OS - TaaRey...Kaise ayee hain aisi dooriyaan - Page 3

Originally posted by: nana-raee

Wow
Soo good loved it :)
Amazing :)

Originally posted by: blue_cherub

I loved it totally.pls continue

Originally posted by: blossom1234

reserved

will read and edit soon😃

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He had no idea what his heart wanted'.but he had certainly accepted'.that he felt good whenever she was with him'

awww😍😍😍

Rey: (huskily) Toh main ye chahta hoon'.ki tum abhi mujhe hug karo'

Rey: Kya hua Taani? Tum abhi toh keh rahi thi ki'.mujhe khush dekhna chahti hoon'then c'mon'.

🤣🤣

Rey: Kyunki Taani...1. Tumhara haq banta hain khush rehne ka..aur who karne ka jo tum chahti ho'koi aur nahi'.and 2. Tum mere liye sirf Swayam ki behen nahi ho'usse kahi jyada ho Taani'.kahi jyada'.aur mujhe acha lagta hain tumhe haste hue dekhkar'

OMG,he finally said it😍😍

He stood there'thinking 'what if'.he had never let her go in the first place'.what if he never rejected her'what if she was his'forever..

it was awesome,everything was written so beautifully👏👏...i just loved loved loved the OS😍😍😍

Originally posted by: maneesha_sanker

Awesome Os rupali...

Great work...

"Rey: Swayam ki wajah se hi'maine tumse dosti ki'.usi ki wajah se maine tumhara naam sixth dancer ke liye suggest kiya'tumhe dance sikhane main help ki'tumne jab sixth dancer banane se inkar kiya tab tumhe support kiya' apne friends ke khilaf gaya'.tumhe AGS banaya'.GS hote hue bhi college main fight ki'.yahan tak apni GS ki position daav par laga di'aur aaj yahan tumhare saath hoon'"

I loved this dialogue...

"Rey: (huskily) Toh main ye chahta hoon'.ki tum abhi mujhe hug karo'"

Naughty Rey😆

I loved your OS

Originally posted by: Analeez11

Really sweet. Superb! Loved it.

Originally posted by: lovelypriya

osam rupali i liked it very much bt plz nt forget to pm me the link of this post when ever u update it n plz plz plz plz do continue writting actually i loved the way rey came one one step forwad n taani going back n then blocking his way with his arm i hope we will see soon taare togeather n in some thing which we have never seen or thought till now as ofcourse they r taare taare n really thanks 4 the osam n osam taare os liked it n plz do pm the link when ever u update it to me plz k bye n grt work yar😊