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Himani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: _sana.Magic_
the plot is really interesting. Plz PM me also na.!

Yaaa sure😊 n thnkzz a lot sweety 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

sounds cool! Please add me to the pm list

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kokoARSHA

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

nice one plzzz send me PM when u update it

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Himani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: mssg
nice one plzzz send me PM when u update it

Thnk u😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

wow yaar mahi! Thats awesome. Add me to your PM list :)

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Himani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: kyriareyD3
wow yaar mahi! Thats awesome. Add me to your PM list :)

Awww , Thnkzz Yukti 😃

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Himani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

New Upd8t -

(intro -Kria comes from delhi 2 mumbai to fulfill her one and only dream , , to become a national level Dancer , she lies to her mother and tells her that she has come to mumbai for doing MBA , Reyansh , is the son of the great business tycoon , Ranvijay Singhania , the owner of Singhania steels , His father wants him to carry the family legacy forward , but Rey has no intentions to do the same , He leaves his home . Destiny unites Rey and kria"s road and they end up being room-mates . After some days of them becoming room mates...

Kria - REY !!!!!! U R just IMPOSSIBLE !!!! , Dekho aapne kya kiya , Mera poora cupboard kharab kar diya , aur yeh kya hai(sees and picks up his boxers) , ewww, rey aap kitne gande ho , 😡 Najane Kaunse muhurat mein mein delhi se nikali thi joh mujhe aap jaisa Room mate mila !!!(angrily starts cleaning her cupboard)

Rey - Muhu.. WHAT , Baat cutter chup baitho dekh nahi sakti mein BUSY hoon ?

Kria - HAAN , sofa pe saand ke tarah lete lete movie dekhte hue BUSY, aapko dikhata nahi hai ke nxt week exams aa rahi hai , aur upar se mere dance ke rehearsels , every1 is not born with a silver spoon like you , rey u r IMPOSSIBLE !!! 😒(MAKES A DEPRESSED EXPRESSION), GODD , i NEED A BREAK !!!I am Going at Neha"s place , i need some air to BREATHE!!!!😡

Rey - Aree baat Cutter , listen yaar , M SORRY , hey listen yaar...(She leaves) (Has a look at the house , the house was looking more like some TABELA 😕, he Thought ) Pull your socks rey before Kria comes !!!!!

(Rey feels guilty for his lazy attitude , awww !!! , he makes the whole house spic and span to ensure that kria can comfortably study (such a sweet heart naa😳) , he gets immensely tired after cleaning the house and so he sleeps on the sofa itself)

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(On the road while returning to kria"s place)

Neha - neha feeling bad for rey , tumhe aisa nahi karna chahiye tha kria , u knw na ki rey nt knowing to clean the house , usse kabhi zaroorat hi nahi padi , woh dil ka bura nahi hai😊

Kria -(still in the bad mujhe pata hai neha , but woh try toh kar sakta hai na , usse bas mujhse ladna ata hai aur uss sharon se chipakana😡

Neha - Aisa nahi hai kria ...lo tumhara ghar bhi aa gaya , mein chalti hoon mujhe vicky se notes lene hai , woh yehi paas mein rehta hai

(At the house kria gets astonished to see the house clean and tidy , She feels a bit sorry for rey when she finds that rey cleaned the whole house by himself and tiredly slept on the sofa , rey gets awake due to the sound of kria entering the house but acts of being slept )

Kria - Maine shayad aapko kuch zyada hi daant diya re , mujhe aisa nahi karna chahiye the but aap mujhe itna satate kyun ho ,ummm , ek baat kahoon , vaise aap sote hue kafi cute dikhate ho (cutely kisses rey"s forehead ,smiles and goes )

Rey - (smiles) Aakhir tumne keh hi diya baat cutter ki u likes me !!!!!😛( with a grin on his face)

(i know its a bit short but next wala will b longer than these Howz the first part guys , do comment and thankkz 4 reading😃)

Next part promo - At the college , rey forgets to do his homework given by the hitler ashsih sir as he was busy cleaning the house , Kria puts her notes in his bag without telling rey (A cute KriYansh scene❤️)

Edited by kriyansh117 - 13 years ago