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Posted: 13 years ago
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This OS is dedicated to all my friends who made my best day -- My Birthday so special. Thank You all so much and Im very glad to get some friends so genuine like you...

Asma, Poppy, Candy,Shonu, Mittu, Sasha, Abshu, Kittu, Ash, Angel, Sweets, Deetha, Yogini, Kinjal, Twinkle, Vaishu, Dolly, Poonam, Chikky, Aroma, Chetu, Shivani, Amy, Anky, Mish, K, Cookie, Rock_Ruvi, Himani, Akanksha, Shaffy, Aditi -2* RTL and Devil*, Nimmy, Esha, Neeti, Neetha, Sattu, Nams, Cherry, Ridz, Suju, Gayathri and everyone...

Im so so so happy to have you all in my life...🤗🤗.

Love you Always..❤️❤️

However is my OS, kindly adjust bcoz my brain isn't working creatively nowadays!!🤣🤣

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Kriyaansh OS:* Beloved *


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It was a superb Sunday which reeled the special day to her life, which brought her Kria back to her life. Just like her exit was unexpected, her return was less expected too and this surprisingly gawked Vishakha who was the first to know about her being back in Mumbai. The first ever thing she could do was to hug her, let the reasons stay behind, she was so happy to see her back, she forgot all the bad moments for a second and grinned wide to her. They talked for hours together and the astonishing thing was Vishakha spoke more unlike the straight attituted girl she was. It almost took her an entire day upto the evening when Vishakha explained every small related thing to Weakling, Dazzlers and the St. Louis. Vishakha dealt about every happening to her except the most important want of Kria. That was REY.

Vishakha didn't want to disappoint her especially after she got to know that Rey loved Kria n Kria loved him the same but there were some non-sorted things and she was highly disheartened and doesn't want to tell her that her REY has already moved on with his life and was now giving importance to not so Deserving girl. She knew it would stain her heart when she comes to know he tried keeping the same girl as the Weaklings dancer when she doesn't know the 'D' of Dance.

Kria waited impatiently to pour her words out, to tell her what made her leave. To tell her, she hurted Rey intentionally and loved him like none other and the only reason which drived her back from her hometown to Mumbai was the sole reason - She couldn't move on with her life without him and she understood and came back after getting the full rights of her life from her mom. "Rey, mein usse milna hain sab kuch bathana hain usse. Kithna hurt hua hoga, meine usse bahut hurt kiya Vishakha and yeh sab jo kuch bhi hua Rey ko abhi ke abhi bathana hain". Vishakha couldn't deny her, she wanted to regret the fact that her best friend was just a part of his life and was no now more. "Please Vishakha", Kria insisted once again.

Vishakha called up Rey saying she wanted to meet him for which he commented on what and she had to lie him, it was something regarding the team Weakling and it had to be urgent and be taken an action quickly. He doubted her intention and made no remark when she said she will be waiting infront of his house.

As said, Kria n Vishakha reached up his house which was nearby to Kria's house and was on the same way. Kria's eyes beamed with an enormous happiness but Vishakha was scared if Rey would spoil her or will the vanish the twinkle in her eyes forever. Vishakha ringed him up to inform she was outside. After a period of minutes, they heard the footsteps hovering near. Kria was excited to see him, to tell him what all messed up the things between them. Tell him she loved him too. He was looking simple and serene wearing a black shirt and a jeans which fitted it to its sorts. His eyes were glimpsing Vishakha who was ahead of Kria, standing a two steps front than her. Rey gave her a formal smile before his eyes deserted back to KRIA. He was happy and nevertheless shocked, he was numb for a while and thought it was just a dream of the night time. "What did you want to speak with me?!", he addressed to Vishakha still his gaze on Kria. He was assuming her to be an illusion. "Kria, wanted to speak to you", Vishakha grumbled softly. That was a no more illusion or image and she was there, right infront of him and came from nowhere but she did come back!! What should he do?! Should he greet her casually with a 'hi', 'hello' or 'what do you want to speak to me?!' or yell at her aloud saying, 'why did you go all of a sudden without telling me, even after you know I loved you!!". He fumed endless and his glares so negative was threatening her. This was not the right time for this, was all Vishakha could groan to herself. I can't let Kria get hurted again , she mentally made a statement before walking past from Rey to Kria.

He saw Vishakha trying to held her hand but Kriya wasn't responding, her gaze steeled upon the painful eyes which tried hiding the truth beneath those moist eyes. She questioned him trying to explain him how she missed him so long without any use of the words. Her emotions were so flawless he could read them like an open book. She wanted him to hug her, hold her securely in his arms forever, tell her he loved her the same way as he did. Her thoughts went on a quick hold when she felt a pull on her wrist . "If I will go now, I will never ever come back to you Rey", her voice betrayed her, it wasn't as confident as she looked , it was broken infact her heart cringed mercilessly. She glanced away from him unable to show up her teary eyes, she didn't want to melt him like the OTHERS do. She cherished for his happiness and now also she felt a need to see his long lasting smile on his face. She forced a fake smile on her face meeting his cold yet heay glances.

"Hope you have a splendid life ahead, Rey!!", she wished. Her hand rested on the back seat handle of a car. She darted a look compromising everything she could for his blissful future. She opened the door to rest in when she felt a great force against her making the door shut with a bang and her body was crushed between the car and the person she longed to possess. "Where the hell do you think you are going?!", he yelled aloud making her shudder in fear like a trembled leaf passed by a strong breeze. "Tum mujhe chodke kahaan nahi jaane wali ho...did you get that?!", he demanded crossly. She nodded in acceptance avoiding the terror in his eyes.

"Rey, what are the hell are you doing man?!", Vishakha shouted clutching his arm. He shoved it off plainly unable to tear his gaze apart of the only girl he loved . His anger was getting melted at her sight, he loved her amidst the lies he told. He maybe the cool hunk with a hot image for others by pretendance but he was only person now and always deep within, this was the unravishing truth!! He was Kria's Reyaansh and was the Chabilal of Ramaira which they only knew. "Ramaira", he mumbled into her bellowed face. The golden memories they shared trolled in her thoughts.

RDX party...the spilled drink on her dress...the bump when she opened the door and he came in...when he told he wanted to talk to her and when she said it will only create fights...when he accidentaly tore the back part of her dress...the clear guilt in his face...the tickling sensation on her neck when his hot breath hitted her tender skin...the way he held her hand when she protested..."agar tum heli toh woh log tumhare chehra dekh lenge..I don't care ki woh log mere baarein mein kya soche"..."Bathroom ka option nahi hain Miss Dehradun"..."Kria, aisa chup mat raho that's worse"..."Accha mera jacket toh pehan lo iska colour tumhara dress ka colour se match karta hain"...their first touch when his laid the jacket on her brushing his fingers on her shoulder...the easy flow of talks as Chabilal and Ramaira...the visible sparks which flowed by them...and the next the Louisan Band where he made her to wear the band..."Ab humare beech mein koi farak nahi hain..ek jaise nahi ek hain hum"..."Jab thak tum mera baat nahi manjaati tab thak mein try karta hee rahunga Ramaira"...the next when she went to canteen n neha asked how did she get the band..."Chabilal Rocks!!"..."Haan Chabilal, naa toh koi isse believe karta hain or na hee koi importance deta hain ignore karte hain sab ke sab"...the way his eyes taunted her after the words. His eyes never left any choice to her except to admire them, his eyes never failed to entice her.

Her eyes widened with a gasp, when she felt a similar sparkle rush through her body, when his hand pulled her in a swift more to him. Her hand which rested on his chest unknowingly and she looked at him, looked at those eyes which were taking back its momentum, which were trying to tell her more in depth. She was expecting him to strode her with so many questions like, 'why did you go, 'where the hell were you since this time' but his soothing, 'I Love you" startled her on a huge. Yes, he did love her and he found no bad in telling her many times that he did and he would. 'I Love You, Kria', he beseethed once again looking at the innoncent brown eyes which managed to steal his complete concentration. Tears flowed down her stained cheeks but a small faint was dancing on her lips. She dragged him closer by the shirt and questioned, "Do you really love me the same after what I did that night??". "Yes, I Love You and my love for you will never die", he seemed to swallow a great pain while telling her the words which made a strong impressions in his heart. His tears stormed down his face when she felt her touch on his face again after a hell lot of days which seemed like years, she nodded in negation before moving her palm over his cheeks to rub the tears. "I Love you too, Rey", she said snuggling into the comfort of his arms.

" Best Day of Your Life will be the day when you smile with tears in your eyes"

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A friend like Vishakha is very rare and Im glad I found so many among you..
Love you all..
🤗🤗🤗


Edited by snigdha_arsha - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ahhh stupid u made me emotional again i seriously hate u for this meow

the last line u wrote ahhh love u sooo sooo much

Ok ab coming to ur dedication isse accha aur kya mil sakta hai hum sab ko huh sab ke taraf se we love u so much meow

Vishaka nd Kriya's friendship wowto be frank mujhe bohot kuch mention karna hai but u knw na mai choti-choti baato pe emotional ho jati hu and this... mai kuch nahi bol sakti i loved everything nd every single word for once mujhe laga Kriya sab samajh gayi to vo chod ke chali jaegi but u...u just ahh kya bolu ek to emotional bana ke rakh dia

Itna hi bolungi ki loved it so much u always leave me speechless *pout*

Love u even more than this


*edited again*

i am the first one to comment nd like

hai mai to bhool gayi ur hindi is too good meow sacchi

nd return gift bohot hiii zyadaaa sweet hai

mujhe emotional banaya na u have to pay for it
Edited by ShravniC - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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mindblowing os...
it was so pure n touchy...
n thank god that rey still loves his baatcutter n not that nani jiski aankho me rehta hai paani😆
awesome work...keep writing more


n belated Happy B'day
Edited by krasforever - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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res

thank god i was gonna log off

Meow

Wow kitna sweet return gift..
happy tears -had them when I studied.

And the way he possesed her simle yet impressive..

Aur S u are a great friend tho itna banta hai nah..


Keep rocking..

Edited by asmaju - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sweetu...i love u...this is the sweetest return gift ever...

update ke baare mei koi explanation nahi...just blissful...

uummaaahhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


i love u
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Res ^_^ UNRESS😉 OMG !!! SNIGU DIDU :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* :* LUBBHHH U TOOO SSS FOR THE OVER WHELMING DEDICATIONS. . . . . . . . I AM SPEECHLESSS... ACTUALLY U MADE ME VERY EMOTIONAL. . . . . . NEVER DREAMT OF SUCH A SWEET OS !!!! MUAAAHHH :* :* :* :* LORRY FR UNRESSING LATE CUZ MAIN BHUL GYI THI😆COMING TO THE UPDATE . . . . . . REALLY LYKED IT TO THE EXTREMEST CORE . . .❤️DIDU THE WHOLE SCENE THAT U CREATED IN D OS WS VERY VERY VERY SWEET...EXTRA CUTE AND VERY EMOTIONAL...EACH AND EVERY EMOTION WAS CONVEYED VERY NICELY...FAB WORK DIDU . . THE FRIENDSHIP THAT U POTRAYED BETWEEN VISH AND KRIYA WAS INDESCRIPTIONABLE. . . . . I TOH LYKEY LYKEY. . . . DIRECTLY TOUCHED MAH HEART . . . . . DO WRITE MORE LIKE THIS . . . WULD LOVE TO READ MORE AND MORE OF IT REGULARLY . .😳 . FINALLY WANNA SAY THAT U ROCKED IT TOTALLY. . . . KEEP IT UP !!!! lOVELY WRITING AND DESRIPTION TOO . . . .👏U ARE MY STAR WRITER DEE . . .⭐️ HAVE ALWAZ LOVED UR WRITING . . . . AB MERI PYAARI SI DIDU FASHION WAALA FF BHI UPDATE KR DO NAAA. . . PLSSSOOO *WID INNOCENT EYES * PLSSOOO . . . MERI DARLING SWTHRT DIDU. . . APNI SWEETS KE LIYE ITNA TOH KROGE NAAA. 😳. 😳.😳SORRY FOR THIS SHABY KINDA COMMENT . . . . BUT KYA KRUN APNE DABBE CELL SE ONL9 HUN . .😆 . . 😆 P.S - LOVE U TONNNS !!!🤗P.P.S - DON FORGET TO UPDATE A LONNGGG CHAPPY OF FASHION . . . .😉 HOPE U LYKED MY COMMENT . . . . MUAAAHHH :* :* :* :* :* :*
Edited by mEgical_arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome OS snigdha...loved it very much
yes friend like vishakha is blessing...i hope long live friendship of kria and vishakha
and ofcoarse our friendship too
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Posted: 13 years ago
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This is what we all want ..
No questions asked ..none answered ..
because when in love .. all that doesn't matter ..
what matters is the look in the eyes ..
the honesty ...
that's what it showed here ..

Simply the best ...
It was really too good ...
Thanks !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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res🥳

unres in page 7..😛

Edited by neetha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its awesome..loved it..
thnx for pm..

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