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Posted: 14 years ago
haha good part...and han agar koi rom kom story likha to mere sath either digvijay or elder ambhik or selucas..the guy of my ff bas aise hi...sagar wala nhi...or alexandro the guy of my ff sagar wala nhi...samajh gaye na😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
@Bengalscott -- aahhh.. something in store for Charu's character... cool.. awww.. only 6 7 chapters more!!!! 😕 i sooo wanna know da mystery!!! but dont want ur excellent writing to end so soon!!! 😛

areyyy baba!!! but climax sambhal kar likhna!! otherwise i would lose my Karvinath jise Radhi mere sath share kar rahi hai!!!!! 🤣 Ufff.. ur story is becoming risky for me!!!! 😆 Just kidding.. m really loving it.. 🤗 Update soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
very nice part scott👏...very very interesting⭐️...loved it😃..and thanks for putting peihu and bhargavi - the 2 names 2gether...as peihu mentioned ...we think alike..our taste is same..etc etc😆...thanks dear😛

@ Radhu
congrats dearo...finally u have got the chance to embrace ur dhanna😛😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
agar dhanu mujhe na mili to bengalscot ki profile me magadh sena bhej dungi
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Posted: 14 years ago
hahaha!! yeahh Radhi i would also help u for that!!! after all mere karvynath ka sawal hai!!! 😆


Edited by Charu21 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Chapter 9: Second Contact

"So all agrees on the fact that no one seen any girl, in her 20s, named Charulata Sen or Charu?" asks Dr. Seth.

"No Sir!" everybody echoes his answer.

Radhika, now feeling like confused as hell, looking people with her "lost in translation" eyes. She is numb, can't understand what to do.

S:"So now what you have to say, Sharma?"

R:"You guys are cheating me!"

S:"Sharma, we had a deal."

R:"Oh go to hell! You are the main operator of this whole fiasco."

S:"Sharma!" shouts Seth.

R:"Don't shout! I know why this is happening to me. I know the practice of loboto..."

S:"Everyone go back to your work and thank you for your co-operation." he looks at Radhika, "...and I need you in my chamber."

Radhika follows Seth in his chamber.

S:"Now tell me, what is your problem?"

R:"You killed Dr. Bharti!"

S:"What? Is that some kind of joke?"

R:"Joke!" Radhika shouts in full anger, "You think I am joking? You moron! You killed many patients due to your satisfaction! You practice lobotomy and Dr. Bharti Singh knew that! You killed her! You bas***d! You killed her!"

S:"Listen Sharma", Seth exhales the anger, "make sure you take back your words or you will face serious problem now. You only saw my brightest part and I will like it if you don't make me turn into the dark one."

R:"I'll prove to the world about your mal-practices! The police will catch you..."

S:"Ha! Nobody can do anything to me! Nobody! I'm the man, I'm invincible! You can't harm me a single bit."

R:"So you confess your crimes! You killed Dr. Bharti!"

S:"No!"

R:"Yes you did...maybe you killed her and mutilated her body!"

S:"No! Never!"

R:"And I think you even raped her before killing her!"

S:"Goddamn! Stop it!"

R:"You did it!"

S:"No..no...no...No father can do something horrible like that with his daughter! Nobody! Not a single father can do that!"

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RoseFairy thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
father???????????...is he a father figure or really biological one??god damn its so interesting
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Posted: 14 years ago
Day by day it is becoming more and more exciting to know what actually happened. its so much interesting loved it. oh what;s this suspense all over. continue fast.


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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG!!! Father!!!!!!!! 😲
aah.. damn interesting!! m waiting for da next update!!! :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Oh god...this was best jhatka wala update so far...i was shocked while reading the last line...what a suspense so good👏...brilliant...keep it up⭐️

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