esi baat nahi hai...dekho tum...

Sw:what sharon...my sister and my best friend are dating...and I dont know about it...

Just then rey come there...

Swaron see him...

Rey:swayam...

Sw:rey...tum aur taani ek sath...how is this happen??aur mujhe bataya bhi nahi??

Rey:swayam...me tujhe batane hi vala tha...but time hi nahi mila...dekho swayam u r my best friend...u have to trust me...

Sw:trust todne k baad tum trust karne ki baat karte ho??

Rey:swayam...i really love taani...

Sw:no rey...right now...plz leave me alone...

Rey:but...

Sw:plz rey...

Rey go from there...

Sh:swayam dekho tum...

Sw:sharon...tumne mujhse kyu ye baat chupai??

Sh:mujhe bhi aaj hi pata chala swayam...

Swayam start walking and sharon is going after him...both reach in the projecter room...both sit on the bench...

Sw:i cant believe sharon...taani aur rey ek sath...

Sh:believe to mujhe bhi nahi hua tha...but jab dono ek dusre ko pasand karte hai to...

Sw:to kya??no...ye thik nahi hai...my sis and my best friend...

Sh:kyu nahi swayam...jab vo dono sath me khush hai to tum kyu dono ko dard dena chahte ho...ek baat batao...kya tum apni sis aur apne best friend dono ko sad dekh sakte ho??vo dono ek sath khush hai swayam...alag alag nahi...

Sw:(thinking)sharon sahi bol rahi hai...agar taani rey ke sath khush hai to me kyu uski khushiya chinu??vo khush hai to me bhi khush hu...

Sw-i think u r right sharon...kaise mene ye nahi socha...

Sh:to jao aur dono ko ye good news sunao...dono pareshan honge...

Sw:but...

Sh:but kya?

Sw:tum ne un dono ke bare me to socha...dusro k bare me sochti ho par apne bare me?hamare bare me?

Sh:dekho swayam mujhe abhi is ke bare me baat nahi karni hai...

Sw:kyu??(angrily)kyu har baar baat ko complete nahi karti ho?kya bhul gai hamari dance camp meeting...ek din relationship and then...no sharon ye sab nahi chalega...

Sharon stand up and try to go but swayam pin her to the wall...

Sh:swayam...leave me...

Sw:no...aaj tumhe answer dena hoga...koi to reason hoga...kyu tum mujhse pyar nahi karti...kyu sharon??

Sh:koi reason nahi hai...bas me tumse pyar nahi karti...

Sw:koi to reason hoga...koi problem hai...mujhe batao...hum sath milke solve karenge...

Sh:nahi koi problem nahi hai...kya ab tum mujhe jane doge??

Sw:ok...to tum mujhse pyar nahi karti...thik hai...ek baar bol do that u hate me...then I will allow u to go...

Sharon is shocked hearing this...she looking here and there but not in swayam's eyes...

Sw:meri aankho me delh k bolo that u hate me...

Sharon look in his eyes...

Sh:i ha...

Sh:i ha...

Sw:kyu...kyu nahi bol pa rahi ho??i know sharon u love me...

Sh:no...i hat...

But she cant able to say...

Sw:u hate me???say sharon...

Sh:i...(crying and now shouting)love u...i love u swayam...i love u...she sat down crying...

Swayam also sat down and cup her face...he wipe her tears...he kiss her forehead...

Sw:sharon...u love me?

Sh:yes ...i love u...

Sw:to phir tum mujhse dur kyu rehti thi?

Sh:kyuki me nahi chahti thi meri vajah se tum apne dance se dur ho jao...

Sw:tumhari vajah se??tumhari vajah se to me dance se connected hu sharon...

Sh:ha...but ab...ab esa nahi hai swayam...

Sw:kyu??

Sh:bcoz I have asthma problem...(she said this crying badly)

Hearin this swayam's eyes filled with tears ...

Sw:sharon??

Sh:ha...swayam...jab me hi ab dance se dur hu to tum mere sath dance se connected kaise reh sakte ho??

Swayam hug sharon tight...she alao hug him back...swayam said:nahi sharon...esa mat bolo...i love u and esa bilkul nahi hoga ki tum dance se connected nahi ho to me bhi dance chod dunga...no...mene tumhe promise kiya tha ki dance kabhi nahi chodunga aur me vo promise nibhaunga sharon...tumhare liye...

Swayam broke the hug and said:aur hum milke tumhari is oroblem se ladenge ...me tumhe kabhi akela nahi chodunga sharon I promise...

Sh:sach me tum dance se dur nahi jaoge na??

Sw:no sharon...sirf tumhare liye...

Sharon hug him and crying...

Swayam broke the hug and cup her face...he wipe her tears and said:sharon...plz stop crying...ab me hu tumhare sath...tumhara swayam hai tumhare sath...

Sharon is now smilling thinking that ab swayam dance se dur nahi jayega...aur finally usne bol hi diya that she love him...

Swayam see her smiling...and said:dekha...smile karte hue kitni beautiful lagti ho...hamesha esi hi raho...smiley smiley...

Sh:ok...ab ghar nahi chalna hai kya...taani and rey ko bhi bol do that tumhe unke relationship se koi problem nahi hai...dono tensed honge...

Sw:ok chalo...

Both stand up and go hand in hand...smilling and thinking about eachother...



I hope mene achha likha hai...plz like and comment...

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vaishali667 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow what a fantastic part super mind-blowing fabulous next part plz show some swamyam & tanni cov plz plz plz pzlz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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dipu...🤗
firstly, being a taarey fan how sweet of u to write a work only on swaron ...thanks a ton...😃

this is exactly the way i want d3 to be shown next week...
sharon revealing her bitter truth to swayam...and sharon comforting him to overcome with taarey's problem...and most imporatntly he promising her that he will continue dancing again only for her..how swayamish...😳
poor rey i must say, he came and left the college in a nanosecond...😆

anyways i know how beautifully u write taarey's ffs..and this one on swaron was actually a surprise...
do keep writing more...:D

ur,
binju 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: vaishali667

wow what a fantastic part supermind-blowing fabulous next part plz show some swamyam & tanni cov plz plz plz pzlz update soon



Thanks dear...continue karne k bare me sochungi...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG Superb OS...Fantabulous...Loved it...Awwiiieee Sharon confessed her feelings and Swayam not quitting dance...WOW i hope i really hope serial mein bhi hume aisa hi dekhne ko miley...now m in Swaron dreamland...This was an amazing OS...Please keep writting more OS's on Swaron i love your work...pleasee😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: binuja_

dipu...🤗
firstly, being a taarey fan how sweet of u to write a work only on swaron ...thanks a ton...😃

this is exactly the way i want d3 to be shown next week...
sharon revealing her bitter truth to swayam...and sharon comforting him to overcome with taarey's problem...and most imporatntly he promising her that he will continue dancing again only for her..how swayamish...😳
poor rey i must say, he came and left the college in a nanosecond...😆

anyways i know how beautifully u write taarey's ffs..and this one on swaron was actually a surprise...
do keep writing more...:D

ur,
binju 😊




Thank u so much binuja for a lovely comment...i also hope that next week me kuch esa hi ho...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetsimi123

<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#cc00cc">OMG Superb OS...Fantabulous...Loved it...Awwiiieee Sharon confessed her feelings and Swayam not quitting dance...WOW i hope i really hope serial mein bhi hume aisa hi dekhne ko miley...now m in Swaron dreamland...This was an amazing OS...Please keep writting more OS's on Swaron i love your work...pleasee😊</font>



Thank u so much dear...i write something on swaron only first time and I m so happy that u likee it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Dipu🤗

WOW...beautiful piece dear...
U gave all the loose hanging ends a perfect conclusion...
Lovely depiction of SWARON..or shall i say SHREYAM equation...
SWAYAM as a loving brother can never go against taani's happiness ..its just that ..he can be shocked/surprised...
Awww...beautiful portrayal of SWARON relationship...
The confession was adorable...sharon the diva...a caring girl frnd...
I really appreciate u being a taarey fan tried to give a beautiful conclusion to swaron current tracker...so thoughtful of u ...beautiful...

Luv
Deep


PS-thanx binju for the link😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome dear 🤗


d way u showed sharon making swayam realise how he willl not be happy to see rey n taani sad...n he himself will not be happy...n so he shuld accept der relationship...was so perfectly written

n den d grand confession...luved it...❤️

beautifully written 👏 👏 👏

dis was just fab...do write more on swaron
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: deep_Tanha

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Hey Dipu🤗

WOW...beautiful piece dear...
U gave all the loose hanging ends a perfect conclusion...
Lovely depiction of SWARON..or shall i say SHREYAM equation...
SWAYAM as a loving brother can never go against taani's happiness ..its just that ..he can be shocked/surprised...
Awww...beautiful portrayal of SWARON relationship...
The confession was adorable...sharon the diva...a caring girl frnd...
I really appreciate u being a taarey fan tried to give a beautiful conclusion to swaron current tracker...so thoughtful of u ...beautiful...

Luv
Deep
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PS-thanx binju for the link😳



Thank u deep for such a lovely comment...i always love swayam's possessiveness and love toward taani...and majnu swayam ...he is just so cute...

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