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Posted: 10 years ago
Suru

Am speechless at the moment with the last para for it captures Praja's essence so beautifully.
I re-read this update like 3 times before commenting because I just couldn't get enough

Pratap in majnu mode plus bana woh detective- name bhi dhondh nahi paya na (English mein search kar raha tha😆)
Ajabde was the perfect nervous bride who's waiting for husband
but more than that I loved the camaraderie these two share amongst them
It's anew beginning filled with lots of love and happiness

Arey yaar yeh Pratu toh abhi se so gaya woh bhi biwi ki baat poori sune bina
Bach gaye bachoo
aage nahi bach paoge

Love the update Suru

Forever firstie
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Posted: 10 years ago
RESS
Too many things to say... mere comments bhi chhote nahi hote hain

Love,
RuVa
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: RuVa

RESS

Too many things to say... mere comments bhi chhote nahi hote hain

Love,
RuVa



UNRESS

Haayyyee... Pratap ka majnu mode is on full power!! Biwi ko bridal dress mein trolley kholte huye dekha toh he realised that this was the Ajab he loved... ufff...

Ajabde may be too tired, but there were butterflies in my stomach the whole time I was reading this.

His suggestion that she should sleep and get some rest, followed by asking her if she wanted to do something else... then giving her the payal as gift, then calling her a wildcat was all ☺️

Aur phir his guilt over making her cry during her bidaai, and then the name finding or not finding, depending on how you look at it - followed by him telling her that she shouldn't laugh like that on her wedding night ... Am speechless...

Waise, Pratap is very smart - her situation ko ghuma-firaake - Ajab ko blush karvaa rahaa hai

Ajab is no less of course - itni baatein ki - ke bechaara so gaya... 😆😆😆 And she promised him retribution if it happens again - Atta gurl!!! 👏👏👏

Then he forgot about pretending to be asleep - I'm not surprised, Ajab must look so gorgeous - that I was left speechless, Pratap toh nayaa nayaa husband banaa hai 😉


Ab last paraa ki tareef mein I will just say one thing - you left me completely stunned into silence - I have read it over and over again - such a beautiful, elegant, simple, and yet absolutely perfect way of capturing the essence of PrAja...

Hats off darling!!!

Lots of love,
RuVa
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: twilightlover29

Suru

Am speechless at the moment with the last para for it captures Praja's essence so beautifully.
I re-read this update like 3 times before commenting because I just couldn't get enough

Pratap in majnu mode plus bana woh detective- name bhi dhondh nahi paya na (English mein search kar raha tha😆)
Ajabde was the perfect nervous bride who's waiting for husband
but more than that I loved the camaraderie these two share amongst them
It's anew beginning filled with lots of love and happiness

Arey yaar yeh Pratu toh abhi se so gaya woh bhi biwi ki baat poori sune bina
Bach gaye bachoo
aage nahi bach paoge

Love the update Suru

Forever firstie


Thank you so so muchhh
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Posted: 10 years ago
Shaadi ho gayi! 😳 🥳 Oh my! You wrote it so beautifully sur jaana! 👏 Loved it itna! ❤️ 😉 Bechari phool joote nahi chura payi. 😆 Par phir bhi shagun mil gaya. 😃 Vidaayi scene made me emotional. 😭
And i wonder how you write wedding scenes in each of your stories and yet each one is so different. 👏 ⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
This is most beautiful and superb chapter ⭐️
you are such an amazing writer ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome Chapters Suranya😃
Sorry for the late reply😔
Thank u for the PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey😊 Just found this and read it in one go. This made me relive the PrAja moments. I can really imagine RoSal while reading this. Loved it. Great job👍🏼 And btw... is it me or does that Akki refers to... Akbar? I wished it was like that in reality. Loved it when young Pratap and Akbar were shown as friends. Keep up the good work😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sorry people was a bit busy but am back with the remainin chapters.

CHAPTER TWENTY ONE:



Ajabde was unpacking her bags and trolleys at her new home. The guests were gone and Daadi was having the much needed rest in the other room. Pratap was back to being busy with his work and Jaivanta and Udai were preparing to shift base to London. It was a week hence the wedding and they were supposed to go for Pak Fera today. But Pratap's work played spoilers to the plan and after a serious scolding from Jaivanta he had promised to take her home the very next day. She was unpacking what she had brought from home in to the newly made wardrobe meant for her in Pratap's room.

He was sitting in office going through some files during lunch break. His father's driver came in. He got up with a wrinkled forehead.
" Is daadi ill?"
" No Sir, am here with lunch."
" Lunch? Who send lunch? Maa sa is packing for London na?"
" Choti Madam sir."
A smile appeared to disappear again.
" Ok keep it." The driver left.

He went over to open the box. Puri. Sabji. Halwa. The smell of the Halwa made him hungry. He took a spoonful. Ajab's cooking never failed to amaze him. He went over to his desk, took his phone and dialed her number.
" Hello." The tone was formal. She didn't need to say anything, he knew she was upset with the postponed Pak fera plans.
" Thank You." He smiled.
" Welcome." And before he could say a thing the phone was disconnected. He stared at her photo on his desk from their sagai n smiled.

" Huh, Thank You." Ajabde murmured while stuffing her things in the wardrobe. Jaivanta came in and she flashed a smile.
" I have something for you."
" What is it Maa sa?" There was a big giftwrap which she opened before Jaivanta's eager eyes. It was a photo of them, the sindoor daan rasam captured beautifully in the frame as the photographer had captured their eyelock.
" It is to replace this." Jaivanta pulled a chair and took down Pratap's portrait from the wall.
Together they put it on the wall and smiled.
" If you want curtains of your choice you can change them as you like." Jaivanta left her to her work.
Ajabde smiled at the frame before remembering how angry she is. She needed to pull out this act till tomorrow and make him suffer.

He came back home as usually late around 11p.m. Daadi was asleep,so were his parents in the adjacent apartment. Ever since they got married, Daadi had herself shifted to the next apartment to give the newly married some privacy, yet every night he used his key to his parents' apartment to check on the sleeping Daadi, today he did the same. Slowly moving the key on his own apartment door he noticed her nameplate added to the door. " Mrs. Ajabde Pratap Singh."Jaivanta surely took care of the small things well. He stepped in to the nearly dark apartment, a dim light was kept on in the drawing room area and he could see light in the bedroom as well.
" She's awake?" He thought aloud. Last two days Jaivanta had made sure she was not awake for him. He also didn't want to feel guilty of keeping her awake. He turned the bedroom lock slowly and the sight in front of him brought a smile to his face.

She was half lying on the single couch in the room, a book almost on her face and the air from the AC made her cuddle up to a fetal position. She was waiting for him to get home. Her hair was all over the couch and her face as she slept soundly, a soft hint of happiness on her face. He walked up to her without making a noise and sat down on both knees carefully removing the hair from her pretty face. His touch made her wake with a jolt.
" Hey it's okay its me."
" You, You are home, you scared me." She picked up the book that fell on the floor from her jolt.
" You didn't need to wait." he smiled not looking at her as he took out his tee and shorts.
" I... I was not waiting... I just fell asleep reading." She fumbled to lie. Am still angry.
" Then you must have eaten." He smiled teasingly as if to say I know you are lying.
" Yeah I ate."
Damn, am hungry. Ajab's thoughts were with her empty stomach.
" Okay then, you sleep, let me go eat." He went out of the room without even giving her a chance to speak. She stood in the balcony angry. He came back in with two plates of food and laid it on the table before the couch.
" Suno..."
" Ji?" she turned around to see two plates and looked at him in awe.
" If you still want to continue this drama you are welcome, am hungry..." He started eating from his plate. She came in slowly, sat on the bed with her plate of Roti Sabji and stared at him gobble his food like a baby. She took a silent bite. He eyed her from the corner of his eyes.
" Am still angry." She concluded aloud.
" I know you are, am sorry, we will go first thing tomorrow." He continued eating without looking at her. Finishing her food in a hurry Ajab slammed the dish beside his and said in a rush of anger, " Everyone was right, you have changed, you are so rude." She went to the washroom and closed the door.
" Are you crying?" Pratap asked from the other side of the locked door.
" No I am not." Ajab sobbed lying.
" Come out."
" No."
" I was just trying to lighten your mood."
" By not talking?"
" Look, am confused this is new for me."
" Ahhahha confused, new... as if I was married eight times before." Her tone made him almost laugh out but he controlled.
" Please come out so that we can talk like adults."
" I don't wana."
" Okay, Goodnight." She heard his footsteps retreat. And the lights of the room go off. She came out silently and moved to her side of the bed.
" We can still talk." He said softly the moment she laid beside him.
" Am sorry."
" For what?" Now he was amused at this confused soul called a wife.
" I just got angry, you came after a hard day at work and..."
He hugged her tight making her stop, " This is the Ajabde I know."
He smiled at her. " And since we are not sleepy... "
He advanced towards her and his face met a cushion followed by a laughter.
" No, we have to leave at dawn you said, sleep." He caught her by the hand,
" So what? Am not sleepy."
She pushed him making him fall on the bed but he did not let go of her hand and her hair was all over his face. She removed it from his face with half a giggle that stopped the moment their eyes met. She closed her eyes in anticipation.

The next morning at 7 am Pratap saw a joyful wife run about in enthusiasm checking her gifts for her parents again and again before checking herself in the mirror the last time. Her hair was done in a braid carefully highlighting her sindoor and she wore a blue salwar with her payal, bangles and mangalsutra. He saw that she had already taken the liberty to chose what he will wear and hurried him every few minutes.

They arrived at Hansa's place and before he could even park the car Ajabde stepped out to hug her mother tight, then Phool. Pratap was not at all surprised to find Vishal and Rohan there as well. After all Hansa's food was everyone's favorite. They were taken in after aarti and Hansa was already busy supplying food to them as Ajabde gave her father his gift. Phool dragged Ajabde's aside, and amidst his chatting he noticed Ajab blush red at Phool's interrogation. He gave her a smile.

Vishal had a surprise for them, he and Phool were back together for the better this time, he would be moving to NY soon with her, and they were going to live in together. The news made Pratap and Ajabde happy. After all their story started from Phool and Vishal. Rohan had a wedding present for the couple. A honeymoon trip to Zurich he announced. Ajab blushed as Pratap almost spoiled the party with , " But my work..."
" I already talked to Udai uncle bout it bro, you go enjoy the trip next week, he will take care of everything." Rohan smiled.
Pratap saw a smile on Ajab's face, she was truly happy about the trip and he didn't want to hurt her this time.
" Okay we will go, only if you people don't follow us there too!" Pratap stared at Vishal.
" Aww... " Rohan burst out laughing pointing at Vishal.
" Wait what... I never..." The group reunited like old times giggling and joking while planning what they will see and pack for Zurich. Amidst the group busily exploring the places on Ajabde's computer, he held her hand tight and asked, " You happy?"
" Yes." She gave a smile that melted his heart as he said to himself. I promise you I will always make you smile like this. He smiled back, hand in hand.
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Posted: 9 years ago
OMG Suru
Itna accha waala update ke liye saari late latfifi maaf hai

Pratu beta shaadi ko 1 day hua nahi ki biwi angry
but meri Ajab ne bheja halwa (now I wnat some halwa - Mummmaaa)

JB does take care of all things
Love her gift

Pratu in majnu mode after confused biwi goes angry then silent treatment then rona then hugging - me bhi confusiya from her behaviour re
But he knows woh aisi hi hai - so nice
And yahan toh doston ne bhi gifts tayaar rakhe hain
Can't wait for their trip

Forever firstie is back

Loved it and waiting for more

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