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Posted: 10 years ago
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Welcome to the forum
wonderful SS 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you so much everyone!!. Really appreciate you all taking time to read, to like and comment on my story. It encourages me to sit down and write :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 3

Rao Mamrakh, Hansabai, Phhol aur Ajabde Bhojan kaksh main upastit the aur Kunwar Pratap ki raah tak rahe the. "Ajabde, aap jara Kunwar Pratap ko leke aayiye. Hum to bhool hi gaye, unhe to kaksh ka raasta pata hi nahi hoga". "Ji Maasa" Ajabde walked off to get Kunwar Pratap. Phool became restless as time passed and a a bit sad when she saw Ajabde and Kunwar Pratap walkin alongside with an ease and comfort of as if had known each other from along time.

"Hansa Maasi, der aane ke liye shama chahte hain". "Arey nahi nahi Kunwar Pratap. Virajiye". Pratap ate to his hearts content. "Maasi khana bahut uttam hain,. Aap to bilkul hamare maasa jaise khana banati hain jo dil khush kar deta hain."

"Arey Kunwar Pratap yeh khana humne nahi Ajabde ne banaya hain" .

Pratap looked at Ajabde with appreciation in his eyes "Ajabde app to bahut guni hain". Ajabde blushed not able to take so much appreciation from him. Phool was fuming inside watching this exchange.

After dinner, Phool walked off without saying a thing to Ajabde, which she found a bit odd. After finishing her work, Ajabde went to see Phool in her room and found Phool throwing her things in her suitcase.

"Arey rey Phool aap yeh kya kar rahi hain".

"Ajabde hum ja rahe hain yahase. Aap to humse katai baat mat kijiye".

"Arey hua kya hain yeh to bata dijiye. Aise kyun gussa ho rahi ho. Agar humse koi galti ho gayi to hum shama mangte hain"

"Ajabde humne kyun rok rahi hain. Ab to aapke naye mitra ho gaye hain na, who Kunwar Pratap"

"Kya.. Kunwar Pratap.. aur hamare mitra. Yeh aap kya keh rahi hain Phool."

"Phir nahi to kya. Humne dekha hain appko unke saath. Kitni sahaj thi aap unke saath. Jaise app hamare saath hote ho".

Ajabde had never thought about this. Yes she did feel comfortable with him bit she had barely known him for a day or 2. "Phool aisi koi baat nahi hain. Humne nahi pata aapko aisa kyun laga. Weh to hamare Atithi hain, isiliye unka adhik dhyan rakh rahi thi. Aur hum unhe jaante hi kitna hain jo weh ya hum unke mitra banenge.. Sakhi to aap hain hamari.. sabse Priya aue sabse nikat".

This melted phool "Sach Ajabde? Pata hain humne na kitni jalan ho rahi thi aapko Kunwar Pratap ke saath dekhkar. Aisa laga jaise hamari sabse priya mitra humse dur ja rahi hain.".

"Aisa kabhi ho hi nahi sakta Phool."

"Accha to humne vachan dijiye ki aap us Kunwar Pratap ke saath mitrata nahi karenge".

Ajabde was stunned by Phool's demand. "Phooo..ool, aise vachan..lekin woh".

"Vachan Dijiye Ajabde nahi to hum abhi is waqt Marwar ke liye nikal jayenge aur phir bhool jayega humne sada ke liye".

Ajabde was in a fix, she thinks to herself."Vaise to Kunwar Pratap humse mitrata karna kyun chahenge. Yeh to asambhav hain. To hum Phool ko vachan dene main itna hichkicha kyun rahe hain. Kya Phool ki mitrata se adhik hum Kunwar Pratap se mitrata karna chahte hain.. nahi nahi aisa katai nahi ho sakta.

"Phool hum vachan dete hain, ki hum Kunwar Pratap se Mitrata Nahi karenge."

Hearing this Phool embraced Ajabde. A tear rolled out fro Ajabde's eye. What was this tear for.. Is my heart crying on a friendship lost which had not even started...

The next day, Pratap was awakened by a bhajan which he instantly recognized as Ajabde's voice. The morning soon tuned to noon, Pratap did not have any friend in Bijolia. He was missing talking to his friends, missing his Ranima. And hence he was looking for Ajabde who he thought could be his friend whom he could chat with.But as if Ajabde had disappeared in thin air. When he was walking towards dangal stal, he heard Ajabde' voice and went in that direction.

"Ab aap hi batao Laxmi. Hum kya Karen. Phool ne aisa vachan le liya hain. Pata nahi mann main bahut dwand utha hain..kya sahi hain aur kya galat".

"Accha to aap yaha hain. Aur hum aapko pure mahal main dhoond rahe the."

"Aap humne dhund rahe the..kyun kuch kaam tha kya"

"So aapka aur ek gun yeh bhi ki aap jaanwaron se baatein kar let hain" Pratap said mischeviously.

"Woh Laxmi bhi hamari saheli hain"

"Laxmi..to inka naam bhi hain"

"Haan. To aap keh rahe the ki aapko kuch kaam tha" Ajabde just wanted this conversation to end so that she could go away. But Pratap seemed to have all the time in the world. At that moment, she saw Phool . Phool saw Kunwar pratap and decided to hide behind a grass storage.

"Ajabde, hum .. who hum yaha kisko jaante nahi. Hamare yaha koi mitra bhi nahi hain. Aur dajiraj ke aadesh ke anusar humne yaha kuch din mukkam karna hain. Humne apne maan ki baat hamari rani maa ko ya hamare mitro se karna accha lagta hain..lekin yaha to dono bhi nahin. To hum..."

Ajabde stared into his eyes "To..."

"To kya aap humse mitrata karenge. Humne na jaane kyun aisa lagta hain ki aap hamari bahut acchi mitra ban sakti hain".

This declaration from Pratap, stunned Ajabde. She had never thought that someone like Kunwar Pratap would think her worthy of his friendship. She was so happy and she was about to open her mouth to give her positive answer when her eyes fell on Phool. Phool who had anger written all over her face and who was reminding Ajabde of the vachan given by her.

Ajabde's eyes brimmed with tears. She looked at Pratap who was confused by the sudden color drain from her face. He thought he had just seen a flicker of smile when he had asked for her friendship but something else had taken place of it..something which he could not pace a finger on.

"Nahin..Nahin hum aapse mitrata nahi kar sakte".. Every word uttered by Ajabde felt like thorns pearcing his heart.

"Kya...Matlab.. Nahin ..Mitrata Nahin" Pratap was too shocked to assemble everything.

Ajabde dashed off before Pratap could ask anything more.

"Aise kaise keh sakti hain Ajabde..Humse mitrata bhi nahi karni unko..Aisa humne kya manga tha. Pehli baar laga ki koi ladki hamari mitra ho sakti hain. Humne aise laga tha ki Ajabde humne samaj sakti hain..Lekin hum galat the. Bilkul galat".

Tears gathered in his eyes, which he could not relate to as he was a warrior and warriors never cried..

Wiping them off and with a determination only known to him he walked off in the sunset towards the mahal.


Hope you all like this dwand of friends..:)


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Posted: 10 years ago
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amazing updaate
do update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update!
Feel sad for Pratap 😭
Loved it! Updates soon ❤️
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Awesome update
Do update soon 😉
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Nice update😃
awww... poor pratu😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting start. Looking forward to reading more.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you so much friends for the likes and lovely comments. Will be posting the next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 4


Ajabde sat near her fav place her window seat overlooking the garden. Tears were streaming down her eyes.. She had seen the hurt in Kunwar Pratap's eyes when she had declined his friendship..never in her life had she hurt anyone..and the first time she had to, was the one person she never wanted to.. She did not understand what she felt for him but just knew that she felt safe and most comfortable with him..
"Dard bhi unhe diya Jo itne saaf dil ke hain...Krishna Bhagwan aap to sab jaante hain na. To aap samjhaye na humne.."
"Arey Ajabde kisko samjhana hain"
Wiping her tears off Ajabde replied "kisiko nahi Phool."
"Hum jaante hain aap humse naraz hain Lekin hum Kya kare"
"Phool humne is vishay pe koi charcha nahi karni. Chaliye bhojan ke liye ma ne bulaya hain"
Phool had never seen Ajabde so upset... She meekly followed Ajabde.
Entering the bhojan kaksh, Ajabde's eyes started searching for Kunwar Pratap but did not find him there. They sat down to eat and Hansa bai mentioned. "Pata nahin Kunwar Pratap ko Kya hua. Unhone sandesha bhijwaya ki unhe bhook nahi hain .shayad apne ghar ki yaad aayi hogi"
"Masa aap unse mili?"
"Nahi Ajab.. Itna Kaam tha ki humne fursat hi nahi mili"
"Hum unhe dekh kar Aate hain".
"Haan Ajab yeh accha rahega.. Aap jayiye"
As Ajabde left the room to go to Pratap's, Phool stopped her "Ajabde aapko jaane ki kya jarurat hain. Aapko aapka vachan to yaad hain na"
"Phool humne hamara vachan yaad hain. Lekin hamara vachan humne apna kartavya karne se nahi rok sakta aur na aap bhi. Kunwar parra hamare atithi hain aur unka dhyaan rakhna hamara kartavya hain. Woh hum kisi bhi sirat main karenge" Ajabde's determined reply stunned Phool and she retreated.
"Humne itna sahas kaise aaya. Isse pehle Humne kabhi bhi Phool se aise baat nahi ki. Kunwar Pratap ke liye aaj humne Phool ka virodh Kiya...yeh sab sochna band kijiye Ajabde, Abhi jake dekhiye Kunwar pratap kasie hain" thought Ajabde

From the time he came back to his mahal..he was not in his right state of mind. He had declined dinner too. He was just not able to understand why Ajabde had refused his friendship.. What wrong had he done. He hated it when he did not have answers. And even after thinking so much he was not able to find a good reason for Ajabde's refusal. According to his Ranima he was a very good son, his praja thought of him in high regards and his friends considered him a very loyal and good friend so what had he done to Ajabde. "Pehli baar humne laga ki hum ek ladki se dosti kar sakte hain. Ajabde ke saath vaise to bahut kam shan saath vyatit kiye Lekin unke saath ek Thehrav.. Sukoon sa laga."
"Bas Ab bas. Ab bilkul nahi sochenge hum is bare main. Pratap Singh naam hain hamara. Agar weh nahi chahti humse mitrata to na sahi..." His brains were making him think logical but his heart was in pain.. In his pain, he took of his abhushan and threw it.. The pearls from the abhushan scattered and one of them found the tip of Ajabde's feet who had just entered his room.
She started picking up the pearls. "Humne grantho main padha hain ki apne krodh par niyantran rakhna chahiye. Krodh se prashn nahi sulajte."
Pratap turned to face her. Even in his anger he could only stare at her as she collected all the pearls and his abhushan. As she walked towards him, Pratap felt all his anger draining out.
"Kunwar Pratap!!!" Zapped Pratap back to senses. "Ji..."
"Aap theek hain"
"Haan"
"To bhojan ke liye kyun nahi aaye. Krodh bhojan pe nahi nikalna chahiye. Ann devta ka apman hota hain. Aur jitna humne aapko jaana hain aap to aisa nahi chahenge"
"Accha to aap humko itna jaanti hain to Kya aap hamare el sawaal ka jawab dengi?"
She knew what would his question be. But she had to face it one day. "Ji puchiye"
"Aaj jab humne aapse hamari mitra hone ke liye kaha to aapne inkaar Kiya, Kya aap humne uska karan bata sakte hain. Isse shayad hamare Mann main Jo dwand chal raha hain woh to shant hoga."
"Kunwar Pratap..."
Pratap was looking at her expectantly.
"Kunwar pratap. Aapne humne aapki mitrata ke kabil samjha yeh hamara saubhagya hain. Humne usko svikruti nahi di isme Aapki koi galti nahi yeh to hamara durbhagya hain. Kai baar insaan apne dil ka na sunkar kisi vachan ya kisi vyakti ke hisaab se chalta hain. "
"Iska matlab apne kiseke dabav main aakar aisa Kiya"
"Hey bhagwan yeh humne Kya keh diya. Kunwar pratap ke saamne humne apna mann kaise Khol diya." She did not know what to say.
Pratap was watching her expressions minutely. And he understood that there was more than meets the eye.
"Kunwar Pratap, Woh.. aisa kuch nahi hain"
"accha...to kaise hain"
"Kunwar Pratap Hum asha karte hain ki aap hamari bhavnaon ka maan rakhenge aur is vishay par aur prashn nahi karenge"
"Ajabde... Abhi ke liye humne yeh jaankar khushi hain ki aap dilse hamari mitrata svikarna chahte the. Karan to hum jaan hi lenge aapki na ka. Pratap Singh Naam hain hamara. Aur aap svikar kare U.S. Na kare hum aapko sadaiv hamara mitra manenge"
Ajabde had all her feeling knotted. Scared of baring all her emotions throught her eyes, she lowered them to her feet. Sensing her nervousness Pratap said "Aisa vyatit ho raha hain ki aapko bahut gussa aa raha hain..isse pehle aap kuch utha ke humne mare..humne bhojan ke liye prasthan karna chahiye"
"Nahi nahi humne gussa nahi aaya hain aur hum aapko marenge" Ajabe raised her eyes to see Kunwar Pratap miling mischeaveously. And she understood... "Chaliye aap kuch boli to"
Ajabde smiled "Chaliye Bhojan karne"
"Avashya"
And they started walking side by side...different determination in both.
Pratap with the determination to find the truth of Ajabde's refusal with a renewe energy that Ajabde wanted to be friends too and Ajabde determined not to feel emotional in fromt of Pratap.
Only time will tell who will succeed.
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Hope you all like this part. Was thinking of different ways to take this story forward. decided on this version.!!!!!

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