praja os: trust..this all what i want..

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I know i have to update the part of my other story but couldn't stop my self to write this..
It continue from last episode where prtap ask ajabde to say sorry to DB..
At night:
Ajabde is standing in the balconey in their room..yes it is their room now..Her n Prtap..today it's theirsuhagrat.. Full room is decoratedwith flowers n diyas..she shoild wait for him sitting on bed.. If this thought would have come in her mind some hours ago she would have been blushing n quit exciting but right now there are different thoughts that running in her mind... Where she stands in Prtap's life...obviously she doesn't wanted to become his priority but still she is his wife..why he never listen her... Why he never..never trust her... Would she spent her entire life proving her self or say sorry to whomever prtap ask...
No now she was not that timid ajabde...
When he left her in bijolia after fight and he had said her that he still remember her n all.. Then he come to take her to chittor..she was so happy that prtap finally believe her that she was not the reason for her mother's departure... Without any proof because finally his heart belive her ..trust her..that's why she came with him to his place without fussing over past.. She wanted a freah start thats why she forget all accusations all bad mouthing about her..all that prtap said to her...she forget all..but not to face these again... Today prtap didn't give her any chamce to explain the situation..he was right that his motber must be hurt but what about her..he was not even ready to listen her point...
The sound of opening the doors broke her trance..she didn't turn she knew it is him...
Prtap closed the door..he was anticipated that ajabde would be sitting on their decorated bed.. The room was looking beautiful... But here she was standing in balcony.. He know that he behaved harshly with her but she was wrong.she should not have told anything to his ranima...
Prtap went n stood beside her..
Prtap: Aap naraz he humse??.
Ajabde: Nhi to hum to bas yuhi.. She turn to leave but prtap held her hand...
Prtap: Ajabde hum jante he aap humse naraz he.. Lekin apne jo kiya wo galt tha..
At this ajabde again her hurted..
Ajabde: Smiles but it was smile of hurt..
Prtap: Ajabde agar aapne rani ma se kshama manh li to kya ve gumse badi he..
Ajabde: Bit angrily: Kunwar prtap...
Hum kabhi bado ke samne jukne ka bura nhi mante.. Or nahi unse kshama mangne ka.. Ha humne choti ma se vo sab kaha kyunki hum chahte the ki vo maan ki galtfemiyan dur kare... Kya aap chahte he ke maan apni hi ma ke bare me ye sab soche..unse grina kare..nhi na..humne rani ma se ye sab kaha kyunki rani ma hi unka bram dur kar sakti he.. Hum to chahte the ki kisike man kisi ko lekar koi sandeh na rhe..kya humne galt kiya..
Prtap understand her point..
Prtap: Ajabde hum nhi..
Ajabde: Yhi to samsya he kp aap kabhi hum par vishwas nhi karte.. Kabi hume apni bat bolne ka moka nhi dete...hum jante he ki ranima ko jankar pida hui he par kya ye sahi hota ki maan humesha k liye apni hi mata se dur ho jaye... Kp hum bhi rani ma ka utna hi aadar or sanman karte he jitna aap karte he par shayd aapko hum par vishwas hi nhi he...
Prtap: Hume kshama kar dijiye ajabde..
Ajabde: Kunwar prtap hum nhi chahte ki aap humse kshama mange.. Aapka adhikar he humpe aapke kehne par to hum apni jan bi de sakte he kp..hum bas chahte he ki aap hum par thoda vishwas kare..kya hum bahot adhik mang rhe he aapse 😭
With that she left from there ..
Prtap: Ajabde..
Ok just wanted ajabde to stood for herself n give prtap his piece of mind...hope u like it... Now may be prtap will manofy her n that vl lead to ahem..ahem...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice dear hope in the show too hey show Ajabde's point of respect n anger!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing please continue soon would love to pratap magnofy ajab
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Posted: 10 years ago
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superb update Divi...🤗...waiting for next ahem ahem...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rashi04

superb update Divi...🤗...waiting for next ahem ahem...


What ahem ahem girl..its just one shot..but ya u going to get ahem ahem 😳 in that story...i vl update on friday 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: pari0706

Amazing please continue soon would love to pratap magnofy ajab


Its just a one shot m not gng to continue this sory but ya vl update last part of my other story on friday..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing update...
Glad to read about the strong Ajabde...
The CV should portray Ajabde just like how you describe her...
Please write more stories about Praja...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Divi.C


Its just a one shot m not gng to continue this sory but ya vl update last part of my other story on friday..



ooh that's a shame but after finishing the other story you should definately write more 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I'm hooked to your stories..isko OS kyun banaya - please ek aur chapter add karo na - show pratap manofying ajab and learning from his mistake...pretty please with a cherry on top 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: twilightlover29

I'm hooked to your stories..isko OS kyun banaya - please ek aur chapter add karo na - show pratap manofying ajab and learning from his mistake...pretty please with a cherry on top🤗


First of all thank u so much for comenting.. And this is os only.. I have already write how prtap manofy ajabde in my other story.. So dnt hv another ideA for it.. So m soo sory.. But ya i vl write another os for praja...

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