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Posted: 13 years ago
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zeal that was an amazing update.
i loved it.
aur ur comments in between were so cute.
wow so rey has sceen her dance ab aur bhi fida ho jayega yeh wah.

thanks for the pm.
update next part soon.


Edited by asmaju - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks a lottt dear!!!!!!!!!!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: The007Shivani

amazing loved the update it was amazing zeal thank for the pm

thanks dear!!!!!!!!!
its my pleasure!!!!!!!!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
it was just amazing zeal...
luved the kriyansh convo!!!!!!!
kriya is right all the work of manofying sharon was done by swayam...luved the swaron convo
finally rey saw kriya dancing...eagerly waiting 4 the next part
Edited by lovely7010 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shaffy_arsha

Awome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 zeal
i love it sooo much ❤️
n aww weakling soo sweet moments...n finally kriyaansh sweetu sweetu tok...aww i love dem soo much...n missing dem too 😔

i m also missing them😭!!!!!
but thanks alo dear for loving this!!!!!!!!!!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: star_2012

wow...it was owesome...

i loves the kriyaansh scenes alot...
please cont..soon and pm me...xxx❤️

thanks alott dear for liking this!!!!!!!
i will continue soon...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kriyaanshd3

really cul yaar.. lets hope swayam team join kar le...

thanks alott dear!!!!!!!!!!😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Arsha1994

bth d updates wer amazing zeal...

luvd it...
d way rey stood up fr kria..
luvd d way he stood up fr kria...
he supported kria...
so cute...
ur rey is so sweet...
ur story is far better thnd d3...der r no misunderstandings...
kriaz gonna join d team...
shez gonna tak rey's help fr convincing swayam...
ur ff...amazing...marvelous...
waitin eagerly fr d nxt updt...
thnx fr d pm...

thanks atonn dear!!!!!!!
really yaar ur comments toched my heart!!!!!!!!!!!!!😃
thanks for loving this!!!
love u dear!!!!!!!!!!❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kriyansh24

loved it zeal...

plz pm me when u update

thanks a lot dear!!!!!!!!!!
i will surely pm u!!!!!!!!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
So,here's my lambaaa comment exclusively for u dear !!!!!

hey guys!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
plz gussa mat karo pehle meri baat sunlo(fir chaho utne jute mar lena😆)
i had written this update yesterday but wen i read it i thought kriyaansh moment was not too much special so i edited it and in this process i became late!!!!!!!!!!
sorry ...but here u go wid the next update...
tnxxx to u dear...for more scenes for
<3 kriyaansh <3
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kriya:
haan rey, i want u to help me but usse pehle aapko muze ye bataana padega ki aapne sheron se baat ki?????
rey:
ya,i have talked with her...i convinced her ...it was too difficult but i m "rey"...reyaansh singhaniya nothing is impossible for me...he said in his full cool hunk image and expression!!!!!!!!!!
awwweee...just love the cool attitude of
rey !!
kriya:
murmured...hey universeji inka mai kya karu...par jo bhi ho muze inki yehi baat bohot pasand hai...
😆
rey:
sorry???????
kriya:
nahi kuchh nahi aap muze bataaiye aapne sheron ko kaise manaaya shayad uss se muze kuchh help mil jaaye...

rey told her the whole story...how he convinced sheron and all...(jaanti hu tum logo ko bhi jaan na hai ye sab to let's go in flash back😆!!!)

flashback:
rey left kriya in the fire exit and started searching for sheron he knw very well where his best buddie supposed to be...he went to the terrace of collage...ya there she is...he was right!!!!sheron was there...walking to and fro ...
rey:
ahm...ahmm...
shron:
ab bhi kuchh kehna baaki reh gayaa hai???????
rey:
sheron...i know ...u r angry on me and u should...look ...i m sorry sheron...kya tum apne best friend ko maaf nahi karogi?????????
sheron:
oh plz rey!!!!!!now don't try to be my best friend!!!!!!!!!uss ls dm weakling type of behenji ke saamne meri itni badi insult karke tum muzse forgiveness ki expectations rakhte ho...she said angrily and moved downstairs but...
swayam was there he was wanted to be alone for some time after that question of kriya...
he saw tears in sheron's eyes...
swayam:
sheron kya baat hai???????do u have any prob.???
sheron:
she was frustrated...why do u think that i will tell u?????😕
swayam:
because kuchh baatein shere karne se dil ko achha fill hota hai...don't worry mai kisi ko nahi bataaunga...bolo kya hua?????????
hayyye...humara philosophical swayam ..😍
sheron:
kuchh nahi...
swayam:
ok as ur wish if u don't want to tell me then i won't force u...he started moving to terrace...
sheron:
swayam ruko...
she tell the whole incident to him...
swayam:
rey ko aisa nahi karna chahiye tha...par...
sheron:
par kya????????
swyam:
sheron kya tumhe ye pataa hai hum hurt ussi ko karte hai jo hamare sabse jyaada karib hota hai...(suddenly sheron realize that she was excaztly doing this with him ...does he is really very near to her heart?????...the pehla nasha music starts the llhh moment...)...rey bhi tumhe apna best buddie manta hai issi liye tum par gussa kiya usne...
i hope she get's to noe her feelings sooon
sheron:
shayad...u r right...😲
can't believe my eyes !!!!😆
swayam:
to ab kiska wait kar rahi ho jao uss ke paas...

she turned and typically run towards the terrace ...where rey was already standing ...she hugged him tightly...rey heard all that conversation between sweron...he gave a thumps up to swayam👍🏼 ...and swayam reply him with a wide smile😃...

ab waapas aa jao rey ne sab kuchh kriya ko bataa diya hai aur muze bhi apni story ko aage badhana hai...😆
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kriya:
to real mai sab kuchh swayam ne kiya..aap toh aise hi credit le rahe the...😆
rey:
he become angry...but again she pouted and...he couldn't control on his million dollar smile!!!!!!!!!!!!!😍
kriya:
ab hasiye mat aur muze ye bataaiye ki mai kya karu????
rey:
swayam ko ye realize karwao ke iss dance se wo sheron ke aur karib jaa sakta hai...
kriya:
shron ke kyu??????
rey:
are babba...swayam sheron ko like karta hai ...bohot jyaada...but sheron ka attitude unn dono ke beech mai aa jaata hai aur swayam issi liye dance nahi karta kyoki usse lagta hai that wo agar sheron se compete karega toh wo sheron ko hurt karega...

kriya:
ohhh!!!!!!!!!!her face was open wide as a cute baby...rey was falling more and more on her...

suddenly...rey got a msg.

rey:
listen kriya...i gotta go...i have rehersals...

kriya:
okey...thank you rey...

rey:
thanks kis liye?????
kriya:
meri itni help karne ke liye ... aap khud dusri team ke hai aur apne hi deffence ko help kar rahe hai...
😳
rey:
oh com'on kriya no big deal...
kriya:
ab aapko jaana chahiye...
rey:
ok bye...see u leter...as he was very eager to see her again...😆
kriya:
ya...
he left the class ...kriya was alone in the class...she was happy that she found a good friend in rey...nw she cud convince swayam too...she started dancing...whenever she fill good or bad...happy or sad...she shere it with her dance ...dance had became her best friend since long time...
but...on his way rey realized that he was so lost in kriya that he forgot to take his bag!!!!!!!!!😆
he came back at class...as he entered the scene he saw made him shocked and freezed like an ice...😆ya ya why not...for sure freeze ho jao...roast ho jao...burn ho jao...mix ho jao...kuch bhi chalega rey !😉
one girl was dancing like and angel...her moves...her foot steps everything was just perfect...she was the best dancer he had ever seen...even more better than sheron...just the best...she was kriya...he never thought that the simple,normal and imotinal girl can dance with this beauty ...with this much passion...nw he was dying to dance with her...
i noe...kriya hai hi the best dancer of the whole world !!!!

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hope u like it guys...
muze late update ke liye maaf kar dena...plzzz...mai tum logo ka monday magical to nahi banaa pai but i have triend to make ur tuesday "treatful"
love u all...
❤️zeal❤️
surrreee dear...u really made it !!!!
😳
resss...

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Heya Zeal darl !!!! sup...?😃
chalo finally u undated dear...😆
really ws dying to read ur update...😳
hehehe...u noe na i lack a lil patience.😆...but i hope u don mind !!!!😉

chal that's it !!!!😛

agar type krte rhungi toh test kon dega mera kal...have to study loads !!!!!

but really loved ur update to the core zeal !
do update the next part sooon nd do PM me for sure !!!!😳

Mwaaahhh to u !!!🤗

Edited by mEgical_arsha - 13 years ago

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