Swaron: The Perfect Rose Day Date ||Discontinued - Page 2

Hei Rishita, this was a good first attempt and you really got me interested !! I loved all the small things that Swayam did to make Sharon's Rose Day special !! I'm guessing the Teddy was Swayam himself !! Can't wait for the next update and your upcoming SwaRon SS !!

good start nice os

Amazing beginning to this very cute Rose Day OS, Rishita!😊

It was so romantic, so beautiful , really like i was reading a fairytale!😳

U included really sweet stuff like her favourite colour and her fav shopping mall! Swayam knows his girl so well..Awww ^_^

I m really excited for the next part. Do update soon. Thanks for the PM

And OMG, u included me in the list of writers who inspire you! Thank u so much but I am not at all a good writer! But really thanx a lot for liking my work! I'm a fan of urs now!😃

finally a rose day special os for swaron...superb 1...swayam knws d best hw 2 suprise sharon..plz update soon😊👏

wow
it ws really nyc..
nd plz pm..me whn.u update

it was amazing yaar iam curious to know next part please update it ASAP

Originally posted by: meevee

Good start Rishita...a very dreamlike beginning to the OS...everything has been picture perfect so far ...no one can beat Swayam when he sets his heart on entertaining his sweetheart, so luking forward to what u hav in store..hope u update soon 😊

Originally posted by: Rutu

Hey there Rishita, nice start, eager to know what Swayam has exactly planned on Rose day for Sharon . Taking a wild guess, I think the teddy was none other than Swayam😳

To be honest I'm really happy that I'm one of the writers from this forum who inspire you, feels good to hear that☺️

Thanks for the PM, and would love to read more on SwaRon from your side😃

Originally posted by: deep_Tanha

Hey Rishita...

Nice start of your OS...i really liked the way you showed swayam planning rose day for sharon...in typical swayam way...lovely part...somehow m feeling that teddy is none other than our swayam...he is having more in store for the diva...loved the flow in your writing dear...u have taken care of minute details ...will be waiting for the next part eagerly...plz continue soon...


PS- Thanx for including my name in the list of writers who inspired you...m not much of a writer...but m touched by ur gesture...thanx again dear

Originally posted by: --NishaGoyal--

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Realy nice start to a very cute os..😃
swayam showering sharon with so much love and affection...he is indeed the best boyfriend ever☺️
liked the idea of the chauffer driven car...it was nostalgic..reminded me of the secret admirer thingy in d3😃
loved the idea of the teddy bear hugging sharon😳
I guess the teddy bear is none other than our very own swayam😎
..eagerly waiting for the next part
Update soon pls..😳
Thanks for the pm
p.s: omg did i realy see my name in the list of ppl from whom ur inspired?😲
I am not that good writer dear...but I am glad that u liked my works😊