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Heyy guys we r back… bohot purana ho gya hai ye statement…but u ppl just focus on "BE INTEHAAN" Part-4 Updated….. Till date got awesome comments as well as likes n hope the same for this part too!!!

BE INTEHAAN PART-4 UPDATED

Sharon: Tum yahan bhi aa gye….Maine kaha na I-M N-O-T I-N-T-E-R-E-S-T-E-D…!!!

Swayam: Oh…Oh…Oh..Cool babes….

Sharon: Mind ur tongue…!!!

Swayam: Oh m sorry babes…

Sharon: (now try to hold the situation a bit calmly) Parr mai hi kyun??? Itni ladkiyan hai iss country mein, u can choose anyone else…!!!

Swayam: Dekho…tum achchi khaasi dikhti ho n sabse badi baat u'r new….ek fresh n raw face hai…fashion world will just tremble…

Sharon: (losing her temper): Tumhe kyun nahi samajh aata…m not meant for all this…

Swayam: But…

(meanwhile Kria enters n interrupts Swayam….)

Kria: Swayam!!! Tum chalo yahan se….(holding her hand)

Swayam: Parr….

Kria: Kuch paar-varr nahi…chalo yahan se…!!!

(n Kria takes him out of the Air Force Office…)

(Sharon's home where Rey and Kria come to meet her…try to convince her along with her younger sister "Sneha"…)

Sharon: Hi…Kaise ho tum dono???

Rey n Kria: Hello…we'r fine….

Kria: Vo Sharon…

Sharon: No Kria not again…mujhe uski koi baat nahi krni…(meanwhile Sneha enters n greets Rey n Kria)

Sneha: Di…Rey bhaiyya ne bataya dat u've got a break from Swayam Shekhawat…I mean THE SWAYAM SHEKHAWAT….!!!

Sharon: Sneha stop it!!!

Sneha: Di…harr ladki marrti hai for Swayam Shekhawat…harr ladki apne aap ko uske collection mein dekhna chahti hai…why don't you…

Sharon: Sneh….a..!!!

Sneha: Achcha- achcha di….ap mera naam kyu nahi recommend kr dete….!!!

Sharon: Jokes apart….

Kria: Ya Sharon…atleast u can ponder over it once…!!!

Rey: Sharon….I think tumhe kuch naya try karrna chahiye….Swayam ko haan bol do…

Sharon: Guyyss…tum sabb paagal ho gye ho…me SHARON RAIPRAKASH apni air-force duty ko chhod karr stupid se fashion world mein….no… no chance…

Rey: But…

Sharon: Rey tum bhi….Mujhe kisi se koi baat nahi krrni…(n leaves angily n goes to a "still" place where she likes to go whenever she's sad n morose….!!!)

Sharon(in her thoughts): Kya ho raha hai ye sabb…mumma-papa…m missing u so badly…iss desh mein mujhe aap dikhte hain…iss desh ko apna mom-dad samajh karr…isee ki seva karrna chahti hoon… den why mujhe sabb force karr rahe hain….(determinedly ) I have to stop all this right now….I need to talk to him…sabb kuch khatm krr doongi aj….NO FASHION SHOW AT ALL!!!

(N Sharon moves to Swayam's office/ fashion centre…while she was about to enter in his cabin…she heard something from the glass door…)

Swayam(infront of his mom-dad's picture): Maa-papa… apko bohot miss karr raha hoon…aj main apni success ki peak parr hoon…apko pata hai na mujhe meri life ka sabse bada contract mila hai….Papa mai apka sapna nahi bhoola hoon…apka naam roshan krrke dikhaunga…(weeping) sabb apke liye…..

Sharon(outside his cabin hears everything n thinks): (stunned)Ye bhi meri tarah ek orphan hai…Oh God….ye bhi meri tarah apne mom-dad ke liye sabb kuch karr raha hai…aur mai isko refuse karr rahi thi….mujhe iski help karni chahiye…afterall we'r sailing in d same boat only!!!...akhir mujhse behtarr kaun jaanta hai ki "anaath" hona kya hota hai….(she had tears in her eyes n leaves….n calls him…!!!)

Swayam's phone rings…!!!

Swayam: Look aj who has called me….

Sharon: Atleast say "hello"…these are basic etiquettes….

Swayam: But jab koi 'miracle' ho jaaye toh 'etiquettes' kise yaad rehte hain….!!!!

Sharon: Miracle???

Swayam: Sharon ….I mean 'Air Vice Marshall Sharon Raiprakash' ne aj khud mujhe call kia…. Aj baarish hogi…mark my words !!!

Sharon: Ho gaya tumhara…ab suno…aj shaam 5 baje!!! Caf-coffee-cafeteria!!! N remember Air Force Officer hoon…punctual hoon!!!(n disconnects in no moment….)

(Sharon waiting in the caf while it was raining n Swayam reaches ther at 5:03 p.m.)

Sharon: You're three minutes late…

Swayam: Three minutes…bass first tym mai itna tym parr pahuncha hoon…Vaise maine kaha tha na…mark my words…!!!

Sharon: Hm???

Swayam: Dekho baarish ho rahi hai…."MIRACLE"!!!

Sharon: Ab kaam ki baat karein…!!!

Swayam: Shoot…!!!

Sharon: (stammers) Mai…vo mai…I m ready to be your showstopper…..!!!

PRECAP: Kaise react karega Swayam Sharon ke answer parr???? Kya Sharon bata payegi Swayam ko uski "haan" ka reason??? Kya ye "haan" inke beech dosti karwa paayegi ya phir hai koi aur twist…???

Jaanne ke liye padhiye "BE INTEHAAN" Part-5…COMING SOON!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey awsm story...
Loved it..
But why r u updating it in diff posts ??
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Cool...nice update...
Now have to wait for next part.. Aww
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautifulll 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗 Loved it and jaldi updat karo ji
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome 😊
Sharon empathises with Swayam n agreed for the show
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loved it...
pm me ur next part...
waitin for it..
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👏 Kay baat hai oye very nice too good continue soon
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Awesome one jaldi jaldi update kardo
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update
Update next part ASAP
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Nice update :-) please try to continue on one thread because its way easier to read the parts :]
Please pm me when you continue

Nikki <3

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