Chandra Nandini 61-70: Mrigtrishna?

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amina1

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

All CVS are serving is Karela job sawast ke liye fayademand hai Lekin kadwa hai exactly like the track going on

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sashashyam

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Right now it is Nandini, because she reminisces about the scene where she asks him to explain that sloka.

But soon, it will all become so confusing that neither the viewers nor the CVs will be able to make out who is who, when and where. At the end, when Roopa has been unmasked, the tangled script will be as full of holes as Swiss cheese, with inconsistencies galore that make no sense. It was the same with the Maham Anga double track.

Here it has begun already. How does Roopa know what happened between Nandini and Malay in the forest the night before? She was not there, and no one could have told her either. Still, she is talking about that to Malay the next day.

Again, before slapping Helena, Roopa points at the scratch marks on Helena's arm, and sneers that this is all she, Helena, wants. But how did she know anything about that, as the conversation about those marks was between Nandini and Helena?

It will get worse and worse as we proceed.

Shyamala Aunty

Originally posted by: raokrithika
Who was it Nandini or Roopa in Chandra's room ?😆😆

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sashashyam

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

My dearest Lashykanna,

It is I who should thank you for such perceptive comments, which make all the effort I had to put into this post worthwhile.

There are but a few readers of mine who have a feel for the beauty of the language for its own sake, quite distinct from the content. Perhaps because you are such a good writer yourself, you are one of them.

In your reviews of my posts, that is what pleases me the most of all, to have my own favourite lines or phrases picked up and relished, the way I would relish them myself. Like that bit about the keeper of the sacred flame that I had used for Akbar in one of my posts on your novel. I was delighted with it, and I was even happier that you loved it as much as I did.

I cannot now attempt do the kind of detailed response I would have done in the past, but I would like to touch on one point. I was not shocked by Chanakya caning Chandragupta because, as I had noted, he does not do that as a punishment. He sees it as a test, to find out how far Chandra has gone in his emotional entanglement with Nandini. And the matter is serious enough for him to do it that way.

Anil's parallel is natural, but luckily, this is not the Mathura track, and Nandini is not Jodha. I normally do not like weepy females, but I must say that Shweta handles misery wrapped up in dignity very well indeed, and also looks so woebegone that she carries instant conviction.

Unfortunately, her earlier trick of widening her eyes so that the white showed all around the iris, which she no longer favours, seems to be contagious, for now it is Chandra who is doing exactly the same thing all the time. I do wish someone would advise Rajat to can this tic!

Shyamala Periyamma

Originally posted by: lashy

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sashashyam

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Four, my dear Kausi? No, no, it would be all ten of them, to get the feel of Chandra 2 as well, but of course 61-64 without fail!

I am very pleased that you liked this one so much, my dear.

Sinna Periamma

Originally posted by: Kalgi22
Once again magnificent analysis Periamma. 👏 👏 I really enjoyed reading your detailed take on Chandra and Nandini. Definitely I'm going to watch these 4 episodes just because of your writing. 😳

Take rest well, Periamma!! 🤗

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sashashyam

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Ranjana my pet,

You do not quite understand how my RA works, but do take a look at my medical bulletin a bit earlier😉. It is really like a daily lottery. Anyhow, I am relieved that you are not going to stick pins into a wax image of mine to punish me for my transgressions!😉 I was really tired when I finished this post, but you see, my dear, I wanted to do it.

Waiting for your comments, which are always something special, to be relished at leisure.

Shyamala Aunty

Originally posted by: kautilya04
You're back, you're back! 🥳 It is so good to see your magnificent posts again, aunty 🤗

You've typed so much! 😲 Wait...let me see if the Other Side needs to make an appearance😈...hmmm...no, you did give yourself some rest for a few days🤔...so theek hain...she will stay hidden for now...😉😆 But I do hope your health is better, and you're not exerting yourself again!

I will return soon to highlight my favourite parts :D

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Shailaja

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Aunty all of your posts are very beautiful. They have a lyrical and poetic quality to them. I really cannot do justice in praising them adequately using my words. It is almost as if I am reading a chapter out of an epic or classic. It is as picture perfect, and this happens even when the quality of the episodes themselves is inconsistent or at times inadequate. My mood has been pretty off for other reasons. My iPad screen has crashed and I am unable to unlock it, access my cloud storage, or internal storage data by any other means. The result thirty pages of my FF have just vanished in the thin air with no possibility of recovery forcing me to rewrite all of it again.

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krithika

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: sashashyam
Right now it is Nandini, because she reminisces about the scene where she asks him to explain that sloka.

But soon, it will all become so confusing that neither the viewers nor the CVs will be able to make out who is who, when and where. At the end, when Roopa has been unmasked, the tangled script will be as full of holes as Swiss cheese, with inconsistencies galore that make no sense. It was the same with the Maham Anga double track.

Here it has begun already. How does Roopa know what happened between Nandini and Malay in the forest the night before? She was not there, and no one could have told her either. Still, she is talking about that to Malay the next day.

Again, before slapping Helena, Roopa points at the scratch marks on Helena's arm, and sneers that this is all she, Helena, wants. But how did she know anything about that, as the conversation about those marks was between Nandini and Helena?

It will get worse and worse as we proceed.

Shyamala Aunty

🤣🤣 sixer pe sixer ...sixer pe sixer .

Today you have surpassed Yuvraj Singh record sixer maar maar ke yahan 🤣

So i can still have hopes on my dual personality or hypnotism track🤪

Hope you have read our previous comments ...Chandramukhi track...Nandu(Roopa) performing Ra..ra...for Chandra 🤪and @ Shailusri had her script also ready for this ajab gajab katha😆😆

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sashashyam

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Akka dear,

I am so sorry to have caused you so much concern, but I was in bad shape, fed up with the pain and unusually irritable, and that is the truth. Once I felt somewhat better, even if not quite out of the woods, I wrote this excessively long post as a sort of catharsis.

I am glad you liked it, Akka, and as for your comments, which are as pithy and witty as ever, the aasthaana villain crack gets first prize!👏 A close second would be the tale of the grinding stone!😆

Your illustration for Chandra 1 and Chandra 2 is truly inspired, and and I am going to paste it into my post. Of course it would be Chandra 2 and Chandra 1, from left to right.

Last but not the least, I loved the haiku. By now, I am pretty sure you could give the Japanese a run for their money in this genre!

As for Nandini's tourniquet technique, they do use it for snake bites, binding the upper part of the affected limb so tightly that the blood cannot flow away from it and carry the poison to the rest of the body. Its effectiveness of course depends on how soon after the bite it is applied, and I agree that here it seems too late to be of any use. But I suppose she does it as a kind of desperate measure, and she needs to do something, anything at all, to ward off the waves of panic that must have been engulfing her at that point of time

Shyamala

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

My dear Shyamala,
I was really worried about your health when I noticed your absence in the forum for quite some time. I had a great relief when I saw your post today.
As usual it is a wonderful analysis. Just as I used to remark several times, your posts are like a guide to understand the episodes thoroughly.
I have marked my comments in red.
Pl take care.
Yours
Saraswathi akka.

Edited by sashashyam - 8 years ago

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sashashyam

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Posted: 8 years ago

#39

One point that I had missed, Lashykanna. Adhyayan means studying, the act of studying, that is.

Shyamala Periyamma

Originally posted by: sashashyam
My dearest Lashykanna,

It is I who should thank you for such perceptive comments, which make all the effort I had to put into this post worthwhile.

There are but a few readers of mine who have a feel for the beauty of the language for its own sake, quite distinct from the content. Perhaps because you are such a good writer yourself, you are one of them.

In your reviews of my posts, that is what pleases me the most of all, to have my own favourite lines or phrases picked up and relished, the way I would relish them myself. Like that bit about the keeper of the sacred flame that I had used for Akbar in one of my posts on your novel. I was delighted with it, and I was even happier that you loved it as much as I did.

I cannot now attempt do the kind of detailed response I would have done in the past, but I would like to touch on one point. I was not shocked by Chanakya caning Chandragupta because, as I had noted, he does not do that as a punishment. He sees it as a test, to find out how far Chandra has gone in his emotional entanglement with Nandini. And the matter is serious enough for him to do it that way.

Anil's parallel is natural, but luckily, this is not the Mathura track, and Nandini is not Jodha. I normally do not like weepy females, but I must say that Shweta handles misery wrapped up in dignity very well indeed, and also looks so woebegone that she carries instant conviction.

Unfortunately, her earlier trick of widening her eyes so that the white showed all around the iris, which she no longer favours, seems to be contagious, for now it is Chandra who is doing exactly the same thing all the time. I do wish someone would advise Rajat to can this tic!

Shyamala Periyamma

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sashashyam

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Posted: 8 years ago

#40

My poor dear child,

What an awful thing to happen to you! I can completely understand what it feels like; once I lost an entire annual report that I had dictated into the computer - this was in the late 1990s and there were no laptops then, only desktops - and the wretched thing disappeared when my secretary somehow hit some wrong key. As it had been dictated directly into the machine, there were no shorthand notes either. So I had to do it all over again, but in the process, I was able to draft it better and more compactly.

It will be the same with the lost pages of your FF, as you will see for yourself. You will be able to refine it further even as you try to recreate the original text from memory - which cannot be done - and I will guarantee that the end result will please you more than the first draft. So don't fret, don't rush things to make up for lost time, but take a deep breath and get on with it systematically. We will all wait for those updates.

Did you know that when Sir Isaac Newton had just finished his monumental work Principia, and had left his writing desk for a while, his pet dog upset a candle on the table and the whole manuscript had been reduced to ashes? As it was all handwritten, there was no copy.

When Newton came back and saw this disaster, he merely looked at the dog, and exclaimed Diamond, Diamond, little do you know what you have done! Then he set to work to recreate the whole text of the book. Compared to that, your travails, and mine on that occasion, are as nothing, would you not agree?

But the next time, never fail to keep a copy of your texts of the chapters on a pen drive. I do not know how things from an i-pad can be copied on to a pen drive, but I am sure it can be done.

You are always so warm in your comments about my posts, Shailaja, that I am left with no adequate response. But the truth is that much of the beauty of any text lies as much in the mind of the reader as in the pen of the writer.

Shyamala Aunty

Originally posted by: shailusri1983
Aunty all of your posts are very beautiful. They have a lyrical and poetic quality to them. I really cannot do justice in praising them adequately using my words. It is almost as if I am reading a chapter out of an epic or classic. It is as picture perfect, and this happens even when the quality of the episodes themselves is inconsistent or at times inadequate.
My mood has been pretty off for other reasons. My iPad screen has crashed and I am unable to unlock it, access my cloud storage, or internal storage data by any other means. The result thirty pages of my FF have just vanished in the thin air with no possibility of recovery forcing me to rewrite all of it again.

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